SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22)

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TabbyJ.

@TabbyJ.

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#751

go fix it u dumb ass!!!!!
its still not that late!!!
amazing job lav and anji!!
what wud DM do without u two women :P

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cheval

@cheval

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#752

omg this is awesome but also very sad ... i dunno what is kushi upto is she really engaged or getting married??? asr plz dnt let her go come on u can do it ...

fabulous update dear cant wait for next

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awaww

@awaww

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Posted: 12 years ago

#753

That was so intense. I have to many emotions right now and it's just wow. I can't even put in to words how brilliant that was.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#754

A fantastic and superb update, yet so emotional.

I learnt a new word Gamophobia a fear of marriage, I never knew this.

You wrote down Arnav's pain, anguish and emotions so well at the start after he realised that Khushi was engaged.

I can't believe Arnav is such a idiot, he could not still admit his true feelings to Khushi, she questioned him why it mattered and the duffer still did not answer.

Awww Arnav's personal thought about Khushi not being happy was so touching and heart breaking.

Love the advice Anjali gave to Arnav it was amazing and absolutely spot on, perfect words.

So glad Lavanya sorted Arnav out and told him that Khushi has gone on leave, poor Arnav.

I can't believe this amazing story is ending, such a shame.

Amazing writing and a wonderful read

Loved the update, eager to read the next part.

Continue soon please and thanks for the PM xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 12 years ago

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#755

Oh God!

Go stop her arnav!!!!!

Great update!

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#756

Awesome update hope Arnav goes to Khushi ASAP and realises that he is ready to marry her

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733619

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Posted: 12 years ago

#757

Great update. Quickly quickly go and stop her Arnav!

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#758

that's not fair, clearly not fair to me atleast

Omoraboti you ready to give me a heart attack

if i my heart fail...its because of your that update.

why u are playing with arnav singh raizada thickheaded brain like this

why u can't understand this i m not able to handle his pain, his suffering even i hate him sometimes

Why can't Khushi understand?

Why can't arnav understand what he wants?

Its emotionally heartache update honestly, I feel like crying

every word, every thing in this my heart fell with every word arnav spoke to his Di and anjali responded to him.

and devi maayin u are wrong this time u should said

he said "i love you dammit" not that " i want you dammit"

she left like this for a week

she really going to marry ? Sachi ma

she can't do this

mera arnav ase nahi reh ga

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rainyday3000

@rainyday3000

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#759

Arnav don't mess It up further...to get your lemon...u fool...u r crazy in love with her...can't wait for the next update...loved it!!! :)

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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#760

what😲 she is on leave for her wedding nahiii

arnav jaldi kuch karo nahi to bohat deer ho jae gi

loved it

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