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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

ur writing style is simple awesome...

Loving the way u are treating the story...

Swayam is so much in love...loving it 😳

Continue soon ...thanks for the pm😊

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Amazing!
oh boy,is Swayam in love or what😲😆
He actually lodged a FIR without 1st checking his house😲...hyper much,dude!
So day 4 ends with our hero irrevocably in love..hmmm...wonder when our diva will finally relent and put him out of his misery😛
In no hurry though,i'm loving this😉

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

oh!!!!

swayam is in LOVE... 😳

finallly 😆😆😆

way to go sharon 👏👏👏

really well written

i'm loving your writing...

swayam bilkul pagal ho chuka hain 😃😃

FIR??? 😆😆

update day 5 soon

and offcourse pm me 😳😳

i'm waiting

thank you for the pm

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

wow swayam is in love it seems

so hyper n becoming restless wen sharon was not there with him

he very badly wanted her to be with him n talk to him for hours

the best was he lodged n fir

n i think he might be getting jealous wen he saw someone sending a gift for sharon

all his actions appeal dat he really loves sharon but did not realize it

i wonder wen he realizes n den tells it to sharon wat will her reaction be !!!!

n the day for came to an end

i am eager to know futher

plz update soon will be waiting for ur pm

very excited to read ahead...soon update

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Uh oh. I was urging Swayum in my head to look in her room, I was. And well, that being said he found her after all. Struck by an epiphany, isn't he now? It was a very beautifully written chapter, it began with it's usual humor but eventually it ends with some development.

"Whatever the case was, I just... I don't even know. I wanna talk about her love/hate relationship with Ranbir Kapoor over freshly fried unhealthy churros, I want to obsess over her watermelon scented hair, I want to talk about her grandparents and their awesome story and my paranoia of never truly pleasing my dad. I don't even mind the awkward moments when we stumble upon college memories. I just want to talk to her, again, for hours." This is my favorite paragraph. You very smartly make it all sound real, without using heavy words and expressions you very plainly but effectively tell us how your subject feels, and that's super.

Thanks for the PM.

Epiphany.

Edited by epiphany. - 12 years ago

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Great Update!!

Swayam is SOOO in love!!!

and love has made him do some crazy things!!!

Really love your writing style!!!

Continue SOON!!!

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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

awesome update..
loved it like always!!! 😃
Swayam is so gone mahn!! A FIR without even checking his house.. 😆 He is so in Love...
can't appreciate ur writting style more .. cz I can't find proper adjectives to compliment hr writting skill 😳 .. I am simply Fida over ur writting skill believe me...
thank u for the PM dear 🤗

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Awesome update 😊

Swayam worried about Sharon's absence

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neetha

@neetha

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

i love ur writing skills...thank god he finally found sharon..waitin fr the next update and thanks fr the pm :)

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

shweta,

sorry for commenting late---but i was away and that too without my lappy.

anyway read this one---and i loved the way you get straight to the point without any hanky panky---and frivolities, yet manage to keep it smooth...and fine tuned.

nice update----and keep writing