SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#761

loved it wondering what happened to Khushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#762

Arrrnav come on man!! Work with me here - repeat after me 'farak padta hai dammit cuz I love you... I can't live without you n you are my world!!' Bass !!!

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damonzlady

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Posted: 12 years ago

#763

Hopefully Arnav reaches Khushi on time
and confesses his feelings!

Can't wait for the next update!

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Priyadarshini Basu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#764

This update was full of strong emotions. Loved the way you portrayed the inner turmoil of Arnav, his inner pain, frustration and anger was too too too well described.

But, I really want to give fews fataks on head. He has immense self control as he is in so much trouble yet he does not the real feelings he has for Khushi!

Btw what's with Khushi turning dreamy eye and caressing her ring.. Each and every tym I read it , got irritated a lot!!

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#765

Amazingly written!

Arnav better save the day!

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swat.g

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Posted: 12 years ago

#766

Oh my god ! A legendary update ! Arnav in his own personal hell ! I m glad khushi gave an ultimatum ! He has realised it now...cant believe its gonna end.

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-tardisblue-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#767

That's right.. If Anjali couldn't get through that thickhead of his, no one could.
Sigh. He took so long to understand his dil ki baat.
A great chap. :)

Waiting for the epilogue

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AquaSandhya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#768

Distance makes the heart grow fonder because we realize that person's worth in our life. And that is exactly what is happening with Arnav. he is realizing the importance of having Khushi in his life rather than why she doesn't suit him. She is beautiful in and out. Her clothes and background are superfluous problems in the larger picture of life.

Finally, Anjali made him see the truth...not surprised. He didnt believe in Devi Maiyya and so it is his sis-mother that did the trick. But Devi maiyya is releived ...poof..

Waiting for the next one eagerly 😆

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arshi_lover1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#769

Plzzz continue loved it! Arnav should now really marry Khushi! No more games!

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Nimie207

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Posted: 12 years ago

#770

Kash Anjalidi kuch pehle act karthi , well it is not late..Arnavji apna lemon ko math chodo..n Khushi;s perspectiv also must be explained yaar..bas ...humare stubboprn Arshi ek ho jaye..