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Posted: 12 years ago
zuby--uski koi zarurat nahi hai😆😆 main mere arjun ko bolke sikky ka patta cut karwa dungi...😆😆
aur mera name shona nahi hai wo to bas username hai and m not sweet also😆😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
UNRES**
Di thank u that u like my comment & get motivated. Its my humble honour. And ofcourse I can imagine how huge fan you are of ACP Rathod 😃

coming to update. Finaly Mr. & Mrs. Rathod in town & its time to restart of Dulhan haunt for Sameer again 🤣 but ofcourse this time Suman ji shouldn't have take pressure coz Sameer has already found her out 😉

Mona, She is such a sweetheart. I remember I also used to do the same at childhood. jahan jati thi wahan me logo ki dimag kharab kar deti thi calling bell press kar kar ke 😆 😆 & She is the perfect sister for ACP Rathod too. Kamal ki investigation ki hai Sameer ki sari shopping, home arranging & blushing ke barein me 😆

vaise kamal ki investigation to Bittu & Sumanji ne bhi kiya hai. pura ka pura ghar hi smart hai. Specialy ladies 😉

Aww Annu & sasuma toh mil bhi liye on boutique. Acchi baat hai ek kaam pehle se ho gaya 😛 but bechari ki Sasuma ki ane se Sameer se baat kam ho gayi 😕 but koi nehi zindegi bhar toh ussi se batein hoti rahegi 😛 😳

Arjun's parents are too coming on Birthday party..hm very interesting. Dono bete ki hone wali bohuyon se mil lenge 😉 I am eagerly waiting for the party.

You wrote it very very nicely di & I enjoyed reading it a lot. Update the next sooner 🤗
Edited by -sree13- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
super awesome update


loved it...

all characters going too sweet..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

pls pls yaar ...inka na engagement karado

Thanks dear!!!!! 😊
Bahut jaldi hi inki engagement hogi 😉... don't worry 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
@khemanisarita, @unishaz, @Ila, @Christee, @Aabish_02, @mastmegha22, @NainaSM, @Leki, @pinkerbell, @pihu, @Mithuz, @DesiiiDivaaa
Thanks to all of you for liking it ... update coming soon 😊
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@Ila - jaise Riya Annu ko tease karti hai, waise Mona apne bhai ko 😉, Au Aunty ji ko bahut jaldi sab pata chalne wala hai 😉
@Christee - yes... Mona is a cutie pie... uski life mein bhi pyar aane wala hai 😉, Anwesha ka to blushing abhi shuru hua hai 😉
@mastmegha22 - Anwesha is also in love with Sam 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shona14

ahaan so sam k mom-dad aa gaye😊 and mona bhi 😉😆

sam ki maa to jhat se samajh gayi ki all that was done by sumone else😆
ye mona kitni shaitaan hai...she was teasing his elder brother...poor sam😆
mona was ryt dulhan jaisa sharma raha tha sam😆😳
wo sam ki mom aur mona jisse boutique mein mile wo annu hi thi na😃 hey bhagwan kitna sharmaati hai ye ladki uff😆
oh ho so kuch asar to annu ko bhi ho raha hai 😉 she was missing sam itni restless matlab kuch to hua hai kuch ho gaya hai😃
chalo aaj ek song annu k liye ho jaye😊--

Aahista aahista
Mujhe yakeen ho gaya
Aahista aahista
Yeh dil yahin kho gaya

Yun gira gira hai chand ya
Teri hai roshni
Yun udi udi si hai zameen
Aahista

Ho' ho'.ho'..
Hua yeh pehli baar
Ho'ho'ho..
Mujhe ho gaya hai pyaar


awesum update di loved it...😃 aapne to precap bhi nahi diya batao...ab party mein kya hoga m waiting waiting😊

Thanks dear 😊
Wo Maa hai... aur unko pata hai ki wo jab har baar aati hain... to ghar ki kya halat hoti hai... aur unka beta akele khud se ye karey... impossible 😉
Ab jaise Riya apni Di ko tease karti hai waise Mona apne Bhai ko tease karti hai 😉
Haan... wo Annu hi thi, Annu wale part mein likha hai maine 😉
Haan... jaise pehle Sam usko miss kar raha tha, jab Annu ne ussey baat karni band kar di thi, waise hi ab wo Sam ko miss kar rahi hai...
And the perfect song... Annu ko bhi Sam se pyar ho hi gaya hai 😉
Party to bahut baad ki baat hai... ye socho party ke pehle kya hoga 😉
Update coming soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: devildiva21

