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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Ohgod. peoplwe actually want to listen to MY shayari(makes me nervous:p). I don't even know how to do that 🤣 I just do some shitty stuff and name it as shayari. xD

UPDAATTTEEE :| Accio you want me start with my delusional stuff or what? 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Pious_KaSh
read the preface and it seems quite interesting 😊
looking forward to read chapter 1 that you have already posted [:p]
but I just can't concentrate at the moment 😔

Originally posted by: AMMY12
hey luvd ur concept.
Waiting 4 d part.
Add me in ur pm list.

Originally posted by: Pious_KaSh
first it was all so sweet… but i didnt quite like the end but then the real end was cute

Originally posted by: ..vidhi..
wonderful start guyz...beautifully written!!!!
cont soon...

Originally posted by: Nurshad.kajen
Loved it aditi di..superb..but what happend to ridhima...and want to know from shikha ji is janam mein right choice ka update hoga?

Originally posted by: sara.dmg
nice concept
add me in ur pm list

Originally posted by: AR_LOVER
awesome part
loved it
cont soon

Thank you so much guys! We are glad you liked the part and sorry for being late and we'll update today 😳
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@nurshad- like I told you before TRC I don't presently have any ideas and also not time! I wouldn't have started this FF also if Aditi would've pestered Me because I had been inactive lately :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Mojo.
RESS!
*Edited.
DK <3 Accio <3 Congratulations you both :D I am really intrigued about this story of yours. Accio so agreed Adu is super delusional :| Such a kamini she is, I am telling you I seriously will kick you Adi
-_- Well I am super excited about your FF man! The preface was so amazing and the first chapter too. Amaira (hope that's the right spelling) sounds super cutee. The way she cribbed about her gift, so cute.

Armaan and her sound even cuter together, and yeah Sid and Amaira too. The boyfriend girlfriend part and Armaan getting jealous. Hayeee, extremely cute. Okay Ridhima is missing :| really curious to know what happened to her. Continue super soon and I want a big update. And if you both don't update soon imma spam B) :P And trust me I am getting pretty good at it these days.

P.S. I miss you guys :| I should be more active on AT.

Mojooo jojoo aka mehakk 😆
Glad you liked the part and thank you for the tareef but tareef feels weird coming from you 🤔
Yes do Aditi ka bitching- I love doing it too 🤣
Amaira is cute Kyuki hum bhi bachpan main Bahut cute the 😳 riddhima will come soon in the next update- yeah we saw how you spammed since we updated so late 🤣
And I never heard your shayaris so you could them here! And Start with the delusion stuff Kyuki delusion toh mere khoon main hai so I don't mind
😆

Ps- we miss you too mehak<3 we both have been inactive too :|

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Sanaa629
Ahhh..A new AR fanfiction! just what I need to fill my greedy eyes, AsyA oozing thoughts and AR deprived mind!!

Brilliant start!! I was just sooo surprised to see you posted this up recently! Either way.. You wrote the introduction really well.. the bond between Armaan and Amaira was so adorable! And I have a feeling Sid has something to do with Riddhima (Doesn't he always?) And hey..Rahul was popping the big question..did he? Didn't he? Did he chicken out last minute? Did she say say yes?

Basically all these questions mean..continue SOON!! My mind is being boggled with too much exam and Asad Zoa stuff. I need some AR to calm me down..!! lolx..

Do hurry up..and no need to send pms to me.. I'll stalk this! :D

Sanaa this feels really great coming from you because I've been a big fan of your work and came to IF due to your and shrutika's work 😳
Anyways I'm glad you liked our work and we posted this now because we wrote this now! We were missing AR too with all the QH and SC stuff coming isliye this happened :) And since the forums have been a madhouse lately so we needed some distraction too 😉
It is always amazing to imagine KSG and kids so the adorable connection between Armaan and daughter is always going to be there 😆
And about Sid I don't want to reveal anything but Aditi here likes Sid very much and cvs butchered his character so Sid won't be the haddi surely because Aditi won't let him be 😆
And for the other answers you'll have to read the update which we'll mostly do today! So keep stalking and thanks for reading 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: salmeh.

YAYYY!!! AR story.

</div>Its brilliant. Amaira- Armaan's daughter andArmaan as a father loved the concept. Riddhima where is she ?
And Sid urghh he is something related to Riddhima? Where is Armaan's wife?
Update soon^^
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Originally posted by: Siya6490
Really loved it...
Armaan has a daughter...
She is so cute...
Where is her mother?..
and who is watching them? is it ridhima?...
Continue soon... thnx for the pm...

