ArSha OS- Tum Hi Ho *Challenged*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hola Friends. I have been a lil inactive and hence the delay in updates. This OS was challenged to me By Akanksha.

The situation for this OS was : -Situation: Tum Hi Ho, Bday, Chicago, Return, Lift


I hope its atleast a lil readable although I am not at all happy with the outcome. Without wasting much time, I would let you all read it.

And A HUGEEE thanks to Palak, without you I would have managed nothing.


Tum Hi Ho- ArSha OS


"Happy Birthday Amar" screamed Tannu, Vrushika, both the Sneha's, Alisha, Archie and the rest of them over the conference call.

"Thanks guys" Amar tried to sound as happy as possible. Tried.

"Kya Amar we are so excited and tu hain ki itna sad sa thank you bol raha hai" Sam complained. Everyone else agreed with her.

"Arre guys aisa kuch nahi hain, just a little tired." He replied

"Amar, tired ya missing someone?" Tannu teased him and everyone faked coughs.

"Arre yaar jao tum log sab pakao mat, I will see you all tomorrow, at the shoot" he said with mock anger.

The teasing continued until one by one everyone hung up. The last to hang up was Tannu who only said not to expect calls from anyone he thought would call, coz Chicago was 10.30 hours behind IST. Shakti was in Chicago. Amar smiled when he said that but just muttered a "Whatever" to which Tannu chuckled.

***

As soon as he reached the sets the next day, everyone gathered around him and cheered and sang happy birthday for him. He was informed that he didn't have much to shoot and had an interview lined up, the usual gifts received from fans. He went into the room where the interview would take place while the others went about shooting. He checked his phone to see any missed calls from Shakti but sighed when there were none.

"happy birthday" The Reporter and The cameraman wished her and he smiled at them. The IV began with the cake which was sent by KriYaansh and ArSha fans, which had a beautiful collage of their pictures. Again, he checked his phone and sighed. One after another, he opened all his gifts, read out the messgaes, thanked all his fans. He was genuinely happy to see so much love from people all around the world. Yet, that feeling was bothering him at the back of his mind, it bothered him that Shakti hadn't wished him, his best friend hadn't!.

"So here's the last gift from you, all the way from Chicago" the reporter handed him a gift and a card. On the front of the Card was their hug from their Khuda Jane dance. He smiled and began immediately began reading the message. He froze for a second and his heart skipped a beat. These were Shakti's handwriting! He brushed off the thoughts and began reading the message. After all people can have similar handwriting.

"Hey Kuwar..Gussa ho na That I didn't call you? I mean obviously ho. But trust me if I could have called you I would have. You will get to know the reason by tonight. Anyway, mera message yah ape dekh ke surprised? You know shayad kabhi tumhe bataya nahi hoga, but I am a Hugeee fan of yours. Even a bigger fan than any of your fan girls. :P And that is not just coz you are my bestie, but coz you are and will always be the awesomest person in my life. Kabhi mujhe judge nahi karte ho aur mere faltu wale tantrums bear karte ho, use bhi faltu jokes pe haste ho, aur mere mood swings ko itne ache se handle karte ho. And tumhara dance, uff, mann karta hain bas tum kabhi na ruko(Ignoring the fact that ur feet might hurt..hahahaha..ok laugh it was atleast thoda sa funny :P)

I just have to say one thing, I feel honoured that you are a part of my life and such a hugee one. I hope we remain the same always. Aur kya.. bolu? Haan, muje party chahiye wen I come backkk….PARTYYY!!!! :P :P achha bahut bakwaas ho gayi, chal bye.

Teri Shaku bai :P

He laughed as he read the last lines. Then he realised his eyes were a little moist so he finished the interview quickly and excused himself. Once he reached his room, he sat on the chair holding the letter and read it over and over again, until the tears blocked his view. He wished she was there at that moment with im, and he would tell her how much he loved her. He had been unable to hold in his feelings anymore. Ever since she left D3 a year back, everything seemed so vague in his life. He was never genuinely happy. Sure they talked but he just missed being around her all the time. All the craziness, pranks, arguments during thes hoots, he missed it all. He wished he could talk her into joining D3 again at times, but he knew what her dreams aspirations were. What here real passion was.

His mind was clouded with thoughts when he heard the knock on his door. He watched the gang stand at the door with huge smiles. He looked at them with a raised eyebrow.

"Palki Ma'am let us go early" Massy said.

