MAANEET FF JAANE TU YA JAANE NA #10 EPILOGUE PG 40 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Sorry for the delay guys me finally here. Lots of ups and downs were there in my personal life coz of which i couldn't concentrate on my ffs but now I am back

3 more big updates of jaane tu left after which i will be ending this ff 😳😃 this will b followed by the end of my TJP n BAHHG maaneet FFS

ONCE THIS IS DONE I WILL CONCENTRATE ON MERE HUMSAFAR 😃😛 it has minimum 100 updates to go 😳 once i reach a managable quota of my ffs atleast that is MH i will start one new FF

THE RING THAT WAS NEVER MEANT TO BE MINE which will be a sequel to Jaane tu 😳

I would appreciate if someone can cut this title short I need the ring in the title as the story revolves around Maaneet n the ring 😉

Updating in a while thanks for waiting for me love u all

EID MUBARAK 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Its okay didu
we are waiting for the update as always 😳

Update jaldi,
waiting eagerly
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the next update I have given a note at the end of the update do read it 😳

PART 60

The doctors took Naintara inside the OT; Maan covered his partially wounded burn mark with his coat and removed Geet's pic from his wallet and without uttering a single word he just kissed her photo with his heart and soul.

He hugged her photograph and tried to find solace from it thus making Geet realize her importance in his life is so much that no matter if she is miles apart from him he will still keep her safe in the folds of his heart' a heart that beats only for her

Geet placed her hand on Maan's shadow and leaned her body on it as if hugging him as she allowed her heart to silently confess "I LOVE U MAAN"

Indeed true love works like magic as without voicing her wishes Geet's love possessed the strength to make Maan hear the unheard notes of her heartbeats'

Today Maan had successfully climbed two more steps to become the Maan of Geet's dreams by showcasing his SELFLESS AND FORGIVING NATURE'

Geet silently walked out of the hospital without making her presence evident in front of Maan

The operation was going on from many hours and Maan did not leave his seat even for a single minute

One of the doctors somehow managed to convince Maan that he too had succumbed minor injuries and it was important for him to apply some medicines on it

Maan however did not allow the hospital staff to apply medicines he thought of visiting their flat and to do his own first aid so that he could use this opportunity to change his outfit as well

With this thought in mind he stepped out of the hospital and directed his car towards their flat

After sometime

Maan entered their flat by using the spare keys as he was nowhere expecting Geet to be present right now here as he knew she was busy with her success party.

As soon as he closed the door of the flat Geet replaced the clouds of darkness with the blessing of brightness by switching on the room lights

Maan was surprised to see Geet here but the very next moment he realized that his Geet might once again misunderstand him as he was unable to make it to her bash

Without facing Geet Maan went and stood besides the window silently

Geet: Maan'

Maan closed his eyes as he knew he had once again broken her heart by not making it to the most precious event of her life

Geet continued to walk in his direction

As soon as Maan realized that Geet's feet were moving in his direction Maan covered the burn mark of his hand by wrapping it with his coat

A feeling of immense guilt of being the cause of his Geet's pain was slowly poisoning Maan's complete existence

Geet held Maan by his shoulder and turned him in her direction so that she could see his face clearly without any hinderance

She was shocked to see her Maan crying; she knew him so well that there was no need for her to ask any question she knew the answer even before the question was posed indeed he was feeling guilty of breaking his promise and becoming the cause of his lady's pain once again

Geet cupped his face with utmost love and requested Maan to look into her eyes

Geet's one loving touch gave the power of words to Maan's silence

He held her hand in between his palms and narrated the truth in a very simple way

Maan: U deserve to know the truth; u possess the authority to ask me questions as well as u have the right to get an answer from me. In my past I was not aware of the actual definition of a beautiful relationship but your love made me realize that every relation, every bond should have the elements of honesty and transparency in it

Maan looked directly into Geet's eyes and confessed

Maan: Geet I could not make it to your party as someone else required me more at that time' I was with Naintara Geet

A tear drop rolled down Geet's cheek that defined her happiness as she witnessed the element of TRANSPARENCY entering their relationship

This was the first time that without her questioning him he had himself told her the TRUTH without any hesistance

Maan got scared on seeing the pearl drop shining on Geet's mesmerizing eyelids without any delay he wiped the traces of it and continued

Maan: Geet the set where Naintara was shooting caught fire. Your love gave me the strength to come out from the ocean of selfishness if I would have left a needy person to die in order to safeguard my life would it have been correct?

Geet didn't reply but the smile on her face was enough to declare the extent of happiness and satisfaction that her heart was experiencing at this moment

A sign of relief crossed Maan's face as he got to know his Geet had not misunderstood him

Geet moved her fingers to get hold of Maan's coat clad hand Maan tried his level best to take away his hand from her reach but before he could execute his moves perfectly one question of Geet forced him to stop there itself

Geet: U just now confessed that I have the authority to see and know every small aspect of your life that is associated with u then why are u trying to walk away from my folds all over again Maan?

