TR SS: CONVOLUTED (Completed) - Page 16

Awesome update
really loved it
update soon

Taani is too funny lol
Love the way Rey smirk at her lol
Wonderful update, beautifully written
I love it

Loved it; especially the interactions between rey and taani. And I love how he teases her too. Great update!

Reserved..
Will unres as soon as possible, di.. Sorry! :-/

-Edited-

Thank goodness you updated, di. I thought that even you were going to discontinue your amazing amazing FF.. Thank you tons for continuing it.

I completely loved this part's name - Reyaansh Singhania...

The first three paragraphs were just so adorable for me. Him thinking about her.. Haye! And Shilpa came in cursing? Maybe she just had a break up or fight with Armaan? 🤔 (Yeah! I read that part before. 😆 )

I simply love the names Taani gave to Rey. Khadoos Singhania, Hot and Handsome Singhania... 😆 This girl is in a fix, can I say? Fighting with a handsome guy.. 😆

"Class mein sambhal ke jaana, humne abhi haal pauncha (mopped) lagaya hai," said the janitor who was putting up 'Wet here; walk with caution' signs.

I smirked at the signs'honestly who couldn't see the floor is wet?

But before I could analyze more my foot tripped on the entrance of the class door and there I went on the ground.

Flat on the ground.

I managed to pick myself up and looked in front. There it was'that sign!Mocking me!


🤣 🤣 This was hilarious.. I mean seriously! 🤣

"Ms.Tsunami, tum hamesha aise hi girti ho ya aaj ka din hi kuch aisa hai?"

😆

I liked the Shilpa Taani convo.. And I liked their bonding too about which I'll talk in the next comment... 😆

I absolutely LOVED the boys' convo.. I was like Taani somehow brought the old and fun Rey back. That was adorable to read and the boys' antics were funny to imagine.. 😆 You write those parts amazingly. I have noticed that.. And the best example about it is Maar Dala.. 😃

And then.. Chemistry!! *raises hands to do the same* I just so miss it now.. I so love the D3 boys for just doing that so perfectly!

I am confused about Kriya-Rey relation... I wanna know about it real fast now.. But I guess I have to wait. But it feels great to see that Taani makes Rey laugh.. I mean.. He is laughing after a long time, no? So.. Yeah! 😛

Loving Swayam, here. I am so loving him. ❤️

And Taani and Rey have to work together. 😎 Perfect.

Fine sir. I will do it. But, who is the GS?"

"Reyansh. Reyansh Singhania."

He left and I pondered. Singhania? Who the hell was he?

"Me."

Did I just say that out loud?

"Yes"

[LOL]

"Oh'wait'I need your number." I bring out my phone and see him smiling at me wickedly.

"Desperate aren't you, sweetheart?" He says in a flirty tone.

I don't know why but I love this Rey. 😳

And my favourite part...

Before I realized.

Bang!

I bumped into the closed door. I rubbed my head and tried to get out before Rey noticed. But I think he did because he slapped his head in frustration after looking at me.

"Tsunami, kabhi nahi sudhrogi!" He yelled out while I walked out of the room.

I was just solving some Maths sums today when I started imagining this particular part. Don't ask me why or how.. But I did. I was smiling like an idiot sitting there. That was when I decided to come and edit my comment.

Will be editing the other comment in a short while. In an hour or so.. 😳

PS: I love your lamba lamba updates.. I have no problems in giving extra lamba comments for them... 😆

nice update...thanx for d pm 😳

It was super amazing...

superb update...