SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22)

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Nisha

@NishaAP

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#731

Amazing part. I hope he acts fast at least now.

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#732

Dear farah, glad to know that you are feeling better. What a great update man! Loved it. Cannot wait to read further! Thanks for the pm. Take care!

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#733

Despite the fact that things are sad at the moment, i'm really happy because finally Arnav understands. All thanks to Anjali.

No worries now because he will take matters in his hand and sort it out because he finally understands!

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iritz

@iritz

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#734

Beautiful chapter... Arnav's character comes out extremely well ! His inability to speak, faraq padta hai dammit... and Anjali's influence where even Devi Maiyya fails... very well articulated ! Superb !!!

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#735

Lovely update Farha!

Khushi fondling the ring pierced my heart more than Arnav's 😒

And she's off on a leave for a few weeks. She's surely not doing this, is she? No! 😲

Is this her plan to make Arnav say the 3 Magical words? I really hope so!!

Loved the way you incorporated one of my most fave dialogues in this update. Very apt. 😊

"Bechain hai. Khush nahi hai toh shaadi kyun kar rahi hai. Aisa faisla le liya ki usko baad me pachhtana padega. Khush nahi hai toh sagai kyun ki? Kis ne kaha tha haan kehne ke liye? Kisi ne zabardasti ki thi kya? Jisse pyaar nahi karti, jis ke saath reh nahi sakti, uske saath poori zindagi kaise bitayegi? Aur mein … mein ..."

I loved the pep talk Anjali gave him. I hope he acts fast on that advice!

Loved the update!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

I hope you're feeling better now!!

Take care! 😊

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#736

his fear of commitments will make him lose every single time...

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#737

Wonderful update...beautifully written.
Arnav's anguish, pain and restlessness captured really well.
Where is Khushi? Her decision to get engaged and married was very sudden.
If she is getting married how will Arnav stop the wedding? What will he do.
At least Anjali gave him a right advice and Devi Mayia was happy too, so I am positive that all will be well.
Thanks for the awesome update.
Will check out the stories you have suggested.