The Pain of Loss (Completed) NOTE on P 41

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Jalebiee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Hmmm...smthng new!!...
Really excited for it...

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Jalebiee

@Jalebiee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Woww...it was lovely...
This the first time i am liking akash more than arnav...
Where is n.k by the way??

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cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

updated my comment on page 10:)

check ur pm...

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damon fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Oh..God..!! I'm too late to comment this time.. 😭 Was very busy..!! Upper se ye garmi maar daalegi..!! 😕
OK..! Coming to update- When i used to watch show i used to hate Akaash's char. I don't why..??
But with u & ur story i'm falling in love with this Akash..!! I love him..
Great development in Arnav & Akash relation.. 👍🏼
Shantanu...ughh..!! 😡 he desrved that..what arnav did to him 👍🏼 Another change...Arnav Malik=> Arnav Raizada..Which name u like..?? I like Arnav Raizada more..!!
Our Arnav has started laughing aur beter smiling but i think Shantanu's dhokha will make Arnav sad..!!
Eagerly waiting for next update..

Edited by aman3354 - 12 years ago

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damon fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

And Guys..!! Whoever is reading my comment..what Di said at end of update that Like button do magic..It is absolutely true..'coz it brought SMILE :-) to our Sweet Di's face..so do hit that like button..!! 🤗

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damon fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Appreciate those who love you..
Help those who need you..
Forgive those who hurt you..
Forget those who leave you..

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Ananya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Edited my comments page 7 and 9 😊

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sk2405

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

This is a total different thing you know.

Nice. And while reading it I realized it might just do good without actually including Khushi.

So keep up. 👍🏼

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Brilliant and fantastic update,

Loved Arnav getting irritated at the girls because they were giggling, he wanted to pull there ribbons off.

Awww his school time was awesome with Akash and sharavan, Arnav had started to smile and laugh.

Bless loved Akash's reaction when Arnav told him he should call him Bhai.

I can't believe what a pathetic man Arnav's brother in law was, so glad Arnav punched him.

Loved the update, Eager to read more.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM,

Also your the writer, it's up to you if you don't want to include include Khushi in the story and as a reader I will read all your stories, because your an amazing writer and I love all your stories xx

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PhoenixTears

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Hey Helee, you are doing fantastic job with this story. Its a very interesting & unique concept and both the updates were brilliant. It clearly shows how cruel world forced a smiling Arnav turn into a ruthless ASR and how Arnav malik became Arnav Raizada! Loving this teenage bond between Akash & Arnav and the way you wrote the difficulties Arnav - Anjali faced is really commendable. Just awesome! Looking forward to read next 😊

PS: Although I love Khushi more than Arnav still I am not missing her here so its upto you whether you want to include her or not, I am more than happy to read this in any case 😃