Originally posted by: Chotu_Babu
My Dear Awesome Duo...

brilliant start !!!! juz loved it lots nd fell in luv wth ur story alrdy... beautifully written... plzz do cont. soon.. i'm really curious after reading the last line... is that "she" is ridzy?? well.. i think so... waiting...

t.c...

😊

Thank you so much guys! We are glad you liked the part and sorry for being late and we'll update today 😳
Patience Rakho bacho- do you really think I'll answer your questions 🤣 uske liye read the next update :P
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@salwa- about the Sid question I answered it in sanaa's reply upar 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY
amazing concept😊😊..loved the update❤️..waiting eagerly for the next update..continue soon..and thanks for the pm😃

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Hey guys
Love thestarting
Love Armaan and his daughter bond
waana read more
so do try tocontinuesoon
Thanks for the PM
Take care


Geet

Originally posted by: RiDz_rox
wow this is awesome...loved it...both the preface and the first chapter were awesome...cant wait to read the next part

Originally posted by: Sayali_KSG
wiw nice start...luv the concept...waiting for next part...continue soon
thnx for pm

Originally posted by: swabie
sounds intersting...

Thank you so much guys! We are glad you liked the part and sorry for being late and we'll update today 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: -Deepshikhaa-
Okay Shikha and Aditi my CLOWN AND ADUU PADDUUU <333
You guys made me cryyy :| I AM SERIOUS :| You guys know my love for babies right? and MOREOVERRR imagining Armaan with his baby doll made me smile so wide..and I was crying through out the part..I know I am crazy :P BUT BUTTT BUTT <3 I loved the way you guys have put it in

WAITING FORR THE NEXTTT PARRTTT!!!!!!!!
SO EXCITED TO KNOW ABOUT RIDDHIIMAA AND EVERYTHINGG :|
CONTINUE SOOON.😃

Merii PIGGYY 🤗
Glad you liked the part 🤔
Yea you are right- YOU ARE CRAZYY! Aisa part main who cries and I am actually soching that what will you do when we actually write am emotional part 🤣
and since you mentioned how your love for babies made you cry,what will you do when KaJen ke bache come then 😆
Now riddhima will come in the next part so you don't have to wait more since we'll be updating today 😃
Now I goes Kyuki part bhi update karna hai 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: .BezubaanPari.
Okay I'm done reading. Now commenting. First of all what was that =| and why was it not posted BEFORE!😡That was so cute! I love the boyfriend and girlfriend angle between sid and amira. And I bet the girl watching is Riddhima. Also what happened to Armaan's wife/girlfriend? Anywho update soon cause I want to read more!

Tashuu 🤗
This was not posted before Kyuki we wrote this abhi hi 😆 We are glad you liked the part since we loveee your work so it is a big compliment coming from you 😳
Since I am not the ones who keep suspense- yes it is riddhima watching, so you are right 🤣
About Armaan's wife uske liye you have to wait :)
We are FINALLY updating now so go get your update ready too for your shop and FF since we both are very demanding people 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Hello people 😃 I know we have been seriously been late on the update but yeah college and school starts are always tiring :( So sorry for that and we'll update soon and yeah this SOON will be faster than last time 😆 ANDD this is our new banner all thanks to MONI 🤗

Chapter 2

She smiled looking at the silhouettes on the adjacent balcony. She was the lone spectator of their cute little talks and wondered how much love they had for each other. She smiled as she turned around and walked into the bedroom reminiscing her moments with her dad.She snuggled into the comforter enjoying its softness and warmth,finally letting her exhausted body finally take some rest.

x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x

Feeling the air in her face she smiled and inhaled the air.She shook her head as she jogged around in the park. The air wasn't pure like her hometown,where the smell of flowers and freshly baked cakes made people stop and look.
Here the polluted air had the smell of take-away coffees and donuts.She shrugged her shoulders and smiled wanting to adjust to this city soon.She turned on the volume of the song as she looked around,outside the fence of the park to see people running around to work,shouting out to taxis and eating their breakfast in a hurry.She could see children playing around in the park and some teenagers doing stunts with their basketballs and skateboards. She was suddenly getting good vibes about the place as the song shuffled and she hummed the lyrics-'tonight's gonna be a good good night,' tapping her fingers on her iPod.

