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Posted: 11 years ago
I enjoyed reading the story!..very nice..
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Posted: 11 years ago
I m not convinced,Saiyu..
Sarun working together has very slim chances..
But I pray
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I hope u'll write something 4 ur readers...
Is Arhi magic no more working 4 u??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! It was amazing! Read it one go and needlessly to say I love it. I love this Akash who is very cute and adorable to me. U portrayed him very nicely. I always wanted Akash to have a normal relationship with Arnav . What I mean is normal that in this story Akash did behave like a younger sibling.He gave help,teases and make fun of Arnav . Also they share a sibling bond where they feel comfortable. Which we didn't saw much on the show.
Kushi and Arnav ...at first their meeting was hilarious . It was funny how Arnav describe his imaginary future girlfriend to Akash. I was like is he gone crazy...seriously talking with his younger brother about beautiful eye ,long hair and lips. Kushi, she is strong, crazy and very cute. She never scared to fight back aganist her boss or her facke boyfriend. She was crying on her shuhag raath for her parents and Arnav being considerable husband. He took kushi to her parents house on their shuhaag raath... I wish I could get a sweet husband like him. So finally Arnav realised his love on chapter 20 and he confessed to her buzi...it was hilarious and kushi overheard it. Chapter 8 was my most favorite. It was f##### funny.
Anjali, our pujali :-). Bass I just love her. U used many dialogues from the show.and it reminded me the good old days.
I didn't like the last chapter . May be its from dissapointment that the ss already come to an end.
I like the facts that u dedicated various writer on ur each chapter. Which were very informative for me since I get to know many fantastic writer and their writing which were unknown to me. Oh also I get to know u as a person. I think u prefer to call by the name Saiyu.. I hope I spell it right. I wad surprised that lazyleave ur younger sister. I never knew the fact. I don't anyone , other then u, who has sibling in same forum

Hates of ur writing style... u are a fabulous writer. Thsi is my first time , I read ur story and I am regretting that why I didnt came to know ur writing much earlier. Dissapointing to know that u moved all ur stories from IF. But I respect ur decision and wish one day u wil repost all ur stories :-) so the way I will able to read😊
Wish u the best in every thing!
PS: commenting from my phone...so please accept my spelling and grammatical error.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar


AAA~ A tribute...

It all started as a plan to appease hi beloved Di
To stop her from blackmailing him emotionally
A partner he needed almost immediately
When all of a sudden she walked in, did Khushi..
An excited Akaash calling her Bhabhi
His girlfriend she would play perfectly
And she did with aplomb and full on nautanki

And pretend they did in front of family
Khushi they loved instantly
But were their feelings fake really?
Losing, and giving into destiny...
Forsaking others, giving into jealousy
Feeling the attraction mutually
A story spun so dramatically
Of how a couple they came to be..

Soon she was his fake fiance
Efforts to break up, failing miserably
It seemed almost purposely
A desire with each other to be
Now that was another story...

NK told to address her a Bhabhi
By Arnav possessively
While Khushi set a boundary
For her amused husband to be
Sheetal not to be in the vicinity
The consequences ugly...

But her, he did tease knowingly
Rise to the challenge, she would definitely
How could he not find her sexy?
Their kisses almost like electricity
Dancing with passion toTeri Meri
Mesmerised by her beauty in a saree
Where they dance in perfect symmetry
As her in tears he could not see
When she was stood by a Savita supposedly

His need for her growing tremendously
Although he claimed quite the contrary
Payal was sure, but she wanted some clarity
Although she knew and that was the irony
And one day he would it admit it surely

Shyam of their relationship still weary
Wanted to discover the reality
His plan to catch some disparity
Put his plan to motion on their mehendi

But it all backfire badly
When in Akash 's arms was seen her jiji...
Who in lucknow he would visit secretly
Payal was the one he wanted to marry
But would wait for his bhai and Bhabhi

Tempers flared on both sides equally
Putting their wedding in a jeopardy
The status of which wondered Shyam nervously
NK buying bangles to pacify Khushi
Giving rise to Lavanya's jealousy

Arnav to her house went in fury...
Her tears did appease his heart in a hurry,
So innocent and lovely
NK 's bangles did not fit he said with glee,
A wound on her he could not see

In his pocket a bandage miraculously !
Around her wrist he wrapped gingerly
Claiming them for Ma's kangans possessively
After the wedding she would wear rightfully

Her love to him she admitted spontaneously
Thrilled but scared he ran off nervously
Reaching home he realised her loved her immensely
She had by now erased the incident from her memory

She looked mesmerising as a bride to be
In all her wedding finery
But love they kept denying there to be...
Her declaration of love he wanted desperately
Determined to taste victory
But that was not to be,
Soon they were joined by matrimony
Husband and wife pronounced finally
Amidst the family smiling with glee

A tearful farewell she bade her family
In his arms he had her comfortably
Waiting to be together in privacy
Wondering how he got so lucky
Just then he was jolted out of his reverie

Games over, to their room he went excitedly
A crying Khushi he was worried to see
On their way to her parents in his SUV
Shocked to see them unexpectedly
No cause to be alarmed, he explained gently

Finally she was made to leave by buaji
Who teasingly doubted Arnav's sanity
For not being able to see beyond Khushi,
He loved her, he admitted finally
His love for her he declared openly
Not in a million years did he think it would be to buaji!