Without a second thought Maan placed his hand in front of her eyes

Maan: My death can also not create separation between us Geet then who am I to even think of walking away from u?

Geet took Maan's hand and placed it near her shoulder; she caressed his coat clad area with utmost love and was just about to remove the barrier that was stopping her to view his burn marks when'

Maan: Pls don't remove this Geet

Geet: Why?

Maan: I can't see u in pain

Geet: Does it matter to u if I am in pain or not?

Maan: It matters a lot Geet' the fear of death is also not as scary as the fear of seeing u in pain; ur one painful sigh itself is enough to separate my breath from my soul permanently

His honest replies were soothing her already healed heart with the feathery touch of true love

She placed a series of innocent kisses on the length of Maan's arm and after what appeared ages her soul felt as if finally the blessing of life had once again bestowed the colors of new hope and aspirations in her destiny

She knew she was FINALLY ALIVE AND HER HEART HAD STARTED BEATING ONCE AGAIN WITH THE NAME OF HER LOVE'. HER MAAN' YES GEET'S MAAN

She allowed her mirrors to get locked with Maan's gaze as she posed a simple question in front of him

Geet: Will u hold my hand if I am about to fall in any stage of my life?

Maan: U will find yourself protected in the folds of my heart in every passing stage of OUR LIFE Geet' before u fall I will coccon u with the petals of my love in such a way that u will only keep on rising ' I AM READY TO FALL TO MAKE U RISE

Geet's face was glowing not coz of the romantic one liners that was becoming a part of their conversation after ages but coz of the light of truth and beauty of love that was getting reflected beautifully in their blossoming relationship

A lot of things had changed from the past few days but tonight was a major positive step in their bond

Geet found no reason to stop herself from confessing one truth

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jmf9saL4E-A

Chaahe geeta baanchiye ya padhiye quraan
meri-teri prit hi har pusatak ka gyaan

Geet: When my sky is with me then why should I get scared from the showers of rain!

Maan was bowled completely by the sudden confidence that he had seen from his Geet's side towards their relationship

Geet held his hand and took him to the room wherein the first aid box was kept

Geet removed the coat from his hand and for the first time she didn't get scared of the burn marks. It seemed the confidence and power of her love was stronger as compared to her phobia

With a touch that defined the beauty of her love Geet applied medicines on his wounds

Her touch surely possessed a magical bliss as Maan didn't feel any irritation nor any pain during the application of the medicines' how could he sense this baseless materialistic pain when he was drowned and completely intoxicated in the beautiful ocean of Geet's uncondional and pure love

None of them spoke at this particular moment but one thing was certain no holy book nor could any worship give words to the beauty of this phase as tonight THEIR LOVE ITSELF HAD TAKEN THE FORM OF A NEW RELIGION WHEREIN THEIR TRUST AND THEIR BOND ITSELF WAS THEIR GOD AND THEIR HOLY BLESSING

rang deenhi rang deenhi rang deenhi rang deenhi

rang deenhi rang deenhi rang deenhi rang deenhi

Geet placed her head on Maan's chest and tried to live this moment to the fullest

Maan reciprocated to her feelings as he safeguarded her in the most honest hug that he had ever bestowed to his lady love

Time was moving very slowly it seemed it also wanted to witness the divinity of this moment before cherishing this phase in the folds of the past

piya ke rang rang deeni odhani
piya ke rang rang deeniin odhani

piya ke rang rang deeni odhani
piya ke rang rang deeniin odhan

Geet was experiencing the most blissful sleep of her life in the folds of her Maan's arms. Maan who was busy admiring his angel was experiencing the most satisfactory day of his life as finally he had seen glimpses of his Geet's returning trust on him

After sometime when Maan was sure that his angel was indeed in the paradise of dreams he finally scooped her in his arms and carried Geet to her room

rang deenhi rang deenhi
rang deenhi rang deenhi

piya ke rang rang deeni odhani
piya ke rang rang deeniin odhani

The glow and the smile on Geet's face was enough to give a new life to Maan. He kissed her forehead and was just about to leave her room when he realized that Geet had held his hand protectively in her grip even in her sleep


Maan felt honored with this gesture of his princess. He had dedicated his whole existence to her wish and her happiness and now no matter what he could not dream even for a second to go against her desires

jaise chaand ke sang chaandani
jaise raag ke sang hai ragini

He sat by her side immediately and placed her head on his lap as if promising her no matter what he will always be by her side

