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lujainshaikh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#431

wow!!!! an update...full of romance...luv nani...i can imagine the scenes completely!!!! luved it thoroughly!!!! :D 👏

Edited by lujainshaikh - 12 years ago

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#432

awesome loved

loved tom arnav and jerry khushi

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annieK

@annieK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#433

Arnavji in his element ...loved the chase and the family looking on in delight .

Great update , thanks Smita

And thnx for the pm @rashmi

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#434

LOved ASR going for the kill, so romantic, could totally picture the scene.It was lovely.The banter between Arnav and Khushi was so damn witty.As usual, and the last part with Anamika and Ganesha was really really cute:)

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jisa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#435

i am so in love with this chap.!!!
w8ng for next.>!!!

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#436

A brilliant and fantastic update, simply amazing.

Written brilliantly and a superb read from start to finish.

Awww love the way Arnav was teasing Khushi about the initial on his palm as his way of describing Khushi.

The family saw Khushi chasing Arnav and assigned there name as Tom and jerry, which is perfect.

Loved Arnav teasing Khushi in the bedroom and told Khushi she had to kiss him if she wanted to leave and it was so cute she did.

Awww the Anamika and Ganesh part was just so lovely and sweet.

Loved the update, eager to read more.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#437

lovely lovely update smita

rashmi, 🤗

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Monasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#438

Amazing Update...
Arnav and Khushi really act like Kids...
Khushi is really crazy, She made the Mehendi Girl write LGR and pushed her hand under Arnav's nose to show him what great work she did... lol... Arnav ab Jhelo Sanka Devi ki Nautanki

C for Crazy... ummm or Chamkili...
S for Sanka Devi...
P for Parmeswari...
J for Jalebi Rani hahaha lol but its Jhalli Rani

Arnav and Khushi termed as Tom and Jerry... But Khushi should be Tom right as she was chasing him...
And Arnav's demand for a Kiss... He's so naughty...

Loved Ganesh's and Anamika's chemistry...

Thanks for the Pm...
And Update soon

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jenshad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#439

Hilarious Update . Those Mehndi Names <33 Rest Of The Scenes Were ☺️ Khushi With No Dupatta, How Can Arnav Control? ; P Anamika & Ganesh Part Was Cute As Well ; D