I won't be your partner - SwaRon OS - Completed

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

wow nice os

do update next part soon😊

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

that was awesome and amazing and superb os...
continue soon and pm me...

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Prachi

@preitygal99

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

That was so cute n so nice

Pls continue soon

Thanks for the PM

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Beautifully written Namratha. Loved the plot how it started with SwaRon in the rehearsal hall dancing. And then the sng nd their thoughts wre so ri8ly matched. Both of their POVs was nycly written.. I loved how Swayam thought she mi8 alwys push him away but he will never push himself on her.. Nd he wl fill her lyf wit love.. She only needs to ask.. This ws amazing. The hug was extremely well written.. Nd it ws gr8.. Extremely well written part.. Waiting for the next update..

Edited by tannu_swayam - 12 years ago

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Res for now! Will read after my exams and comment too! :D

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Tooba

@maliha_khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Gosh it's an amazing os plzzz do continue dis os n plz pm the next update its superb...👍🏼

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Namratha

@nami2811

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: zk456789
wow nice os
do update next part soon😊

Ya definitely! Gladly I'm on leave today so will be updating it by evening 😊

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Namratha

@nami2811

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien
that was awesome and amazing and superb os...
continue soon and pm me...

Thank you so much for liking it 😊
Will surely PM u once mm done..

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Namratha

@nami2811

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: preitygal99
That was so cute n so nice
Pls continue soon

Thanks for the PM

Thanks for d comments! I didn't knkw wer to advertise my work n u wer d first one to come into my mind. Thank you!

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Namratha

@nami2811

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: tannu_swayam
Beautifully written Namratha. Loved the plot how it started with SwaRon in the rehearsal hall dancing. And then the sng nd their thoughts wre so ri8ly matched. Both of their POVs was nycly written.. I loved how Swayam thought she mi8 alwys push him away but he will never push himself on her.. Nd he wl fill her lyf wit love.. She only needs to ask.. This ws amazing. The hug was extremely well written.. Nd it ws gr8.. Extremely well written part.. Waiting for the next update..

Uzma! *hugs*
Your d first one whom I spoke to to comment here. I'm glad u liked it😊 kaash aise hi dekhne ko milta 😔
Will update by today evening! 😊