Maan caressed her forehead lovingly and tucked a lock of her hair behind her ear and continued to admire his sleeping beauty

jaise chaand ke sang chaandani
jaise raag ke sang hai ragini

Every love filled look of Maan for Geet was declaring a true and eternal promise

It seemed he was trying to tell Geet he didn't wish to become her shadow as after sometime the shadow is destined to walk away'he wanted to be a part of her life till the day he breaths his last

Yes he wanted to be the sky wherein the moon of his life HIS GEET would be at the heights of her glory

He wanted to be the fragrance that would enhance the persona of the flower of his life HIS GEET majestically

He wanted to be the twinkle of her soul that would reflect the beauty of their relationship every time she opened or closed her eyes

jaise chaand ke sang chaandani
jaise raag ke sang hai ragini

jaise bhaari basant mein morani

He wanted to be the shower of rain wherein HIS GEET could dance and sing wholeheartedly

He wanted to be the reason of her skipped heartbeat that would be enough to flush her face with a heavenly sunshine blush

HE JUST WANTED TO BE GEET'S MAAN who wished to die in her arms

piya ke rang rang deenhi odhani

piya ke rang rang deenhi odhani

rang deenhi rang deenhi rang deenhi rang deenhi

The wheel of time continued to pass and slowly the night of eternal promise got decorated with the color of a hopeful morning

Every dream of Geet adorned the color of a mesmerizing reality when she found herself cocooned in the loving admiring folds of Maan

All of a sudden her colorless life was transformed into a canvas that was beutified with the colors of rainbow in it

SHE FELT SAFE AND ALIVE IN HER MAAN'S EMBRACE

She kissed his cheek and slowly stepped out of his loving paradise with a happiness that could not be defined

The mark of her petals on his cheek was enough to give a perfect start to his morning

Music

Maan inquired about Naintara's condition in the hospital. The doctors informed him that the first stage of the operation was successful but now the major part of the surgery was just about to begin in an hour's time. This surgery was impactful yet risky

Maan decided to offer prayers for Naintara in the biggest temple of Mumbai before visiting her in the hospital. He informed Geet about his decision and both of them decided to go to the temple together

The temple was on the mountain side and one needed to walk bare foot through the stone clad path upto the temple and offer prayers; this was considered to be auspicious


tujhe pehanu odhu bichhaau main
tujhe bhar ke saanson mein gaau mein

Geet purchased the offering flowers and the puja thal for the prayers and walked upto Maan who was awaiting her arrival

Unfortunately Geet lost her balance and a sharp stone pierced through her skin making her skin to bleed but Maan was quick to notice this and without any delay he tied a cloth around her bleeding part and tried to give her some relief

Geet assured Maan that she was fine and she could walk but her eyes were unable to hide her pain. Maan understood that Geet wanted to offer prayers for Naintara but at the same time it was his responsibility to protect his lady love from the pangs of unnecessary pain

Without giving a second thought Maan scooped Geet in his arms and started to walk towards the temple

tujhe pehanu odhu bichhaau main
tujhe bhar ke saanson mein gaau mein

Geet was rendered speechless with Maan's gesture there was no fear nor any hesistation on Maan's face but he was confident about their relationship today and this was evident through his body language

They were celebrities and any act of theirs could result in breaking news for the media but today she knew Maan was least bothered about the world as his world began and ended on her

The route that they were taking was full of obstacles and Maan carrying her and walking was definetly not an easy task but not even once did Maan allowed his discomfort to get evident infact it seemed he was carrying his paradise with him safely and was ensuring her that no matter what path we need to cross u will always be safe in my arms


tujhe pehanu odhu bichhaau main
tujhe bhar ke saanson mein gaau mein

Maan's feet had succumbed minor wounds as they reached the area of the temple. He placed Geet lovingly on her feet and supported her with his arm

They gave the priest the flowers and all the necessary stuff that was required for the puja and very sincerely both of them offered prayers for the well being of Naintara

At the end of the prayer Maan requested God to forgive Naintara for her mistakes and bless her with a new life

Geet felt proud to see such a big change in her Maan today she was proud to fall in love with a man like Maan'

teri raah ab nahi chhodani

teri raah ab nahi chhodani

They took blessings from the priest and were about to go when the priest blessed their relationship to be eternal. None of them were expecting this as their purpose to come here was for Naintara and not for their own relationship

Maan got worried for a second thinking that Geet might get upset but the moment Geet's hand held his hand in a tight grip he realized that from now onwards no words no misunderstandings and no curse can ever create havoc in their relationship

piya ke rang rang deenhi odhani

piya ke rang rang deenhi odhani

piya ke rang rang deenhi odhani

piya ke rang rang deenhi odhani

With a smile on their face Maan once again scooped Geet in his arms and started walking downstairs

