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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
WOW...jealous swayam...i have to thank zaid :P

lol..his inner bollywood hero woke up...poor baby

She came down looking like a woman :D ;)

LOVING THIS SS...its amazing😊

u r effortlessly brilliant 😃
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Day 2:
Day 2 was full of suprises.. Sharon's explosion was rly unexpected for me. I loved how it happened though.. Nd the conversation that followed.. Swayam was rly relieved after that.. Their conversations r now on a lighter note nd frndly nd u can understand the change in dem.. The next surprise fr me ws Swayam asking her Y she doesn't love him anymre. Well he had to ask dis.. Otherwise he wud hav burst up. Nd theres a lovely answer that she gave. Very well penned conversation.. Nd her gran's story. It ws beautiful nd lovely. Loved how the whole update ws written.. Had a gr8 tym reading it.. Sry fr the lte rply..
Edited by tannu_swayam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Day 3:
Swayam's POV are rly gr8 to read.. U have written them with an amusing touch which makes this so awesome to read. His reactions are gr8.. Lyk the bipolar part, her mind reading part, den the bst wen he says ..his BMV. These wre all amazing.. The Devil in the Armani ws a suprise.. Nd swayam's reaction on seeing him ws hillarious. Burning with jealousy.. They wre an absolute treat to read.. Im loving dis SS.. Loved the update... Great writing...
Edited by tannu_swayam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
amazing

jealous swayam

haii!!! 😳

loving this SS so much

im in love with your writing

it looks so effortless

fantastic

awesome

amazing

please update day 4 soon...

wanna read it asap!!!

thank you for the pm

update soon and do pm me


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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
lol I so love ur updates girl !!! 😛
the way you wrote it..
it was simply a treat to read... seriously 👏
jealous Swayam my god!! that was fun... ha ha ha!! 😆
matlab the way he reacted after seeing Zaid/the devil/the decent fellow/ "POSSIBLE-
RAPIST-IN-DISGUISE" oh freak!! lol.. that was hilarious 🤣 🤣 🤣
I am loving it ❤️
I am in love with you writting skills.. 👏
thank you for the PM dear 🤗
Edited by prakriti4u - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
so finally swayam feeling jealous .. the way swayam reacted in his bollywood hero avatar after seeing zaid (this decent fellow / possible-rapist-in-disguise) was hilarious .. 😆😆 poor swayam .. swayam's bollywood hero was really fun to read ..

Update soon ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
loving this ss
day 3 was superb
jealous swayam wow
it was a treat reading this ss
u hv written it so beautifully
loved it
thanx for d pm
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Awesome update 😊
Swayam jealous
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
The devil in the Armani really got the better of that boy, eh? Well I suppose getting your Churro snatched out of your very hands does that to you! 😆

Your easy style of writing and humor really appeals to me. Good work. Keep up the good work.
-Srishti
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Wow this is superb..
Loved it a lot..
A classic piece of work..
Swayam is Jealous..Quite suprising..

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