TR SS: CONVOLUTED (Completed) - Page 11

res will unres friday 😆

Originally posted by: ShReya_TaaRey

Di!

Sorry for that.. 😆 But I am so so so happy after reading that update. Seriously. How in the world can you write so amazingly? I want to know. Do tell me na. 😳

The name of the update kind of made me curious to read it. I loved the title. And then we saw Taani eating so much and Sne saying that she'll get fat. 😆 This makes me think that you are a foodie too. Aren't you? 😳

And the Kik-Titli scene.. Loved it. This line made me Rofl:

"Haan...toh..maine kaha tha use Nirma washing powder ki advertisement karne ke liye?" I said referring to the extremely clean, crisp and white shirt he had been wearing.

Seriously? Nirma washing powder? 🤣 And you say you can't write humor.

And the next day, the whole library scene was kind of cute. 😳 It's just Taani's second day at school and she already has two name.. 😆 Tsunami and Miss. Chilli.. 😆 Tsunami is a nice one.. I love it. I can imagine how Rey would have called her Tsunami and she would have got hell irritated. 😆 Boys ki ek khasiyat hoti hai.. Irritating people. God gifted talent. 😆

The whole chotu TR convo was lovely. The way Rey cut her and said 'Singhania' and the way he mumbled 'Tsunami'.. Loved it all..

After that the canteen scene was amazing too. I love Taani-Swayam friendship already. He calls her Miss. Chilli and that shows how nice friends they are. And te boys said they were practicing Bharatnatayam? 😆 And Taani believed them? 🤣

Swayam's POV was interesting too. But the end... 🤔 I am confused, di. How cna it change their lives? I guess now we will see why this FF was given the title, 'Convoluted'. Gosh! I am so excited to read further. I can't tell you how much I am in love with this FF and your style of writing. Just amazing.

The precap confused me more. 😆 Update soon soon soon, di. I am waiting. 😳

Hey my Bundle of Sunshine!
Kisses back at you dear!

Wow?! 😲 You are actually happy after reading this...I am surprised to say the least because I thought that this update would make people upset more that TR aren't being intense or romantic etc...but so sweet that it made you happy!
Honestly, I don't know yaar how I write to be honest...just do 😆
Foodie...oh yes! Hence the "Moti" or "Fatty" nicknames...I love food and don't really care about anyone else. I just feel that this hype on being skinny is unrealistic and I absolutely adore chubby and healthy people!
Oh yeah the Nirma powder punch line...😆...that wasn't even intentional! I was just being myself and I was thinking...hmm...if I was there I'd probably yell at the guy for having extremely white clothes 🤣 honestly everytime I do something of the sort...But yeah...nirma just popped up
I don't write comedy though...more like comedy cum sarcasm
Haha...yup boys ko irritate karna hi accha lagta hai aur kuch kaam dhaam bhi nahi hota inn logon ke paas...And the worst is that they find us being irritated/mad amusing...ufff
The nicknames are going to continue because personally I love naming people different things 😆 recent discovery is "Chubby Bunny" 😳
Gang scenes will be incorporated...I really want her to have a good rapport with them.

Swayam's point of view was there so that we can get a sense what the boys were doing. Well it's not like they will get married or anything but they will be together and THAT is what will be changing their lives forever...but I could still mix it up! 😳😆

Thanks again!

superb update...

Originally posted by: crazy2012

Hi Vishi..(I like this name and will call you by it, hope you don't mind😳)

nice knowing you😊

I am Debu..naam toh suna hi hoga😉😆

I love reading your writing..well done..just reading your small interview before update, will read the other soon..I wish to know two more things about you..

1.your fav FF writer in the forum
2. your fac FF

Love
Deb

Hey Debu!
Feel free to call me whatever you want...I have dealt with crazy names 😆
Thank you so much for taking the time out for reading the update and the so called interview!

1. Favourite FF writer:
Geesshh...This one is HARD! Like I said I never really have favourite authors but I DO have a preference. So I would say that there are MANY writers that I like on the forum (and I will list them after). But, I prefer reading work that has a good integration of concept, characters, plot, dialogues etc. I absolutely HATE reading work that has too many abbreviations or things that aren't written in a proper format. Hence, that is why I prefer people that take the time to write full sentences and paragraphs. Also the vocabulary used and sentence structure intrigues me as well.

So just to name a few TaaRey FF writers:
1) You...I do read your work and have to say that it's inspiring. From the concept to the vocabulary you have it all!

2) Dipu_taarey...She always comes up with new and interesting concepts.

3) Shreya and Shivangi...Two extremely talented writers. I would have never been able to guess that they are younger than me but they get me GLUED to their work.

4) Angel... Her writing his just as angelic as her...loved the recent "Tum Tak" OS

5) Neha (miss_neha).. Her work is detailed and thorough...so I like to read it

6) nithi_newlife...Her FF "Destiny's Decision" is one of my favourite...the concept is new and she keeps the hint of reality in her FF.

There are obviously a lot more people and they know it from when I press like or comment...but those were just a few that I regularly follow.

Other than TaaRey FF writers....:

1) lazyleaves...she is the master when it comes to writing the most painful love stories but also extremely versatile!

2) Anarocksick...you need to read "It's Complicated" to get a taste of what humor really is all about

3) TheWandmaker...she is something else! Her stories were subtle and beautifully written.

4) -Dee-...mostly found in the writer's corner but her work is detailed, thorough and heart wrenching.

Once again...there are LOTS that I have admired in the past and few that I am still discovering...


2. My favourite Fanfiction:

I love everything that's comedy so at the moment I'm obsessed with "It's Complicated" by Anarocksick. I know that it's on Arnav and Khushi but its a complete different story and everyone should give it a try.
But for a TaaRey FF; I really Iike "Destiny's Decisions" by nithi_newlife and "THLH" by you 😆 Others I am always ready to read...these two are just my awaited upda😳tes

Originally posted by: vijichandran

superb update...

kiki n teetli convo ws nice...

swayam's pov ws awesome...

rey n taani's f8 ws🤣

update soon

Thank you so much Viji ( I hope I can call you that😳)

awesome update..

firstly the way u write...flwaless

Awesomeee update!!!) I loveddd it!!!!!

Originally posted by: zaynsgirl

awesome update..

smirks n chillies😉

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: zoharocks

firstly the way u write...flwaless

secondly the update was way too cool...send me the pm please...

Aw...that's sweet of you to say...
will add you...and thank you