She looked on as some guy checked her out while she panted while keeping her hand on her waist. It was regular for her. She had always been attractive and quite popular in college for her looks adding to that the long list of academics and sports . She grinned widely as the phone in her pocket of her jogger bottoms vibrated-taking off her ear-phones she tapped a button on the bluetooth on her ear and spoke in a chirpy voice-
"Yes mom."
"..."
"No, I'm okay mom-stop being hyper!"
"..."
"Yeah just reached last night.Loads of unpacking to do. Joey is coming up to help me."
"..."
"No Mom I don't know what problem you have with the poor guy. Joey's my best friend mom!And Nikki can't come she is busy,end of month so the magazine's issue is up."
"..."
"Why do you have to keep calling Joey as 'goraa'-he's a nice guy mom and I can't go around telling Indian boys that my mom wants a punjabi munda to be my best friend , so pleasee be my best friend."
"..."
"Stop it mom- why do you always have to talk about my marriage ! I know you will miss me but is my dream job mom."
"..."
"I know mom! I'll take care-love you! Give love to dad
and Sia. Bye."
"..."

She opened her pony as she reached the steps of her building,moving her hand in her
waist-length silky hair.Fiddling with her keys she put the key in her lock when she heard a ball bouncing behind her.She turned,to find herself looking at a small kid of almost 4-5 years stumbling and falling down. She ran to the child helping her when the little girl pushed her fringe of her silky straight hair from her eyes and brushed the dust of the elbow and knee standing up looking at the stranger with her blue big eyes. Riddhima looked surprised as the little girl didn't cry but just got up like nothing happened and was instantly fascinated by the small child.

Riddhima smiled and said," Are you okay?"

The little girl hesitantly smiled and said in a low voice,"Yes! I'm okay ! Thank you."
Riddhima looked at the cute girl admiring her dimpled smile and bend down,forwarding her hand," Hi I am Riddhima! And you are?"

The little girl still looked hesitant so Riddhima smiled her best smile and made a puppy face,"Hey baby! Don't be scared.I'm your new neighbour! You can tell me your name. "

The little girl relaxed and smiled brightly this time putting her tiny palm in Riddhima's hand-"I'm Amaira ! I have to go now-Bye." And with that Amaira ran away , knocking on the door of the apartment besides Riddhima's.

Riddhima smiled as she saw the door opening up and looked as Amaira squealed and jumped into a man's arms. The man was bare-chested wearing only a pair of trousers. She could only see the side of his face and had to agree-the side profile looked good.She tried to see his face properly when her analyzing was stopped in between by Amaira's voice,"Papa.! You know I played so much with Sam today.."

Riddhima looked on as the man looked adoringly at his daughter and nodded smilingly as her daughter blabbering.His husky voice hit her ears,"Yes my little angel-"
And that was the last thing before the door closed.She sighed as she opened the apartment door looking at the mess.She took her out her shoes while putting them in the rack while mumbling to herself,"Damn what luck! I have a hot neighbor who is MARRIED" With that she fell down on the sofa for a quick nap.

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Riddhima tied her hair in a messy bun as she sat down on the couch , tired after three hours of continuous hard work of setting up her new apartment.She tilted her head back resting it against the head-rest and closed her eyes trying to catch rest in the quick nap. Before the eye-closing could be called a nap,she heard a annoyed shout.
"Ridzy so mat aur bata yeh magazines kahaan rakhni hai?"

This was the voice of Nikita Malhotra aka Nikki , family friend's daughter turned childhood bestie ! The usual bachpan ki friend who had seen
everything ranging from first day school crying , peer competition
, first crushes , insults , embarrassing falls , pimples , girl problems , parents ki daat , date-night clothes confusion , new friend insecurities , cat-fights , career confusion , job nervousness - oh well everything. As annoying Nikki could be with her underestimating self she was the one person Riddhima could tell everything and expect a honest POV. And Nikki being their family friends' daughter could bail out Riddhima from her parent's scolding and could get her permission for those cool parties during her teenage years. But as much as Nikki was a savior she could be a devil too for plotting ways to annoy her by teaming up with Riddhima's sister.

She jolted back to the present as she heard an annoyed shout again.
"Nikki yaar tujhe pehli bhi bola tha TV ke neeche waala cabinet main rakh de ! Don't annoy me purposely- ek toh I am already annoyed with Joey for ditching me last minute," Riddhima shouted back.

She laid her head back again trying to rest a little. She had done up the cleaning , stocking up her fridge with groceries and setting up some of the
furniture but still much of her unpacking was left.She sighed angrily as somebody tapped her shoulder.

