SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22)

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samarablog

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Posted: 12 years ago

#391

oh god:( its heartbreaking to see him going through it..

n tho Khushi's side is not mentioned, poor girl have been through a lot this weekend, i mean; am sure we all kind of knew what was coming, but Arnav's reaction portrayed by you is so apt..

I do not know if i can really wait now for the next update :( its longg await :(

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#392

Oh my. This is so well written.

You showed their emotions so well.

The body language was complementing.

Feeling bad for him. Just when he was thinking to change for her, she dropped a bomb.

I really hope they clear it out before they get more hurt.

It really isn't over yet.

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Kamala

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Posted: 12 years ago

#393

Good that you haven't mentioned the fiancee part in Precap otherwise the anxiety would have made me insane.

It was really a twist. When ASR was trying to give a chance to their relationship, Khushi moved on . She got engaged.

The way u narrated Arnav's reaction was superb.

I liked the chapter from the beginning . His excitement in doing something new , his response when Khushi broke the silence and finally, his numbness when she disclosed the name of her fiancee.

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Arshix144

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Posted: 12 years ago

#394

😲 U are here wohooo I don't usually reserve but I must do here! So here we go RESERVE!

Unreserved:

What an emotionally charged intense chapter, phewww let me breath in and out for a bit! I never imagined Arnav to suffer like he just did, the way you described the emotions again is so damn brilliant I am all emotional and I don't even know what is it that I am feeling! Maybe it is that little bit of suffocation that Arnav was feeling right at the end of the chapter. You started it so wonderfully with Arnav's realization and his willingness to try and only for Khushi because it hit him that he couldn't do without her. Right when he is at peace with himself and his decision about the possibility of making things all better, Khushi surprises him. Wonder what she went through, wait she already went through her own heart break and now Arnav finally experienced it for himself, you certainly did make him suffer so much so that you made me feel sorry for him. ( I don't usually feel bad for him:P)

Kudos for the following:

The world and existence of Arnav Singh Raizada collapsed in a flash and he did nothing to stop it. She had saved him from his dilemma. He no longer needed to try. It was over.

^^ Arnav's realization at what he was planning to do and how she saved him from trying at the same time turning his world upside down. This ought to make arnav babua realize a few other things as well.😉 As they say you can't understand the value of what you have until you lose it. Let's see how he takes the fact that he lost his Lemon to someone else for GOOD.

Finally thank the lord for my favourite character DM and her statement: "It is not over," she whispered, "Nothing is over till it is really over."👏

Thank you Ma'am for this fantabulous chapter (I am running out of adjectives here)! LOVEEED IT and I am looking forward to more already!

PS. Happy Friday, have yourself an awesome weekend!🤗

Edited by Arshix144 - 12 years ago

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BarunAddictSays

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Posted: 12 years ago

#395

gotcha. 😆
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You are my queen of cliffhanger. 😆 where did you learn this art??

You showcased the turmoil of emotions within him aptly.just no words to say it.perfectto. 😃

Khushi's indifference killed not just him but it pained me too. 😔

Poor both.Hey Devi Maiyya do something fast. 😉

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rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#396

While Arnav ids dwadling and deciding what he could do to rectify she is engaged!

Waiting for the next update.

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cool_tweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#397

double emotional one again. Sigh!! he had waited for her to call him Arnavji once, but it failed to lift his spirits wen she said it, as he realized that she is engaged. *Sigh* what was he trying exactly??what was he trying to tell her exactly??i jus went through the update in a hurry.
He wanted to do more. Much more.
ofcourse ofcourse!! but to do all that to a girl like khushi u have to marry her!! wish it is as simple as it sounds for Arnav.😛

Her sudden change of behavior and the feeling of deprivation had finally made Arnav think about them on a different note. Running away was no longer a solution, he realized. How could he deny that he was truly, deeply, madly .. attracted to her?

has he not even realised that he has fallen in love?? poor baby!!wow, then wat is he going to tell her anyway?? straight away lets get married??
There is defi going to be a part played by Anjali isnt?? these two are not going to talk, then who is going to open his eyes now?? i am getting curious.😉

Its such a touching update. loved it farha!!

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Aparna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#398

Damn it
it was painful reading hesitent, disspointed , broken ASR...
Did she really get engage?
Or it was just a lie
how soon is sooon to get an updt?