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Shivangi

@peraltagasm

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

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I missed reading this FF dii! I will cmment once I finish reading it from the start.

keep pming me dii! I may take some time to finish reading as I'm busy with my projects! Will defo comment once i'm done with them! Ugh! Projects suck! X-| :-P Anyways, Keep pming me dii! :) :) :)

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Jalebi bai

@Breezy.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

The update was awesome... Lol ms tsunami😆

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Debu

@crazy2012

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Vishy, again I am saying I just love your appropriate words which you always use to express emotions..yea interesting and lovely😊

so that was rey behind the book shell...ummm..😉 and she loves to eat those things..Swayam thinks that could be Rey, so is that goin to happen that Shivam also can fall for Taani..ya only for Sharon or Shreya😳

pls update soon this one..I am waiting😊

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chandrima

@chand91

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

res

unres

awsm updat

plz pm me whn u updat

Edited by chand91 - 12 years ago

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nithi_newlife

@nithi_newlife

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

That was an awesome update...I know you must be wondering what made this girl comment after sooo many days...sorry almost months!!

To confess the truth...I read it just now...

Was sick and damn irritated spending all time sleeping...So was thirstily browsing for some good updates and I remembered this ss...

And yea I had found chapter3 updated...

Just loved it...

And I don't know exactly what to say...It was more kind of realistic!!!

Great job!!

And yea even a simple update can be made beautiful with perfect choice of words and a beautiful concept can be ruined by not expressing the emotions properly...This is my personal opinion on any books or ff's...

And for this ss I would like to say that the choice of words, the way Taani is being portrayed and ofcourse your writing which displays your maturity adds spice to your SS!!

Would love to read the next chapter whenever you update!!

Love

Nithi😊

Edited by nithi_newlife - 12 years ago

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Vishwa

@-Inferno-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: ..dinu..
heeh im rofling..nice update dr..taarey are impossible.luvly update:)

Thank you!
Yeah they are impossible lol

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Vishwa

@-Inferno-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: patie
lol update ws kinda funny..u write so perfectly..👍🏼 i cn easily relate to ur story..wat gang is planing ..? Rey n gang r frnds? Eagerly waiting fr next update..n yeah i hv seen ur name in TR AT n also knw dat u r old member 😳 i already knew ur name nw dont ask me hw😆

Wow! Should I be worried??😆
But thank you!

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Vishwa

@-Inferno-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: dildostidance09
Mindblowing update..!!
Loved the sisters scence..!!
Awww..poor taani..!!
That was so funny..!!
And can't wait to knw what r these guys upto..!!
Eagerly waiting for the nxt update..!!
And Thanx for the pm..!!

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it

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Vishwa

@-Inferno-

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey
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I missed reading this FF dii! I will cmment once I finish reading it from the start.

keep pming me dii! I may take some time to finish reading as I'm busy with my projects! Will defo comment once i'm done with them! Ugh! Projects suck! X-| :-P Anyways, Keep pming me dii! :) :) :)

LOL...I don't know where you are anymore Shivs!
But I will pm you 😳