"Kya hai yaar?? People can't even let me rest for a moment,"she whined while opening her eyes.

"Thand rakh puttar- le juice pee.Enna gussa theek nahi hota," Nikki spoke in a thick punjabi accent,chuckling a little while handing her one of those packet-ed juices.

"Nikki stop behaving like my mom and let me rest," Riddhima whined while taking a quick sip of the juice and lying back again. She groaned as her quick nap was ruined again by the shrill bell ring.

"I'll get it" she heard Nikki shout from the kitchen.

She sighed and bend a little over the couch to look at the visitor as Nikki opened the door.
The person entered the house only to get a pillow in the face.

"What the hell man! Calm down Reeedhii,"he grinned shamelessly ignoring her fuming expressions and thumping down on the couch beside Riddhima.

"Joey kamine you were supposed to come and help me two hours ago! And dare you call me that name again-how many times do I have to tell you to stop calling me THAT, asshole !" Riddhima blasted at him while hitting him on his arm.

"Bitch stop hitting me man!Your mom calls you that , Reeedhii ,"Joey cheekily replied while catching her hand in mid-way and then putting his own hand around her shoulder and said," Anyways my date was too hot today so well ..You know.." he winked at her , grinning widely.

"Kamine leave me ! I hate it even when my mom calls me that, " she wiggled in his hold while making faces at the her annoying nickname.

"And you can go continue your date with your hot date because your date is apparently more important than your 'best friend' ," she huffed folding her hands.

"Ridz man you are obviously more important ! but sweetheart think,what is more
appealing- a hot girl Or hours of shifting furniture and dusting stuff, " He stressed on the words using his hands for showing the options.

Riddhima smacked his head she stood up, "Aww Joey such a 'gentleman' you are- leaving your two girl best friends to lift heavy stuff while you enjoy on a date.How thoughtful !" Glaring at him,she started to arrange stuff at their place.

"Shut up guys ! How much are you to going to fight.Joey there is some of her stuff which has to be put in the upper cabinets- can you go do that first and Ridz eat this sandwich, you didn't have lunch!" Nikki said while putting the tray on the table.

Riddhima grinned and stuffed the sandwich in the mouth, "Thanks Nikki- you are a darling man." She gobbled on the food as Nikki said," And go call your mom , your Phone is ringing in the room from the last 15 mins."
Riddhima groaned and strode off towards the room whining,"Abhi toh ek ghante pehle baat kiya tha yaar."

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The trio slumped on the couch laying their heads back on the head-rest , feet on the table. The bell rang as Riddhima
shouted and ran to open the door.
"Pizzzaa!" She brought the boxes,putting them on the table.

"Man I was so hungry ! Thank god the pizza is here",Joey said as he took a piece stuffing it in his mouth.

"Ridz is something left for setting up here?" Nikita asked while taking a sip of the diet coke.

"Uhmm.Yeah some stuff is - uhmm..going to come Tom-uhm-orrow.." Riddhima replied while literally stuffing the pizza in her mouth.

"Sorry Ridz I can't come tomorrow- the issue is up for publishing so we have a meeting." Nikki said.

"Yeah. I can't come tomorrow too and noo I do not have a date" he said as riddhima gave him a glare," I have to go to DC for an assignment from my company." Joey continued.

"okay guys I'll handle it-don't worry. What do you want to do now?" she replied still hogging the pizza.

"Put on FRIENDS- I haven't been able to watch it in a long time.." Nikki said.

"Okay.." Riddhima said as she put on the CD in the player and sitting on the couch as Chandler&Joey's antics started on the screen.

"This is TOW the football na.?" Joey asked.

"Yeah man I love this episode," Ridhima replied as she laughed seeing Monica-Ross' wierd way of giving the finger.

The trio laughed , hogged the food teasing each other , catching up with each other's life as night fell.

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Edited by Sunsets - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

YAY it's not a NOTE!🤣 I'm so happies!😃 So I just read the update and I have to say that it was so cute. I can so picture everything. I loved how you showed Riddhima's intro. It was different. I also loved Nikki and Joey! they are too funny! What else can I say oh..FRIENDS! Hawww :O you made me miss that show. Now I feel like watching it. I hate you. Also I loved riddihima's thoughts about Armaan! I was like how cute is that. Oh and your banner is so pretty! I love moni<3 Okies I'm done. NOW UPDATE FASTER! OR ELSE!😡😈

Edited by .BezubaanPari. - 12 years ago