"Uh? So?" Amar asked still lost in his thoughts.

"So, we are all going out to parttyyy" Vrushika cheered happily

"Party? No, No…" he argued

"Ha, ab toh Shakti nahi hain toh humare saath party bhi nai karge" Alisha started with her melo drama.

"Aise kaise nahi karega..Girls tum log bahar ruko hum boys isse leke aate hain" Archie told and the girls went out.

An hour later. Their car stopped outside a lounge and they hooted and sang the birthday song for him yet again. He rolled his eyes and followed them inside. The gang danced and partied away till it was a few minutes before mid night. Then Alisha, went over and took the mic.

Alisha: Hey Guys, it's time for Amar's birthday to end. So let's bring in the cake. And most importantly, his surprise.

Tannu and Archie went around ordering the people to shut the lights off. Amar stood there wondering what all the chaos around him was about. Suddenly the lights were off, and he heard people asking each other to hush. One light focussed on him and the other went to one far corner where he could see a silhouette.

The sound of the mic being passed onto someone broke the silence in the lounge of the pub. Slowly another light focused on the person standing at a corner. Amar narrowed his eyes to have a proper look, and then stood rooted to his place.

Amar: Shaks…

It was all he could say. He heard his friends giggle behind him.

Shakti walked with a trolley in front of her which had a cake. She pushed it with one hand while with the other, she held the mic and sang..

Shakti: Happy Birthday to you, Happy birthday to you, Happy birthday dear Kuwar, Happpye birthday to you.

With that she now stood in front of him and smiled at him widely. Unable to control his emotions, he pulled her into a rib crashing hug.

Amar: Shaks, this is wonderful. Thank you..

Shakti: Oye thank you ke bache. Chal cake kaat.

She spoke to make him laugh and he did. Post the cake cutting the party continued.

Now, Tannu went over to speak on the mic.

Tannu: So guys, we play a game now. I have everyone's names written here in these chits in my mind. Jinka naam ayega they will dance together.

The gang hooted while Amar and Shakti rolled their eyes.

Shakti: Who D3 episode mein hum dono bhi the when you cheated and picked out Rey and Kria's names. And knowing you, we know tu hum dono ka hi naam lega, no matter what.

Everyone laughed.

Tannu: Ok, so now we have Amar and Shaklti dancing for us.

Amar: Yeh toh chalti gaadi mein chad gaya. Chal Shaks, yeh log aise nahi choodenge.

The music started, and they both started grooving to the song Tum Hi Ho from Aashiqui2. They danced holding each other so close, as if, if either of them let the grip losed, they would lose them forever. They say that when two people dance together, a certain bond of intimacy develops between them. This intimacy, was always experienced by either of them. Earlier they both had decided it was just plain infatuation.

However, slowly they both had eventually come to realise that they were in love. Although they had never confessed, either of them knew how exactly the other one felt for them, and they were content with it. Coz they both knew that they were way beyond love confessions. Amar moved his hand around her waist and she left closed her eyes and leaned further into him. It was difficult for either of them to control their desires then, and had it not been for their friends retiring one after another, they would have stayed there, dancing, forever if that was possible.

When they were leaving Amar offered to drop her home since it was late and she gladly agreed. Standing in the elevator of her building, Shakti tried to maintain a straight face and not laugh. This happened to her everytime she was in an elevator with Amar. It always reminded her of the Hayye Rama sequence they had shot and to not make things awkward, she had laughed about it all the time. Amar remembered how one day inside the elevator, she had sat on the floor holding her tummy laughing hard over she only knew what. He decided she was crazy, and he loved this crazy woman.

Amar was still stuck in the mood of the dance and was singing "tum Hi Ho" partly dedicated it to Shakti. When he tried to avt cheesy while singing, Shakti began beating him up. Amar held her hand and looked straight into her eyes. She gasped a little and stopped moving. He pressed the STOP button on the elevator, and wondered what was happening to him. Just a few seconds back, they were fooling around, but something inside him wanted her to stay more with him. all that she had done for him today made him feel so special that all his emotions flooded out from him.