hey so very sorry for the late comment...!!😃😳

just read last 11 parts together...!!!😳
and all of them were superbly awesome fantastic.. amazing...!!
wow a new girl in etf... forensic expert...!!! aww she is very cute...!!
are wah usko dekhte hi shree ko kuch kuch hone laga...!!😆 love how he was eager to spend some time with her...!!!
wow.. basketball practice start haan...!!
bechara shree... kay mast phansa hai😆 his expressions were awesome...aur chottu ne bhi uska saath nai diya...!!! poor guy... kya bahane bnaye hai...
hmm so sameer also has the knowledge that wo bhane bna rha h😆
omg the way chottu and rii were teasing shree and navika...!!😆 navika bhi blushing blushing...
wow girls on shopping spree...!! cool..!!
ariya practice was amazing...!!
ahem arjun noticing riya and her figure... yup men will always be men😆
hmmm so arjun ko bhi khaabar ho rhi h ki sam ke sath kuch to gadbad hai😉
roshni's sharad was definately an ice breaker between the two...!!
loved the fb...!!
from sameer and arjun's pov...!!
so the girl whom sameer saved was arjun's roshni's...!!!
hahhaha his frustation whenever someone talked about marriage😆
wow kya surprise laya h arjun...!!!!
yaha se start hui rosh sam ki dosti...!!!
to ye chakkar hai arjun aur uske krishna ji ka...!!
loved rosh and sam's convo about marriage and love...!!! their thoughts were really beautiful...
and sam arjun ki dosti wow...!!!
dheere dheer... its getting on track... love how they still understood each other's hints... and decided to talk out...!!
and i completely loved their talks...!! purani dosti jaise baatien... the way they were teasing each other😆 wow sam talking like shree.. and even beat him in his game😆
awww riya and anvesha...!!! both were so sad...!!!😭
loved sam arjun's concern for riya.. and asked for the reason behind her sadness...!!
omg so that's why anvesha is like this... she blames herself/her birthday for her father's death...!!! feeling so bad for her...!!
sam arjun's idea was very nice...
so sam is gonna talk to annu...!!! sam ko acha mauka mila.. dosti badane ka...!!! aur ye baat arjun s ekaha chupni thi😆
ariya scenes were very lovely...!! they way he samjhaofied her and helped her.. omg he even wanted to come to the party...!!😲
sam annu moments were very sweet...!! aww he was desperate to talk to her😆
chalo first attempt to fail.. koi nai aage bht se mauke hai...!!😉
durga maa ka mandir wala part was very sweet...! <3 <3
and that saree scene... bhabhi ji😆 sameer is too naughty he didn't even correct the salesman's mistake...!!!
wow he was so lost in her... and he even bought a saree for annu as a gift cool...!!
chalo beach pe aake hi sai.. baat to hui friendship hui yayyy...!!
the way he made her understand was lovely and heart touching...!!!
glad she understood what he is saying and is trying to move on...!! and didn't get mad at riya for the party and actually enjoyed it...!! the song was lovely as ever...
and arjun opened up infront of everyone... that scene was very beautiful...!!!
arni convo was amazing...!!!
sissy's bonding time was lovely... but ye kya... annu misunderstood sam...!! and didn't even take his calls... he was so restless to talk to her...!!
finally he decided to confront her... and am so happy all their MU got clear...!!!
sam's pov was awesome... couldn't help but smiling at them... kay kay sapne sajaye hai sam ne...!!
wow now annu's gonna help him clean the apartment and make it a home...!!
her reactions on seeing the dirts.. and sam's pouts!!!🤣 ajtak kaam ni kiya... aur ab dekho...!!! teh way she made him do the work...!!😆
arjun is almost connecting the dots...!!! ab uski nazro se bachna to bhi mushkil nai...!!!
sam ke reactions whwn annu told him that arjun has suggested a boy for marriage🤣 ariya ban gye prem khani mai villain...!!!😆
yes.. annu also has feelings for him...!!!🥳
and she for the first time did what her heart told her to do... and riya understood that...!!!awww both sissy's talks were amaizng... the way she was teasing annu.. 😆
ariya moment in between when arjun came to comfort her lovely./... <3 <3 <3
akhir rii ki baat sach ho hi gayi.. sam proposed her...!! and his proposal/confession was lovely simple and romantic...!!! aww hope she says yes soon...!! hmm so arjun ke btaye hue ladke se milne ka wait ho rha hai... are wo to sam hi hai.. can't wait to see their reactions jab unhe ye pta chalega...!!!
wow ek sath do do propose... shree navika ki to nikal padi...!! sidha marriage proposal...!!!
love the way chottu and riya were teasing them and made them propose...!!!
so riya is also thinking about her feelings for her arjun sir...!!! great...!!
finally arjun saw annu sam together...!! ab aayga mazza...!!!😉😆
ohh haan bittu sam confrontation kaise bhul sakte...!! it was very hillarious...!!🤣 kya din aagye hai... ab to sab ko pta lag gya h kuch to gadbad hai... waise sai waqt pe sameer ak dimag chala and kya chup karwaya 😆
omg am loving this blushing sam...1! <3 <3 <3
finally his parents are here and so is his shaitaan sis...!! ab inse kuch chupna bhi thodi possible tha... love the way they were teasing him and he again blushed awww...!!!!
annuu bhi apni future MIL se mil li...!!! and she even complimented her...!! chalo sasu ma to patt gyi...!!😉😆
and her gift for her sam's mother... awesome...!! ab kya hoga party mai?😉
continue soon...!!
Can't wait to see everyone's reactions on seeing annu sam together...!!



