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Natasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#431

awesome update loved it both couples are finally engaged loved buaji n nk
amazing interpretation rashmi

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sujata5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#432

Super as always Rashmi...

I am genuinely amazed at your power with words and to join them so beautifully .. They are like "rhapsodic melodies"playing in front of our eyes and bringing happiness to our soul...

Thanks for such amazing quotes and such an amazing analysis.. I bow down to your power of observation and interpretation...

Thanks for the PMs..

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Jyothsna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#433

Loved this story very much.

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Arshipriya16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#434

Lovely update di.I want to sing d song for this occasion.
WAHA WAHA RAMJI JODI KYA BANAYI,
ARNAV AUR KHUSHI KO BADHAYI HO BADHAYI,
SAB RASMON SE BADI HAI JAG MEN DIL SE DIL KI SAGAI.
Ur interpretation also very nice di.
My net's validity got ended today so dnt know when will i join.
I'll miss all of u.

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Farwa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#435

Awesomeee

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I just loveddd it... so cute n romantic

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831628

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Posted: 12 years ago

#436

Awesome update.

"Happiness is not something ready made. It comes from your own actions"

~ Dalai Lama XIV

Loved it...😊

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swetha10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#437

Wow awesome..

luved the sagai..

continue soon

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#438

WELL... LOOK WHO IS BACK!!!

IT'S MEEE!!!! 🤣

OKAY!!! VERY SORRY FOR NOT BEING REGULAR!!!!

I HAD TAKEN A BREAK FROM READING! NOW THAT I'M BACK!

HERE'S MY VISHESH TIPPANI on Chapter 31, 32 and 33.

I'm soo loving the story Smita! All the three chapters were ADORABLE! ❤️ 😳 This story is really Addictive! 😳

I'm rushing through the comments as I have another 89 PMz to hit! 😭

Chapter 31 (Highlights):

Khushi looked at the sparkling diamond rings placed in front of her with a jaundiced eye.

Arnav bit back his laughter. "Kya hua, Khushi? You don't like any of them?"

She shook her head.

The assistants moved the samples away, and replaced them with more diamond rings.

Khushi frowned.

"You don't like diamonds, Khushi?" Arnav asked, laughter bubbling away in his heart.

"Arnavji, they are so... sooo dull. Pheeka! There is no colour in them! What is the fun in wearing a ring with a stone that has no colour in it?" Khushi scrunched up her face.

The sales assistant's mouth fell open in shock. The nitwit was refusing diamonds worth a king's ransom for cheap stuff?

Arnav's body shook with laughter. He asked the assistants to show them rings with precious stones, that too colourful ones.

Khushi looked happily at the sea of ruby, emerald, jade, amethyst, sapphire, & turquoise rings laid out before her.

She dug through them, examining them carefully before discarding them. Arnav sat watching her, amused.

"Arnavji, can I take this?" she finally asked, pointing to a white gold band with two heart-shaped rubies. "It has both of our hearts in it."

Arnav nodded, swallowing hard.

He took the ring out of its box, and, holding her hand in his, gently placed it on her ring finger. Her hand trembled.

"Lagi tumhein?" he asked, concerned.

She nodded.

"Kahan?" he asked, looking at her finger for a cut or a bruise.

"Here." she whispered, placing her right hand on her heart.

Arnav looked into her eyes for a moment, and in front of the startled eyes of hundreds of assistants and customers, the normally undemonstrative, khadoos, akhdoo Arnav Singh Raizada kissed Khushi Kumari Gupta's rosy cheek.

The para above ^^^.. It was so sweet! A.D.O.R.A.B.L.E.❤️

ROMANCE in the Jewelry Store! Kya baat hai ASR!!! 👏 I loved the whole convo between them!

Chapter 32 (Highlights):

"Arnavji! What would the others have thought about you? And us? In front of all of them'" Khushi blushed and blushed, while Arnav smirked and smirked.

"Don't smile like that!" Khushi instructed.

"Like what?" he asked, still smiling.

"Like... like the cat who steals into Buaji's kitchen and drinks the milk. This is how he smiles at me when I see him and try to shoo him away!" Khushi complained.

Arnav smirked. "Oh! So the cat smiles at you?"

Khushi fumed. "Yes. After stealing the milk. Just like you."

"What did I steal?" he asked, his molten eyes drinking in her furious face, his husky voice touching her skin through her clothes.

Khushi crossed her arms, feeling the prick of his all-seeing eyes and his seductive voice. She rubbed her arms. They were sitting on the cot in Buaji's yard, enjoying the night air and the canopy of stars.

Arnav smiled, "Kya hua, Khushi? Feeling cold?"

Khushi frowned at him. "Don't change the topic, Arnavji! Why did you have to...?"

"What did I do?" an innocent Arnav asked her.

Khushi glared at him, her cheeks still rosy. "You don't know what you did?" she asked.

Arnav pursed his lips and looked at the night sky, leaning back on his arms. "What did I do? I sat with you. I looked at the rings with you. I bought you the ring you liked. What else did I do?"

Khushi raised her clenched fists in the air, and growled, "Grrr..."

"Oh! Did you mean this?" he asked as he leaned swiftly towards her and placed a loud smack on her plump cheek.

The para above ^^^.. It was tooo C.U.T.E ❤️

Arnav is turning into a complete cheesy movie hero! ☺️

Smirking, grinning all the time and FULL ON PDA! ☺️ I'm highly impressed with the drastic change in him! 😳

Way to go Nannav! 👍🏼

Chapter 33 (Highlights):

First,

Arnav looked at the stairs eagerly, hoping for a glimpse of Khushi.

Anjali smiled and nudged him. "Looking for Khushiji?" she asked, smirking.

Arnav flushed. "Isn't it time for the sagai, Di?" he asked.

"Sabar karo, Chotey!" she laughed.

"It has been 28 years." Arnav muttered. Anjali burst out laughing.

This ^^^^ was sooo cute! Arnav is sooo desperate and Anjali is pulling his legs! Awww... 😳 👏

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Second,

Khushi leaned closer to Arnav, her arm touching his.

"Two down. Four more to go." he whispered.

Khushi giggled.

"You look beautiful." Arnav whispered.

Khushi smiled, her eyes glowing with love. "Anamikaji sent me this lehenga yesterday. She wrote, 'A colourful lehenga for a rangeeli Khushi Kumari Gupta!' on the card inside the box."

Arnav lowered his head to hide his smile.

Awww... How CUTE could this get Smita! This was ^^^ so Aww-able! Loved every bit! ❤️

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Third,

Khushi looked at the ring on Arnav's finger, and said, smiling mischievously, "Now you are all mine, Arnavji! Where will you run when I tease you?"

Arnav smiled into her eyes, and then whispered in her ear. "Who said I will want to run, Khushi soon-to-be Arnav Singh Raizada?"

The para above ^^^.. WHAT A WAY TO END THE CHAPTER! 👏 ❤️

COMPLETELY MESMERIZING!

@Smita: Love you sooo much for the update... 🤗

@Rashmi: Thanks for the PM! 😉 Love you! 🤗 Awesome Interpretation for all the missed chapters!

Continue soon! Desperately waiting for Next Chapter!

Loads of love, ❤️

Mrina 😊

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 12 years ago