Smitar's: Finding Khushi #10 Link to #11 on Pg 1 - Page 46

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Posted: 12 years ago
I am speechless Reshu.
Perfect and an awesome explanation of their feelings with superb quotes.

Thanks a lot for beautiful interpretation...and for the pm.
Take care dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
loved it..
thanxxx for the pm... rulama :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Rashmi, a lovely analysis as usual!

Smita, your update today reflected the playfulness and the ardour that's such an integral part of the Arnav-Khushi relationship, the family bonhomie and the gentle love and trust that symbolises the Ganesh-Anamika one! Loved that Khushi stuck to having LGR written on her palm and that Arnav wanted C to be written on his... in the midst of their lover's 'tiff' Khushi questions him who that 'C' is but is certain it stands for herself... so her trust in him is strong... the list of initials [denoting her crazy nature] he wants written on his hand just keeps getting longer much to Khushi's annoyance and she refuses to allow the mehendiwali to do the needful...' Arnav teasing Khushi mercilessly but still knowing when to withdraw was a marvellous moment, especially the scene of Khushi chasing Arnav around the room, much to the family's amusement... this must be the first time his family has seen Arnav behaving like a child, having fun and forgetting all about his carefully cultivated no-nonsense reputation! If her hands were free, she would strangle Arnavji! And enjoy doing it! HILARIOUS... clearly denotes Khushi's frustration at her inability to get to Arnav! Reminded me of the scene in the show when Arnav drew a moustache on Khushi's face and she chased him around the room! It looked so natural, as realistic as this one, especially with the ladies' witty quips flying around! "Anyone would think that our Chotey has been practicing running away for years!" Quite ironical in that he had been running away from relationships till Khushi taught him to love!
Arnav is like the Pied Piper... Khushi can't help but follow his tune, without realising that she's stepped right into his snare! Poor Khushi, the mehendi that was supposed to add to her allure was proving to be a hindrance as it prevented her from having full use of her hands... be it to strangle him or to help hide her modesty from his all-seeing gaze! Khushi grit her teeth. She had 2 useless hands, a lover on the prowl, and a dupatta that refused to stay on her body! How was she to manage? A totally endearing image of a flustered Khushi at the end of her tether! The desire pulsing between them is palpable, and when coupled with Arnav's bedroom voice and sensual lips, Khushi is a goner! She almost devouring him is a clear indication that the lion has found his lioness! After that scorcher of a scene, the gentle love and admiration flowing between Anamika and Ganesh brought a much needed respite... that love and trust is moving in its simplicity!
Beautiful VMs, Smita!
Edited by Maddy1270 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update! Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update...enjoyed it...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
read both the parts in one go.it was fantastic.thankr 4 the vms and pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww

its so sweet and nice

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
such a arhilicious update...totally loved it. Arnav and khushi just sounded so adorable and full of life in this update.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Got first place after a really long time !! 😳


smita that was beautiful !!

crazy

chamkili

sankadevi

jhalli rani !!

all ROFL !!! 😆

and finally he got hunted down !! 😆 hayeee




anamika and ganesh r the cute lovers !!! 😳




really awesome chapter
I love your story
The romance scene at the poolside was very hot
God where can I find an Arnav?
👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
"C P S J"

really cute update

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