Awesome ff piya di !!! What i liked the most is , u turned the hatred for all the characters into some or the other kind of positive feeling , giving it a lovable "Happily Ever After" end !!!! Loved it !!!
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Wowest story!!! I really dnt hv wrds to describe hw much i lv dis jtyjn... Yellow rose-sign of love... Mangalsutra ring and bracelet- sign of belonging... Geets half poem cmpltd by maan- sign of being other half of each odr... And so many odr thngs took my heart... I lvd adi sanju and prem 4 thier support throughout the story... Thnx 4 shrng dis story...
Mindblowinggg ff...loved it...i just read it in one go...can't stop my self to read in one go...I just loved the way u discribe their feelingsss...songs nd poems r Outstandinggg dear...i love ur writinggg i already read ur kiss of poisonous ff also when i joined If...ur Superbbb writter dear...
It was a great read. Loved Geet's character and of course hated Maan more than Naintara. Loved Prem, Adi and Sanju. They were indeed true friends. Over all a good story n enjoyed reading it.
Just now i finished reading ur ff from starting. Awesome ff . Loved it. Especially i liked the scene where mann speak to naintara in the hospital. Superb friendship between prem, adi,geet and sanju . Prem s a nice gentel man . Adi loves geet as his sister. Sanju and prem plans where superb to unite manneet. Mann confession and manneet marriage scene are awesome wonderful. Mann change for geet. Mann character in second half was amazing. Perfect manneet ff. Mann fulfill all the dreams of geet.