ARSHI FS-FROM YOU AND ME TILL US UPDATED 26/9

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SARUNIAN!!!!

@luv.u.rubletin

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

It was a wonderful start!! :D

waiting for next part... :)

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Sona257

@Sona257

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

U write it sooo beautifully!!

I really wished it really happened in our show..

but it never came.. I'm glad u r writing it

I already love this story!!

Can't wait for the next part!!

Please Update SoOoN

Edited by Sona257 - 12 years ago

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sumond

@sumond

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

A very nice beginning, its always a pleasure to read anything that you write. Pls so continue, and thanks a ton for the pm

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Mahnoor

@rockprincess123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Didi, didi, didi...!!!

Ahh, akhir aap aya! Mein itni khush hoon aap ki yeh tofa se kee mein aap ko nahin bata sakti!

Thank you for the wonderful gift and I wish you too a happy belated ArShi/IPKKND Anniversary!! You couldn't have given us a better gift dear and your FS was beautiful!

A mindblowing start to it all and I loved how it started off from one of the biggest turning events in IPKKND (The kidnap) that really helped ArShi's relationship tp progress.

I felt everything with the flowing motion of your writing, from Khushi's insecurity, her undying and eternal love for Arnav, the comfort and solace she finds in his embrace and presence, the love she recieves from him but most of all the contentment and happiness on her face knowing that her Arnavji is safe and sound and back home with her at last.

You really moved me when you mentioned how scared and terrified Khushi had been when she found Arnav wasn't next to her in the bed later in the night. Poor girl, she had gotten so used to Arnav not being there with her, so much so she imagined him constantly and craved for a glimpse of him yet when she finally got to see him after so long, he suddenly seemed to vanish. Even though he didn't of course.

I loved how finally after so long those two were reunited. I love how they were both able to comfort each other in their own embrace, even without words. I love how they were both able to express their love for each other with the power of their loving eyes. But most of all, I love how they finally, after much awaited moments, managed to spend a night together, sleeping in each others arms in a rightly promised peaceful slumber.

Loved it. Absolutely loved it dear! Cannot wait for the next part, you rock!!

I am waiting for ASR! Zindagi aur maut ka sawal hain! ;)

Lots of love, Noor :)) xxx

Edited by rockprincess123 - 12 years ago