I won't be your partner - SwaRon OS - Completed

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

First of all Namratha I'm extremely sry for rplying dis lte. Dis OS was a pleasure to read. Luvd the convos btwn ReYam nd Sharon-Simmi. I luvd how u have written it. Once it ws ReYam nd the nxt it ws Sharon-Simmi.. It ws a delight to read.. The next morning was interesting. Swayam declined to bcum Sharon's partner.. Nd after that our Sharon's confession.. Swayam entered the house thru the window.. 🤣 ye kabhi darwaze se nahi ayega. Sharon's confession was rly swt. Luvd how swtly Swayam ws cursing himself for acting lyk a jerk. Lovely ending. A very beautiful OS. Do cum up wit mre...

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Namratha

@nami2811

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

First of all don be sorry sweets.
I'm glad tumne ab pada 😊 n u liked it!
I want such a scene wer Swayam realizes Sharon's efforts to get to him..

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sneha singh

@swaron9113

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

wow wow wow

superv amaging os.
Just luv it.
Btw nxt part ?

Lgta h palki ne apka cncpt chura liya.

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MoNayaHolicPrag

@MoNayaHolicPrag

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

ahem ahem.. wah wah

okay pragya style 2 lines before i start by bak bak

kya khoob likhti hoo

badi sundar likhti ho 😆

Oh my god like seriously(obviously tannu style)

fab OS!!

I loved it..Kash aisa kuch sachi mein dekhne milta

But i imagined every scene.. and it was just beautifully perfect

such an overwhleming OS

i must say you write really well..

Main toh teri fan ban gayi

nahi nahi.. jitni badi tannu ki hoon usse thori kam 😆

but seriously wow wow wow wow..

the way u have explained everything that song

the khidki se jump karne wala confession which i always wanted..

but we ll get that in rehearsal hall

but koi nahi tune meri icha puri kardi

i would love to read more of ur work

Yaar ke FF chalu kar hi de.. pleaseee... 😛

just one last word for this IS

PERFCT 👏😊

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Namratha

@nami2811

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Sneha.. next part is one page 4.. :)

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Namratha

@nami2811

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Prags.. Tere gaane Oh My God! 🤣

Thank you so much ki tu ne pada yeh :) Oops no sorry lekin *hugs*
Itni taareef mat kiya karo pedh pe chad jaaongi 😆

Aur rahi baat FF ki toh mujhe ek OS likhne ke liye bhi time nahi nahi milta aur tu bol rahi hai FF shuru karoon.. Itni bhi achi nahi likhti 😆

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MoNayaHolicPrag

@MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: nami2811
Prags.. Tere gaane Oh My God! 🤣

Thank you so much ki tu ne pada yeh :) Oops no sorry lekin *hugs*
Itni taareef mat kiya karo pedh pe chad jaaongi 😆

Aur rahi baat FF ki toh mujhe ek OS likhne ke liye bhi time nahi nahi milta aur tu bol rahi hai FF shuru karoon.. Itni bhi achi nahi likhti 😆

lolz... pedh pe chadogi toh pedh ko kaat dungi 😆

arey kya bol rahi hai ?? tu ekdum mast likhti hai 😛

time mile toh shuru karna ha i ll support u 😊

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Hey nami 🤗
Mast tha yaar yeh os toh mein toh pura usme kho gayi thi 😳 mein full on dream kar rahi thi padte padte
hmmm i really loved d confession part of d os it was beautifully written 😳
Dis is first one am reading out of ur works.. At pe have read few of ur small small imaginations but yeh toh was like a surprise for me 😳 dat hug oh dat was divine i love dis song like anything it was like cherry on d cake..
It was beautiful it was simple n i loved it 👏

Awesome one nami part 1 n 2 both were brilliant😳
I loved how u started off ur title said somethin else but actually it was somethin else..
Ur write beautifully keep writing

Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago

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Namratha

@nami2811

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Awww thank you Shilpu!! I 'm glad you liked it :)

This part I've written before the medical room waala scene so I was happy to c some part of dis come up on TV.. :P

And yes I will surely write an OS this week especially for you n few others who asked me to write :) This really inspires me :)

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: nami2811
Awww thank you Shilpu!! I 'm glad you liked it :)

This part I've written before the medical room waala scene so I was happy to c some part of dis come up on TV.. :P

And yes I will surely write an OS this week especially for you n few others who asked me to write :) This really inspires me :)

Yup am waiting for ur os from dat day. . N well u know our conditions rite 😆 😆
Write soon n post it ll be waiting 😳