SwaRonTanHa FF~Enigma of Fate 2~ epilogue pg 24 - Page 5

Baz congratulations for second thread dear...its so amazing to know this story has reached to so many people...i still remember the time when you and some readers were not sure if this will work or not but since then you covered a long journy and finally made this story one ot the most different tales to tale on swaron and it has something in it which glues readers to it...

This is based on sad tone so naturally the events occuring are evident of pain out of all and you have been super successful in making us feel the pain...this story is ample to prove that BAZ can write anything romance,dramma,thrillar and tragic stories...
i always enjoyed the way the story is progressing...sharon has her reasons to go away from her old self and Swayam had his valid reasons for doing same...both are just able to justify their actions to each other and all this leads to tragic events...this story also teaches us never to hold on a certain feeling because it prevents you from going ahead and restricts you...
This part was no different both are in their own dilemmas...but one point which made my heart feel pain was point where swayam saw in sky and accepted his defet it took away my breaths for that time...excellent thinking and story dear...

thank you for pms through out the journy of this ff...thanks for mentioning that formal thanking are not required in our relation and i swear i wont stop liking and commenting on your works...

Pratik...

Un_reserved

First Congrates for new thread.."Engima of fate" is one of the most beautifull SwaRon story for me..I just loved it..

So moving on with update..I loved the pain in swayam eyes..The complete beach scene was described so so well...Loved the line.."god himself was crying with him"...

Well, after long time..u gave a swayam thoughts and his POV... Just loved swayam's positive way to make sharon dance once again..And i am sure he convinced sharon back to in dancing...After that..loved swaron bedroom part..that was little bit naughty.. Sharon wrapped in single towel...And i always blessed with dadi...She always interrupts at perfect timig...But i lked her character..

Loved the way u expressed Swaron intensity of love...I am glad both swaron have a positive way now..So just moving forward...Loved u'r writting talent as well as u'r updates...Keep it up..

Great work..

Thanx for PM

Prateek

Congrats!!!
Fantastic writing!!!
You writing always leaves me so tearful!!
Thanks for the pm nd do update soon.

BaZ this for you 😳

Wow awesome blossom update
Congratulations for the new thread hope eses hi threads badhte jae
Lovely update swayam in so much pain I was literally crying with him
I didn't receive the pm do pm me for next update
Ab jaldi update kar dena

YAY!!

Guys next chapter is written. Shocked? well all of u who have not commented, leave ur feedback soon and also unreserve ur comments soon. The sooner I get comments I sooner I'll update :)