ArHiSS:AnApateAffair#4,Ch21,Pg124,(19/07)COMPLETED

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Sona

@mistyrains

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

This chapter was so nice! :D Its true, the bond between two sisters , is irreplaceable, beautiful. And so you portrayed in the chapter. And Arnav and Khushi are so adorable. And I'd like to add, I love the little additions you have made to the IPK scenes, they are awesome :D <3

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Awesome update... I love it when u recreate ipk scenes n quote the dailogues... the update was totally hilarious too... :-D

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Amazing update, Saiyyu!!!

Love the sisters bond that Khushi and payal share!!

I'm also the eldest of two sister, and I also am overprotecting and want the best for my sister just like payal does.. She looks out for khushi..

Love how payal was on guard duty while Arnav and Khushi's shared a romantic moment...

Arnav is truly confused that he still hasn't realized that he has feeling for her...

Eagerly awaits for the next chapter...

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@debby_11

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

The part was so sweet cute and beautiful...Loved it :)

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Maybe i am wrong but itna maza nahi aaya. last two updates, something is missing.

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saavan_lover

@saavan_lover

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Amazing update! Absolutely loved your take on the Haldi ceremony :D I wish it was like this in the show as well but alas the SP nuns :(

I am getting so excited after every update! :) Cant wait for the next update :)

P.S. Loved your take on the Khushi-Payal relationship :)

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

First of all welcome back, I'm so sorry as a reader I should feel ashamed as I did not know you had already updated chapter 16, I have not been stalking your story to the full extent.

Coming to the updates, both parts were amazing, mind blowing and outstanding.

Chapter 16 was amazing and you included the Teri Meri dance, my most favourite scene of the show and you wrote it beautifully and perfectly. Also love how Khushi made Arnav confess that she was sexy, awww bless Arnav could not see Khushi in tears.

Chapter 17 was simply outstanding and there private haldi part in the bedroom was so beautiful and passionate, again a favourite scene of mine.

So I think we can safely say that both Arnav and Khushi have forgotten that there relationship was based on pretence.

Both updates were written exceptionally well, from start to finish a fantastic read.

Love the fact that updates have become very long in length, thank you.

Loved your remembrance notes and as usual they were amazing.

Eager to read more, please continue soon.

Thanks for the PM xx

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sushna

@sushna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

woww...nice...

loved it...

the bonding...everything was cute...⭐️👏👏

updte soon...😃

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nazca

@nazca

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#269

Sister, sister, sister!!!

What a wonderful relation, sisterhood, they can kill eachother and if there is necessity they will somebody for eachother. One whom you an trust and share everything everything, they wont be judgmental at any cast, they will put all their effort to make all the wrongs of the sister to right. I bet after Reading your update all the readers would have thought about thier sister, if they didnt had sister would have thought why they were not gifted with the sister.