SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22)

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#771

Glad to know your feeling better😊

Fantastic update!!!

Arnav really going through so much inner turmoil with himself.. He is so confused!!😕

I'm glad that Anjali finally knocked some sense into him..I hope he does something fast before its to late!!

Thanks for the pm..

Waiting eagerly..

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nlr_nlr

@nlr_nlr

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#772

A great update that screams "Carpe Diem" to Arnav !

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#773

Very well written... I am feeling so bad for this Arnav... I couldn't understand what Khushi has been upto; I couldn't understand if she even understood what he felt for her; I couldn't understand if she really did move on that quickly...

But as you told, I am waiting for next chapter to get a better picture of what her thoughts are n what she really is... Now without her PoV it's so difficult to come to an understanding with Khushi...

As far as Arnav is concerned we can see how deep his love is for her... For him her lemon essence is an essential... He may not be good with words, but you have made his character speak more through actions... Excellent writing and I love this character...

I can't wait to read further and more so further can't wait for epilogue to figure out what the lemon is all about...

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Disha

@dishashah4176

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#774

OMG seriously its her wedding!!!!!!! come on arnie u cant let this hppn go for her nw

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#775

awesome
finally he understood i hope sab theek ho jaye

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PrInCeSs_dIVa

@PrInCeSs_dIVa

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#776

*Unres

Okay honestly i am really sorry that i couldnt unres for a long time...

Please forgive me?

Now coming to the update...

It was simply fabulous and i cant belive this wonderful journey is on the verge of ending...

I just hope Arnav confesses and they end up together because they belong...

Thank you for such a lovely update now looking foward to the next one 😳

Edited by PrInCeSs_dIVa - 12 years ago