ArHiSS:AnApateAffair#4,Ch21,Pg124,(19/07)COMPLETED - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago

Phoolon ka taaron ka, sabaka kehana hai
Ek hazaaron mein meri behanaa hai
Sari, umar, hamen sang rehana hai
Phuulon ...


I have 2 sisters and I love them...so thanks for this amazing bonding that you have shown...wish the show would have used it more effectively especially since the two got married in the same house and Khushi's circumstances such that she could have done with a friend...

I love how you start off with payal telling her off for that dance or was it more ..it felt like more than just a dance...on stage...after that how no one ever questioned them on it and what was going on between them in the show is still a mystery so am glad jiji brings it up...and plants the seed of doubt...it was indeed an expression of love...

I love how she goes to him and tells him off and compares them both...the emotions he feels for her if not love than want are they? Feels like love alright...but he needs time to accept them...
Love your description of the kiss...

I am glad he did not confess to loving her...not the right time and place, he needs to say those words when he feels the need...loved her question about Teri meri
Loved the role reversal that you have shown in the entire update between sisters and also Arnav and Khushi...I love you play in the dialogues...
I love how Khushi questions her about the payal and payal about Khushi...loved the play with the words...and yes. Finally Akaash getting some action ...
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Loved the rasam and the memories you brought back of that perfect chemistry ...
I get goosebumps at the way his hand goes all over her touching her ever so sensuously ...and your descriptive writing ...brilliant!
Loved that haldi scene...I just loved it...

I loved the way Payal summarises Arnav's feeling for Khushi, telling her that the fact that he getting married to her shows how deep his love and commitment to her is...
Payal as a third person can see clearly what we can but they cannot...


I love how she guards Khushi and Arnav and gives them the much needed privacy and wards off Anjali when she comes looking for her.
Payal has emerged as such a strong and wise character one that I wish she had been in the show too. The bond shared my sisters is pure and precious ...and I love the fact that Payal's words in the beginning sets the tone for the update ! It sets the mood...

So nothing fake left at all...it's all happening for real...very much so!

Done!

Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it
Superb update
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav is so stubborn...so much nakhra when he is crazy abt khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it totally fantastic ...amazing story...keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was so awesome.
The sibling bonding is great, never dying.
And loved you reversed anklet incident.
Khushi believed Arnav loves her because Payal told her so and her sister is never ever wrong..
And our dear Arnavji he wants er body & soul, cant see her cry, wants to marry her, spend his whole life with this one girl and still doesn't realises that he loves her.. well typical Arnav!!! But we still love him!! 😊
Teri Meri lyrics dialogue - Arnavji is doing so much for his Khushi... 😳
Haldi Ve was so good.. 😳
Special kiss to Payal who stopped Buaji & Anjali from interrupting them...❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
will it be too early to want another update?????😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 17
awesome...
even they fight sensually...
lovely...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
is it too early to asked for update? 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Feel like watching haldi scenes agn aftr reading the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Your haldi scenes were better than the ones on th show
Awesome
I can't wait for them to get married

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