Thanks a lottt dear...🤗... 😊... that was a marathon 😊... and it takes a lot of patience to write review on 11 parts at one go... (i'm too lazy to do that 😉).
This really motivates me... All ur analysis is perfect...
Annu is very soon going to say "yes" to Sam 😊
Shree ne bhi seedha shadi ke liye propose kar hi diya... kahin uski bhi shadi ki umar dhal na jaye 😉
Ariya ki story abhi thodi slow hai... i'm just writing a few moments for them, before they get into a relationship 😊
Ab Sam ki band bajne wali hai 😉
Party se pehle bahut kuch baaki hai 😉
Stay tuned 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Carrie-

😆😆😆


Moms & sisters really have a nose for hanky pankys in the lives of their menfolk Its never rocket science to sense when their affection has begun to divide.😳 Very naturally captured.👏

Good Maaji Sa noticed Annu in the store & liked what she saw👍🏼 Thank u for the tip. Me too should pass smiles to aunties looking at me in malls or wherever.I always look thru those poor oldies😕.Who knows?🤔 Kisi Arjun ya Shaleen type ki mom nikli toh? Par sabko dekh ke hasoongi toh pagal toh nai samjhenge na?🤪

Ab party time.Kolhapur se meri bhi Aatya Bai aa rahin hai!

Waitinggg...😃

Thanks dear! Very well written!👍🏼


Thanks dear 😊
😆😆😆😆... ur first line literally cracked me up ...
Annu passed a smile to Maa ji Sa because she had seen her photo and Annu very well knew that this lady is her Sam's Maa Embarrassed ...
If u try this trick with stranger aunties ... to jaise tumne kaha... sachmuch pagal hi samjhenge 😆😆😆
yes... you Aatya Bai coming 😉... will be posting her photo just before the update ... Stay tuned 😉
Unka swagat karne ke liye taiyar raho...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth

wow...i guess this ws the most simplest yet cute update of th whole story...

it really feels great whn we meet our own family after intervals...i knw this feeling very well...

Sameer mst b so happy...

nd Sam's mom is too so sharp...yeah why nt afterall she is mom of ACP Rathod na...

nd this bittu...pretty little devil...he is so cute...kind of an informer of Mrs. Rathod

Thnx for dat Mona Sameer scene...it reminded me of smthng...

i jst love Priyal Gor...ws a biig fan of her during RMJ..

Thanks dear 😊
Yes... I kept it short and simple because my focus was more on family re-union 😊
I didn't want to add too many things into it ...
I know that feeling too 😊
yes... Sam is very happy... Sam's mom ki sharpness to abhi aur dikhegi aane waley parts mein... and u r right... Sameer Rathod ki Maa hai...😉
Bittu...he can be... but... no... he cant afford to be Mrs Rathod informer... Mrs Rathod ke wapas janey ke baad Rathod uska encounter nahi kar dega 😉😉😉
Mona - Sameer ... it was just a part of Riya - Annu teasing 😉
Even I liked Priyal in RMJ... no idea why she was replaced 😕
DEK was kind of boring 😕
Stay tuned... there is smthing special for Mona in upcoming part 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth

for Sameer:

i hv one song for him...
"bachke rehna re baba...bachke rehna re...
bachke rehna re baba...tujhpe najar hai..."

agar aisi investigative family ho...(including dat bittu) ...fir to kisi ko bachke hi rehna padega...

bt he ws caught off guard...kitne cutely baat kar raha tha Annu se...
their talk seemed like a convo of a long time relationship couple's...

nw i m waiting to see Sameer's lovey dovey romantic avatar...vid Annu...

PS: can we get a Sam-Annu romantic dance in future...

😆😆😆
Actually u r right, Sameer jitni jldi apni haar maan lega utna hi uske liye achchha hoga 😉
Maa, Mona aur Bittu ke saath Arjun bhi to hai... wo to sabse bada devil hai 😈
Yes... he was caught off guard... bechara kitni bhi koshish kar le... Annu ka khayal aatey hi blush karne hi lagta hai...
uspar sirf ek line fit baithti hai
"Mitwaaa... Ishq pe Zor Nahiii"
Don't worry... Sam-Annu romance and their romantic dance... dono aa rahey hain...😉

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