His paradise got the divine touch of beautiful colors as Geet rested her head on his chest' INDEED THIS WAS THE BEST CHAPTER IN THE LIFE OF THEIR BITTER SWEET LOVE STORY

rang deenhi rang deenhi rang deenhi rang deenhi
rang deenhi rang deenhi rang deenhi rang deenhi

ta di ya na re dhum ta na de re na

ta di ya na re dhum ta na de re na

The breeze sang the tunes of pure love and declared

He lived in her eyes and she was the light of his life

He lived in her soul and her name was imprinted in every beat of his heart

He lived in her dreams and she was the first ray of hope in his life

They were different yet no one could separate them as TRUE LOVE FINDS ITS WAY THROUGH ALL ODDS'

PRECAP 1:One wrong decision can destroy a beautiful love story. What will be Maan's decision? Will this be the end of Maaneet's love story or is this the last step that Maan needs to take to become the Maan of Geet's heart? 😳

PRECAP 2: Kyunki tum hi ho haan tum hi ho meri zindagi ab tum hi ho chain bhi mera dard bhi meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho😳😃

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The next update will be tomorrow or Saturday provided I get the desired response

Love- Divya (aka Piya)


NOTE: Sorry for the delay guys me finally here. Lots of ups and downs were there in my personal life coz of which i couldn't concentrate on my ffs but now I am back


3 more big updates of jaane tu left after which i will be ending this ff 😳😃 this will b followed by the end of my TJP n BAHHG maaneet FFS

ONCE THIS IS DONE I WILL CONCENTRATE ON MERE HUMSAFAR 😃😛 it has minimum 100 updates to go 😳 once i reach a managable quota of my ffs atleast that is MH i will start one new FF

THE RING THAT WAS NEVER MEANT TO BE MINE which will be a sequel to Jaane tu 😳

I would appreciate if someone can cut this title short I need the ring in the title as the story revolves around Maaneet n the ring 😉

Updating in a while thanks for waiting for me love u all

EID MUBARAK 😃


Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
yay am first

Wow ! Rocking update 👏 Maaneet relationship improving and geet wants to trust on maan once again ! She had started to fall for her maan once again 😳

Am shocked to see the changes in maan, he has changed so much for his love lady He has got so selfless, he went to temple to pray for NT's health,thats a great change .
hope their relationship keeps on glowing forever

Loving it , waiting for more updates , update super soon:-))
Edited by .bloom. - 12 years ago
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The breeze sang the tunes of pure love and declared

He lived in her eyes and she was the light of his life

He lived in her soul and her name was imprinted in every beat of his heart

He lived in her dreams and she was the first ray of hope in his life

They were different yet no one could separate them as TRUE LOVE FINDS ITS WAY THROUGH ALL ODDS…



LOVED THE UPDATE MAAN JUST CROSS ANOTHER OF THE LIST OF GEET UNKNOWINGLY HE WAS SO AFRAID SHE WOULD MISUNDERSTAND HIM LOVED HOW HE DID NOT WANT TO SHOW HER HIS HAND BECAUSE HE KNEW SHE WOULD BE HURT BECAUSE HE WAS HURT LOVED HOW WHEN SHE GOT HURT HE TOOK CARE OF HER AND THE PRIEST BLESSED THE REUNION AWESOME UPDATE BEAUTIFULLY DONE

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
The update is just bang on...👍🏼exquisite craftsmanship...I must say...👏
loved the way you are showing transition in the character of Maan...he is gradually winning the trust of Geet...and soon he is gonna emerge victorious in his mission...Maan now very understands the silent language of love...he knows what his Geet wants or expects from him...And then he is also ready to forgive NT for her evil deeds...that's a very big change in this character...Not only this he goes all the way to a temple to pray for her...wow...

These lines touched the chord of my heart...😳
he wanted to be the sky wherein the moon of his life HIS GEET would be at the heights of her glory

He wanted to be the fragrance that would enhance the persona of the flower of his life HIS GEET majestically

He wanted to be the twinkle of her soul that would reflect the beauty of their relationship every time she opened or closed her eyes

He wanted to be the shower of rain wherein HIS GEET could dance and sing wholeheartedly

He wanted to be the reason of her skipped heartbeat that would be enough to flush her face with a heavenly sunshine blush

HE JUST WANTED TO BE GEET'S MAAN who wished to die in her arms

Edited by namita25 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
oh really u r backkk
i m sooo happy
i thought u r also gone and live maneet but
i m sooo muchhh happy that u r backkk
and update is just awesomeee and on maneet ur work is justt ummmahhh

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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Thank you for updating dear...
Finally Maaneet's relation finding some more closeness

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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
update maan compleating all geet wants and geet start to trust him maneet praying for nt good



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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
fabulous update dear :)

really superb :)

loved d way maan and geet 's relation is taking d shape of eternal love :)

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