*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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RebeccaDaphne

@RebeccaDaphne

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Lovely chapter! Enjoyed the suhaag raat bed part, hilarious! 😆I can actually imagine Khushi wondering about the mirror! Nice story Wiwy!

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: raniluvsasr
Hey thnxx for d pm,loved d update. Amazingly good. Very well written.. Oh god i like d saleman already. Very well written. Enjoyed evry bit of the update. Keep updating

You like Mr. Sharma? Take him! He is all yours!😆

Thankyou so very much for liking and commenting!

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: ForLoveofBarun
Nice! Loved the description of the bed. Loved the way you described the intensity of the moment. Imagining ASR with 'THE' look - oooh! was so worth it.☺️❤️

😉

🤗

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: cheesemad
lovely update...
haye cute couple...
continue soon:)

Thanks Komal! 🤗How was your History Project?!

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: lalarukh
😆 hahahahaha...i am short of words in ur praise :)...too good

Awww! 😳

Thankyou and take care 🤗

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

@ roshaan ⭐️ and @ melonie⭐️

So you are sure they will be back for the SR bed, eh?! 😉

Okay! Will keep that in mind!😆

Thanks!🤗

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: 1rocks
Hey...

Awesome updates...It was very funny and cute...

I knew long back she would buy the first bed...I don't know why but i thought...

Everybody knows they make a lovely and a crazy couple...Arshi are the best...

Loved the ending where both of them just started laughing...Was there any reason for that???

Thnx for the PM and do continue soon !

It struck them suddenly how funny the situation was!😃

Okay will try to edit this part in the chapter so that you can understand better!😃

Thanks for the comment.⭐️I really appreciate it!⭐️

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rakenduvadana

@rakenduvadana

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#248

thanks for the pm

ha ha ha ha

ths is wht i did when i read the update

kushi is in such a naive girl

finally arnav started falling for her

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Putija

@PutijaChalhov

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#249

When will they learn but a humorous scene wiwy loved this update and Mr Sharma reassures hem about buying the suhaag bed😉😆

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athira ramesan

@Athirajagan

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#250

wow...ur story is just awesome. ...pls make arshi in love quickly. ...don't create too much prblm btwn dem I mean other love clashes...keep updating. ..want 2 see their romantic moments 😉 😉