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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG OMG OMG!!!

This was such a fantastic Chapter!!

Arnav Khushi...

Now waiting for Rash to res! :D

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I'm FIRST???? 😲 Yayyy!!!!

HERE'S MY VISHESH TIPPANI on Chapter 34..


This was such a super cute Update! Arnav and Khushi singing along "Humein Tumse Pyaar Kitna!"... Haaye!!!

Now for Highlights:

Arnav walked into Buaji's house. The door was open and there was no one in the living room. He looked around for Khushi. She was nowhere to be found. The TV was on, and was playing old Bollywood movie songs.

The smell of jalebis wafted on the air. Arnav smiled. Lucknow's Jalebi Rani was making jalebis for her sweet stall. He strode towards the kitchen on silent feet.

Hamein tumse pyaar kitna, yeh hum nahin jaante
Magar jee nahin sakte, tumhare bina…, Sanka Devi sang along with Kishore Kumar, looking at a jalebi she was holding up in the air, her eyes full of love.

Hamein tumse pyaar…

She kissed the jalebi, and then popped it in to her mouth.

Arnav had to bite his lip to stop his chuckles, helped by Kishore Kumar's doleful lament.

Humein intezaar kitna, yeh hum nahin jaaante
Magar jee nahin sakte, tumhare bina…

Sanka Devi sang along with him, turning jalebis that were dancing in the hot, bubbling oil.

Arnav continued,

Tumhein koi aur dekhe, toh jalta he dil
Badi mushkilon se phir sambhalta he dil…

Khushi dropped the slotted spoon in the oil, her eyes like saucers, her mouth open, standing as though petrified.

Kya kya jatan karte he, tumhe kya pata…

"Arnavji!" she squealed.

He walked towards her and switched off the stove.

Yeh dil bekarar kitna, yeh hum nahin jaante
Magar jee nahin sakte, tumhare bina…

He walked closer to her, making her walk backwards in to the cooking platform, his molten chocolate eyes on her wide ones.

Hamein tumse pyaar kitna yeh hum nahin jaante
Magar jee nahin sakte, tumhare bina… Kishore Kumar crooned.

Arnav cupped her face and pressed his eager lips on her sweet lips stained with jalebi syrup, pulling her into his arms, longing to make her warmth, innocence, and laughter a part of him. His fingers made their way in between hers, his engagement ring rubbing against hers.

A long time later, his lips left hers with great reluctance.

"Where are the others?" he asked softly.

"Temple." she whispered, pulling him closer.

"Your jalebis?" he asked, smiling.

"They will wait." she said.


The para above ^^^.. It was so sweet! A.D.O.R.A.B.L.E.❤️

Arnav and Khushi naughty naughty! 😉

Hum Tum Ghar mein Akele.. And she says, "Jalebis can wait!" OMG!!! That's not the Khushi I know! 😉 😆

Aage ka scene bhi likh do Smita.. Mujhe ek Kiss dekhna hai! 😳


@Smita: Love you sooo much for the update... 🤗



@Rashmi: FINALLY!! Gotchya before the PM! 😉 Love you! 🤗


Continue soon! Desperately waiting for Next Chapter!

Loads of love, ❤️

Mrina 😊
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
FINALLY I GOT TO BE FIRST! CAN I PARTY? 🥳

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS SUPER DUPER ADORABLE CHAPTER SMITA! 🤗

AB DESPERATE FOR AAGE! 😳


Edited by -Mrinalini- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing part
loved it
wana see anamika's and ganesh's pic
Edited by sspoorthy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was such a sweet update!!!

thw way khushi made jelebis with the song!!😆😆

and arnav sealing it with his lips on hers!! and the line you ended with she can wait!!!😳😳 too good smita!!! and thanks rulama for the pms!! amazing story ever!!

btw i read your story life without you with 59 updates in just 2 days!! it was ssooo good!!!!!!! lovely writing smita!!👏👏
Edited by coolbakes - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved d update
OMG Ganesh nd Anamika's first kiss 😳
pls update soon
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super adorable part Smita. Finally Arnavji wins over jalebis... As Khushi kumar I Gupta prefers a taste of him over her beloved jalebis 😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Smitaji loved the update.
I am not complaining , such a short part of Arshi..and to be very frank
I don't like it. Please give an update with Arshi only or with the long
part of Arshi.

Loved Arshi' s part very much.
Jalebi can wait...

Reshu thanks ...for the pm.
Take care dears.
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Posted: 12 years ago
ufff both of these two couples. ☺️

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Posted: 12 years ago
Res

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Kissable Update 😆

I really Adore your Ganesh...He is so caring and loving...Simply love him when he makes Anamika comfortable...

"I kissed you, and you can't even return it!" she pouted. "Kanjoos' makhichoos'" she teased him. I really like this new Anamika...naughty and teasing...

Hayeee...First KISS...😳

Awesome song...Lucknow's jalebi rani...hahahahahaaa...

Arnav singing song😲

Ahhh Sugary Kiss...☺️

Smita And Rashmi...Muah Muah Muah...🤗
Edited by rocking meenu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
What an update just 👏

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