ArHiSS:AnApateAffair#4,Ch21,Pg124,(19/07)COMPLETED

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#952

Originally posted by: dj_arshifan

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serendipity.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#953

Hi Hi Hi! 😃

Yes, i started it at night, and i read all the way till the sun shone bright right IN my face. i started at 3am or something, i reckon, and and and LOL i kept reading till i was done. It had nothing but cute nok-jhoks, simple romance and humor, but it still got me hooked into reading everything as it came.

I seriously needed this... after all those dil ko choo jaane wale, rulaa dene wale fictions, Arnav's repentance, their loss, ya kabhi pyaar kabhi nafrat... this was MUCH NEEDED. I LOVE THE HUMOR YOU PUT IN THERE GIRL! & you literally took almost everything from our IPK, and so it was just like watching a better-molded, more close-to-the-heart kinda version of IPK... and i say that because there were hardly any missed kisses, plus scjagsfdcHDC WELL, do you want me to explain it all? :P

One thing i absolytely absolutely LOVED in the end (since im in a hurry and giving you a one-off comment for the whole of the FF) was when Arnav wanted a daughter & Khushi wanted a boy 😳 << HOW SWEET! ☺️ Even though this has happened many a times in the past, i, However, find it just as cute and lovely each and every time! ;)

HAH

I loved how Arnav Khushi couldnt control their tears as they saw the first ultrasound, also AAAHHH. WHYYY ARNAV SO PERFECTT? WHY WHY WHY? GOD! The way he'd put Arya and Aryan to sleep, Arya still being his favourite, his little Angel. dhsjgcasgdcasdc i can die to get an Arnav like him!

The way it started

HAHA, I can't deny... the whole FF was too filmy, and again very IPKKND-ish ... not that im complaining 😉 tehe. The way Akaash scream " BHABI!" to a mortified Khushi 🤣 God, there were so many instances in the FF that i was literally chuckling/laughing out loud, i was sure someone would enter my room and ask if i was doing fine 😆

all-in-all i just loved everything about it... yes, everything. I would love you writing more stories, please do 😳 i missed your previous one too :( im short on time. Is there any way us sincere readers could reaaad??? ☺️ Anyways, again, as i told you, im in a hurry or i'd have given a more than double-detailed comment than this is.

Take care sweets and i absolutely ADORED how you dedicated each of the updates to your friends! How sweet is that!? :)) I'd like to come up there sometime, you know... 😛

ANDDD. ZEHRA IS YOUR SISTER? FOR REAL? 😳 oooh, No wonder... khoon mai hii awesomeness hai, perhaps!!? 😉

All the loveee in the world,

~Reeno

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Revathy Sugathan Nair

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Posted: 11 years ago

#954

Seeing SaRun together is every fan's dream - but it may never happen

So let me just say that this will be the place that I can come back for Rabba ve's and nostalgia.

I respect ur decision - love u for giving us this FF sweetie 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 ❤️

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RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#955

An Apate Affair made me so angry when I read the first chapter. I thought how could you make Arnav kiss that woman. I still don't like the fact that you made him kiss HER. But that's the only thing I didn't like about An Apate Affair. You already know the rest of the story how I finally completed reading this awesome story of yours. Its a wonderful story. An amazing way to pay tribute to the epic love story of Arnav and Khushi and to our very own IPKKND. A brilliant concept. The story brought back so many memories. I have read your unnamed before and I knew you are an amazing writer. AAA proved it again. A love story that was "Fake" but was never fake. We got to see Khushi as Arnav and Arnav as Khushi. Now that is a treat for the Arshians. Ab Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon? The dedications and the in remembrance of were the two parts I liked very much apart from the story. I loved your portrayal of Arnav and Khushi. This Arnav is so cute 😳

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Shy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#956

Aww...sad that you've quit writing, but SO glad I got to read this FF.This story CRACKED me up!!! I was reading it at work and had a hard time muffling my full out laughing. Every time Anjali was in the scene, I was in splits. The pooja thali to welcome Khushi, the panicked calling on the Gods, Pujas, Vrats, awesome! Aaaw...poor Anjali. I actually really liked her in the show, I got her...why she was the way she was, but it was still hilarious to read. And Aakash, haha, what a clown in your story. It was a brilliant tribute, all the scenes and dialogues we love, but with a fresh perspective. Thanks! 😃😃
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Tanu_96

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Posted: 11 years ago

#957

Half way through the SS! Enjoying it. My comment to be up soon😊

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Tanu_96

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Posted: 11 years ago

#958

Too emotional at the moment to write any sensible comment, so bear with me😳
When I started off with AAA, I thought it is same as other stories of pretending girlfriend/ love. But bacchi(dj_arshifan) suggested me to read on! And as I went on reading, I tell you I was suffering from nostalgia. Every part of your story & its remembrance neeche, reminded me of what IPK would've been If Only...

The way you maintained a light air throughout the story made it an enjoyable read! I loved the ArHi of your story...the jealousy, love & everything about them was just so cute <3
Finally got to see a story where akashji can be besharam too with his payal ji! Not that payalji was any less.:D :P. She teased the hell out of khushi which reminds me of my nalayak best
friend-cum-sister :)
Nk & La ki lovestory was something I wanted the show to end with but unfortunately...anyways!

& the best part about your story was that you have clearly reflected the difference between inspired & plagiarism! Yes yes, I hate plagiarism & according to me 'authors' out who claim to write something getting 'inspired' by a particular piece of writing should read this, for sure & would know the thin line between inspire & plagiarism!

P.S. Thanks bacchi for the suggestion. It lightened up my mood :)
P.P.S Each dedication screamed out your love for your friends on the forum. I found it sweet. & funny at the same time :D. And lazyleaves is your sister? I am off to comment on her story now.

Thanks for the story & ignore the typos have typed it from phone :)

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Tanu_96

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Posted: 11 years ago

#959

And yes, the pictures were the perfect summary of the chapters. Kudos to Lavanya (I feel as if I am thanking myself :D) for putting up the pictures :)