Taarey FF- Mar Jayian part 4-- page 28

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Lavender_Luna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

kab theek hoga?

pls ssab theeek krdo...

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Shivangi

@peraltagasm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Oh My God! this was sooo good dii! I mean.. Gish i'm speechless! The way Taani shouted at Rey.. The way he broke down in front of Swayam, The way Taani broke down in front of ankita... Everything was perfect! And the flashback.. Woah! I hadn't expected this! that Taani already knew! Waiting eagerly for the next chapter di! Do update soon please and do pm me! <3

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christy

@Amitz.Gibbore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

AWSUM dr!! taani dint accept him gud!!! feeling bad for taani:9 upd soon dr

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parudTRsandhir

@parudTRsandhir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

d3 gang were superb...

loved taani and ankitas convo...

what was d reason ankita talking about...??????

thank u 4 d pm..

plzzz update soon...😊😊

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Maya

@mymy_taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

OMG I LOVE THIS! it was so good! do continue soon!

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ajaved

@ajaved

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Amazing update as usasul u write sooo well feelin bad for both of them they are soo hurt :)

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Reytanni4ever

@Reytanni4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

It was beautiful update dear

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-CussTheWorldUp

@-CussTheWorldUp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

oh my god! This was so damn beautiful! I genuinely loved the whole scene where Taani is crying and shouting and everyone comes out of the house. It was amazingly written by you. I could imagine it all. I personally loved this dialogue by Taani.

I understand he didn't want me to be dependent on him, but why couldn't he talk to me about it, why did he have to go behind my back, and plot with his friends to manipulate me into breaking up with him, from which angle does that seem like a healthy relationship Ankita?

Please update soon di! Can't wait to read now!

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raveena

@raveena1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

amazing update dear...lovd it...D3 gang is so nyc...taani's burst out was amazing but i felt bad for bth taarey...taakita scene was fab...flashback part was nyc...overall a fab update and i must say u r an awsm writer..the way u portrayed their feelings was commendable...update nxt soon and PM me..😊