SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22)

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#401

That was an amazinggg update!!!

What an irony, jus when arnav wantd to start fresh,it all ended!!

Can't relli blame khushi for sticking to her views, infact I love this khushi more!!

But for all I know it never too late n arnavz go getter attitude will surely win him his lemon,his khushi!!

Loved how you unfolded the whole story!!

Arnav shattered world was soo apparent if anyone else would have been in khushiz plc it wudnt have been too hard to understand the vulnerability arnav was going through!!

Hope now he takes this as a clue that he btr marry her off to be surrounded with delicious scent of lemons n limes forever!!

Amazinggg update!!

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#402

Tht was awesome
N the end part describing Arnav's emotion was fab

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iritz

@iritz

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#403

Super Update... as usual !!! Ab kya bolun main... sab toh already bol diya in the mail !

Your endings are always super... Devi Maiyya sure has something up her sleeves ! 😃

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#404

Oh god!!! That was heartbreaking update..really sad to see Arnav broken. specially when he was coming to term with his feelings and was going to try.

How come Khushi got engaged in one week...that was very sudden. And why is she now saying its not over. Is she trying to push Arnav in a right direction by giving him shock treatment... it might work you know.

What now? Arnav is he going to be all possessive and jealous? Or he will ego take over?
Will wait eagerly for the next update.

Edited by gifttag - 12 years ago

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#405

Awsome...eagerly waiting to read more.

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shreyasonia

@shreyasonia

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#406

Ditto Devi Maiya!!!!

Loved the update. Absolutely superb.

Loved arnavs effort at trying to normalise (whatever that maybe when compared to these two) between them.

Ohh the end ...gosh it was almost like I had a ball stuck in my chest...the hurt...but then what did you expect arnav...u say she is not your type...and then go and be all possessive...what is a girl to believe anyway.

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#407

uhm.. wow!!
superb and so damn painful update
so beautifully written
arnav finally decide to give it try.. to what they have and and what they share but at now everything is crumpled and over for him
arnav, plz dont lose hope.. nothing is over.. do something man!! and evi mayya help her
continue soon

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BarunAddictSays

@BarunAddictSays

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#408

one more thing...

He admitted so many things...he atleast confessed to himself that he is attracted to her.progress I see.

Now he wants more from her.'Much more.' 😳

I can see an 'potential possessed lover' in him. 😆

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#409

This is simply amazing! I really feel bad for arnav!! I think Gautam is dead meat if arnav sees him! Beautifully written, love devi maiyya.

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PrInCeSs_dIVa

@PrInCeSs_dIVa

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#410

* Unres

Okay so the chapter was terrific and my heart is still pounding with all the curiosity!

She is engaged?

But thank god you didn't say Shyam! i would have died!

But now what will Arnav do?

How will he reveal his feelings?

Looking forward to the next update!!

P.S: Very eagerly!

Edited by PrInCeSs_dIVa - 12 years ago