Khushi hearing his admission secretly,
Her heartbeats increasing rapidly
Homeward bound finally
The ambience perfect for their unity
But unresolved issues stood glaringly
Leading to another fight stubbornly

Love each other they did wholeheartedly
In their eyes desire burning with intensity
Forgoing pride realising their folly
Their admission come simultaneously
I love you dammit ...sounding like a melody
To be feel each other in a hurry
Joined together not just physically ...
Their souls connecting emotionally
Entwined together on a beautiful journey

The morning after left us in a quandary
Sore and stiff they woke up respectively
After their nocturnal activity
But both in different places surprisingly !
What happened suddenly?
Her Taekwondo pose ..that would be funny?
Remains another unsolved mystery!

Scenes and dialogues used effectively
Some reversed so very brilliantly
Tributes paid so fittingly
Weaved into your story
Made it hilarious and so worthy
It brought back such amazing memories
Of a show that created history!



You rock! End of story!

And Rasgullaji, you too! 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
thiss was so damn cute!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
First thing first, i wud like to start with a thank you.

THANKYOU for penning a wonderful story called AAA, i relived almost all my favourite arshi moments.

I really really liked the way you have dedicated this story to your friends/ authors...people who inspire you, and while paying ur tributes u gave non-writers like myself to indulge in more such beautiful stories by mentioning their works, thankyou again.

I truly wish, i cud read all ur works which have been removed from IF...but i guess i have missed that train and i can't help, but feel deprived. It's a real bad feeling indeed.

I became the member of the forum only to gain some info on a show which had become my addiction, reading members' posts helped me pass 23.5 hours until the next episode was aired. Needless to say I was always a silent member until very recently when my appetite for arshi cud not be satiated by watching repeats on youtube. I needed somethin more, thats when i discovered the wonderful world of fanfiction. This section of the forum has now become an inseparable part of my life. Sadly, the best of the works are no longer available on IF.
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was one of the best ff I ever read.. Just loved it.. Everythn was in proper quantity.. jealousy.. love.. fun factor.. everythn.. and I love the way you described everyone's character.. Just fab.
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Posted: 11 years ago
An Appate Affair ..I Love it ❤️
Edited by ArhiVirAnya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the story verryyy Much

I Am Glad I Read it...Will look forward to read more of your stories :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
(Ch. 16)Awww i loved this entire chapter
From the full fitted clothes to the sexy one, the teri meri dance, to his acceptance of her being sexy and the kiss☺️
Loved how the fake girlfriend manipulated so that the fake boyfriend dances with her...so much for being fake, what if they were a real couple😆
And why are they not planning to break up anytime soon, or is it that they are okay with marriage😲

(Ch.17)Loved Payal and Khushi's convo!Even i'm sure that LG will confess soonwa!I'm glad u didn't make him confess so soon, would have been kinda out of place if he did😕
That haldi scene was☺️
Did ASR actually memorize that song🤣

(Ch.18)This was fab.
i love how u twist the actual scenes and fit them in ur updates!
Arnav is so in love with her,and still in denial!
I loved Khushi's dialogue abt Akash and Dayan...made me LOL😆
Shyam and his failed plans, well, no surprise there🤣why is he even a lawyer😔

(Ch.19) Akash's sermon on Marriage was hillarious🤣
The bangles scene was one of my fav. in the show and i loved how u included that here!
Finally a confession from Khushi!

(Ch.20) shadi k din bhi daggers maar rahe hain ek dusre ko...surely a hatke couple🤣
Heck, khushi can even manipulate with her eyes, i need to learn the art from her🤣
The dual confession was bang on...with Arnav and Khushi one cud expect that type of confession!
The last bit confused the hell out of me😕

(Ch.21) Gosh Payal is such a tease, i like her this way though😆
The embarassing moment was actually damn funny🤣🤣
The whole chapter was awesome, i don't know what imp. scenes to pick out from this!

All in all, i loved this SS, made me nostalgic!I'm glad i read this, though the plot was different, it was still very very close to IPK!
I loved it completely and u are one great writer!
Thanks for writing this wonderful piece!

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