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Sj236

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

It was a pure bliss reading dis story!
Crazy fan of arnav! So i just loved d story!
U wrote in a fantastic manner and it dint matter evn wen khushi wasnt der!
D moment wen akash says about using old books,wen anjali was rejected by dat idiot, wen arnav is humiliated by those dps idiots and many more such things wer really heart touching!
Especially wen sharavan died, felt really sad!
Bt den arnav , his pure hardwork, intelligent strategies made d story awsumm!
Great story!

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Nishi

@Ni_singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#292

read all the chapters at a go...the story was brilliant... the journey of Arnav to ASR was wonderfully written...loved it...

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#293

Read the whole story in all go. Fantastic story

Every one writes about rich business tycoon falling in love with ordinary girl Khushi but no one write his journey to being a ruthless tycoon. Thank you for writing about it.

I love each character especially mami. Her instant decision to sell her family jewels for his son's business touched my heart. She was the mami, her love for her niece and nephew was twice to their lot her love.

The story move with perfect pace.

Brilliant work.

Love it.

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#294

I haven't come across a story that has focused on the transformation of Arnav to ASR. Sure it has all been explained in a few paragraphs at the most, and so ti came as a refreshing change to see a story which detailed the changes in his life, gradually molding him into the person that he became.

The women that you showed in his life were also different, teaching him a unique lesson. Right from Rewa to Lavanya, each seemed to be a building block, cementing his attitude towards women. Also Sheetal's inclusion seemed realistic.

Liked it more so because it did not stray from what was promised by you earlier😊 And the end couldn't have been any more perfect!⭐️

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hema

@Itsflora

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Posted: 11 years ago

#295

Sooo beautiful... Arshi as almost with no khushi...

I was so much engrossed reading it,I wanted it to continue even after u end...well done sister..

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 11 years ago

#296

that was real awesome loved it

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kshubhangi

@kshubhangi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#297

Outstanding view. ASR has been bashed for his ruthlessness. But you potrayed the real man and his journey.👍🏼👏

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#298

Wow simply amazing,

feels as if I know Arnav more now!!

It felt as if you have elaborated and put into words all the flashbacks we used to see in the show!!

Great Work!!

Taking just few scenes and weaving a whole story around,

and being true to the show!!!

Superb!!

It felt as if I saw Arnav become ASR in front of my eyes!!

You are simply awesome!!

Take Care!!

😊

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

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Posted: 10 years ago

#299

really wish u continue it

awesome

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abcdefg1234567

@abcdefg1234567

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Posted: 10 years ago

#300

You have wonderfully described the making of ASR. Great work. Just loved it. I seriously hope original serial would have also shown some more past of the Arnav apart from that just wedding clips. I always thought there is a great potential in that direction also.

You did a commandable job here dear. Thanks for giving us such a awesome story. Keep up the nice work.