SS- Two tales- updated pg 48 18/1/14 - Page 25

Originally posted by: nani2630

Awsome babe but need to read more
I love how you balance both couples
looking forward to read next chapter
I have a feeling its more virikka [:D/]
Update soon
thanks for pm

More? That's the longest one I've given in a while. You gonna have to wait hot the next chapter to find out what that is about.

Originally posted by: -Pj-

More? That's the longest one I've given in a while. You gonna have to wait hot the next chapter to find out what that is about.

Ahem ahem cant wait

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
loved out
liked the way how manvi shared the sonographic pic to virat
virika part is also nice
continue soon

Thanks, glad you liked this part with both couples and their intanglement.

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

This was quite longer one and included every bit of it ...the sharing sonographic moment was just soo amazing i mean just that feeling and happy that virman are just getting better ...and virat caring for manvi😃
the vv vros convo was a thing i want them to share a great bond😃

didnt understand what virika were talking abt confused...
update next part soon

It was quite a bit longer, which is why it had a range of things. I things are starting to move. I'm not sure whether to say what JV was about, I might try to make it clearing in the next update.

Originally posted by: krystu05

Good Update. Thanks for the PM.

Hey guys, sorry for the delay. Was kinda stuck this time, which is why it is storter. If anyone has any requests I will try and take them on board.

Normal housekeeping 😉

Part 22

Jeevika stopped in the passage. On the other side, Maanvi and Virat were trying to build bridges and were now in a comfortable place. Virat called Maanvi and asks to meet up to discuss a few matters, after realising she was not home.

Within an hour they both where they should be. It was an unusual day, it was suppose to be a cold February afternoon, instead the sun was beaming down. As she walked though the park she watched as people rode passed on bikes and children screamed in the background. She was being to show and she noticed Virat in the far distance, near a tall oak tree. She knew it was him, she had once brought the t-shirt he was wearing. Tapping him on the shoulder, he smiled to find Maanvi in a cute little outfit, showing off her tiny bump.

"I had a few questions,"

"Couldn't we done that on the phone? I mean..."

"This is nicer and more civil I thought," Virat started to share his concerning regarding everything he read in her file as well as what he read online, about what could happen, what to expect, which was beginning to freak him out. Maanvi tried not chuckle along but she couldn't help it. She looked down to avoid glances. Realising Maanvi's reaction, he starts to walk away.

"Virat," she called out and reached for his hand. Before she could finish someone else had called out for him and was approaching from behind Maanvi. They bypassed straight passed her and gave Virat a kiss on the cheek. Maanvi stepped back and the woman started to engage Virat in a conversation. Slowly she headed back, as Virat tried to manage everything.

That evening, Jeevika and Maanvi both sat in the sofa ready to start something they hadn't for a while. (Vent everything out.) Maanvi cuddled up next to her sister. Slightly taken back, Jeevika welcomed the change and though she was simply extra tired. She flicked over to the recorded episode of The Good Wife, (which was awesome) while Maanvi phone started to beep every two minutes.

"What happened?" Unwillingly Jeevika paused the show,

"I don't wanna talk about it. You start what up with you? You and Viren were quiet." Jeevika looked down and knew Maanvi was trying to digress off herself, so she carried on watching the show until it finished.

"He just said something today. Nothing bad, but the implication." Maanvi looked up with a perplexed expression.

"This is odd talking to you about it. I usually would but..."

Maanvi let go," Why? I still..."

Jeevika cut in before she could finish, "It's not like that. I mean... Viren was digging around the issues of kids. I guess as your pregnant he's thinking about it. And you know,"

"I see, well you're gonna have to talk to him about it." She paused for a moment after giving her wise advice. "Can we do me now?" Jeevika rolled her eyes. She signalled her to start, by turning the key. "Virat was really sweet today, that's not the problem before you start!

He was checking up on things but then as we were talking, this woman came up to him and kissed him. The thing is she was the one from the supermarket. I mean it's the same person that I saw him with. I think she's his,"

Jeevika comforted her, "He's trying to explain everything, but I don't need one. I mean he doesn't own me one. So... Anyway, you can kids?"

"You'd be a great Mum, and I don't know where your fear has come from as it wasn't always there."

Part 23- Pg 37

fantastic
awesome
superb
good concept of the story
i was soo eager to carry on reading the story but it finished
please update soon

Awsome but very short will let u off since you admited it was short.
You promised Virika romance didnt read
I really want you to explore Virika now especial Jeevs fear
I would love to have more Viren as well
I kinda feel Manvi just misunderstood Virat with the woman but want her to be this hormonal pregy woman
Thankd for pm
Update soon

nice update
the convo between jeeman is nice
virat is taking care of manvi's each and every thing,his concerns
but who is that woman
want to know more
continue soon
thanks for the pm

again a Grt update...
virman r amazing...
I loved how virat was talking abt every lil detail...
sister convo was nice!!!!
cont soon...