She looked at him half startled. He moved near her, and held her waist. She gasped at his touch and placed her hand on his shoulders with an intention of pushing him away. But then, she didn't and she didn't feel the need to. Instead she reciprocated his action and run her hand down his cheek. He moved more towards her, and pressed his body over hers. They paused, to synchronize their moves. Then he put his hand under her top and started making random designs on her waist. She arched herself towards him and shut her eyes. He glanced at her lips, quivering a little, and parted apart. He kissed her cheek, then moved down toward her nape and kissed her there. He pushed her hair aside, and planted kisses on her shoulders. Her arm went around his shoulder and the other around his neck as she supported herself. Then she opened her eyes, and looked at him, and she saw so much love in those eyes, that she wanted to drown in them. She didn't know what made her do that, but she leaned in and kissed him. He moved back a little startled, and saw the hurt in her eyes. Probably she assumed he didn't want this. Without wasting a second, he held her face and kissed her, licking, sucking her lips and fighting for dominance at the same time. They kissed like there was no tomorrow. Then he leaned his forehead over hers and stayed there for a while.

Their moment was disrupted by the sound of the elevator door opening. She quickly gave him a peck on his cheek, and said a good bye. As for Amar, he stood there, grinning, holding his cheek, staring dreamily at her departing figure.



***The End***


I am sorry If I Disappointed you guys, and I am sorry if this was abrupt. The OS was long overdue and this is the best I could write. I am sorry akanksha, I promise Non ArSha stuff if ever u challenge me, will be better.

Edited by sweetangelpayal - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reserved for Akanksha's Comment

Since she has reserved, jisko chahiye ye reserve, PM karo, first come, first serve basis pe milega 😆

Akanksha's Comment

ok 1stly..u dnt need to be dissapointed at all...it was not at all a bad OS ok...i knw its hard to write on Arsha..so chill...i liked this OS...It was not wat u told me..as if how it would be.. 😆
still..i liked it...
Kunwar being so desperate to for Shakti's wishes...and she gave him surprise d way he would hav nvr imagined...
and der beautiful dance oh Tum hi ho...Aahhh...i wish it happen in real too...
And that lift scene...uske liye bht badaaa wala thanx... Thanx ki tune mere dil ke armaanoan koaasuoan mei nahi bahaya... 😛 🤣
Again ek bina I Love You wala confession... 😳
in all it was nice ok...so chill... 🤗
Edited by sweetangelpayal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kal PC se unres karungi... :P ... And yeah... U dnt need to be sorry... It was not a bad OS re...i really liked it...so no worries... Aal izz well... 😊 🤗
Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this was wonderful!!

absolutely amazing

loved it

the way you expressed their feelings...perfect...:) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res

Unres :D

C I knew.. Y do u underestimate urself hun??? Its a bit dissapointing.. Hell No.. Its Not.. Not at all !

Btw Tnx :) but All is Done by you.. I dint kno,U wud write it dis perfectly !

From d very start of his special Day.. He missed Shakti.. A thought dat she's not wid him today made him Sad.. Haye..

Tannu.. Eeeksss.. As Adorable As Ever 😳 How he understood Kunwar's unspoken words ! 😃

N than came d gifts session.. I could actually visualise d shocked vala surprised vala expression 😳 N than came d Letter.. Ahhh.. It was Heaven.. Every word touches my heart.. It actually defined Arsha's friendship.. There bond :D n In d end.. Kunwar was in Tears.. Even I had dem in my eyes :(

N n n thn came our gang.. Gosh dis is d group dat I miss..

Than d party.. Sad Kunwar.. N than Came His Shaku bai.. Eeeksss :D There Dance.. Pkka Heavenly e hoga 😆 😆 n Than came.. Dat lift moment ! Shakti was trying hard not to laugh rememberin dat Haye Rama scene.. Haha.. Cutooo She's ! N Kunwar was rememberin when she was Rofl ing but He dint kno d reason ! Even I want to know d reason 😛 😛

N uske baad toh jo b likha.. Kya mast likha.. N d best part was.. It dint look weird at all !

Dis OS was a treat to read Payal.. Ur one of those writers whom I always connect to.. B it as a person o as a reader of ur stories !
I love readin ur stories.. They hav something in dem..

Now me waitin for my challenge to u to get posted.. Haha 😛 😆
Edited by Pihu.k11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb OS...
Loved it..
N plzzz don't say it was nt good cox it was just amazing!!!:):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing and awesome os... loved it 👏👏👏👏👏🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome os...
Luvd it
thankx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb os yaar jst luvd it =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesomeee os payal 👏

Looovveeddd ittt 😃

Awww shaks coming for amar 😳

Beautifully written 👏

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