Finding Love #6: COMPLETED

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barauni

@barauni

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Posted: 12 years ago

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1) Thankyou for the dedication Nidhi Di😃

2) I must say that the update was steaming and hot!!!!!!😳

3) Arnav prepared that bed and Khushi asked"For me?" then he said "For us".. that was so sweet!!!😃

4) He knew about her and her nature and hence was thoughtful about asking her many-a-times... very nice👏

5) As wanted and expected no fillers in the whole update!!!! Only You, We, Arshi and the bedroom..!!!!!😳😳

6) Mehendi spot revealed!!!! A very hot spot i.e. on the lower back as been discussed and expected!!!!!!!👏👏

7) And Arnav saw it and fell for her completely... wow!!!!😳

8) They went slow as they wanted and finally succeeded in reaching their destination without any interruptions!!!! Admirable😃

9) Kiss to Kiss... Urgency to Urgency... Desire to Desire.. This was awesome and truly was matched with perfection...👏👏

10) And lastly cannot wait for the Tiffany's and for you to come back!!!!😃😃😉

Phew!!!! You just dont know that i was completely left tongue tied after reading your update...!!!! completely admirable... Just awesome... these are some stock of words i managed to bring out after reading it twice...!!!!

anyways enjoy your time with your family... after giving us such updates a break is a must so go ahead enjoy to your heart's content... See you asap..!!!😉😉 Come back safe and sound and try be online on the CC thread... Will miss you Nidhi Di!!!!🤗🤗🤗

Edited by barauni - 12 years ago

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keshinee20

@keshinee20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

just loved it!!!! it was sooo hot! and Arnav was sooo understanding!

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srishti_jain

@srishti_jain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Reserved!

Unreserved!!

Woww, woww!! I had been dying to read this chapter Nidhi! Amazing job! You have nailed this update. Everything was so perfect and beautiful! Nothing seemed to be vulgar at all, it was pure love!
The beginning was so nice, Khushi waiting for Arnav to come to her and she just wanted to drown in his arms, kiss him hard. Wow! I loved how Arnav wanted all this to be so perfect and did not want Khushi to feel uncomfortable at any cost. He kept asking her again and again if she was okay. That was so cute! I loved how Khushi was the one who wanted to take their relationship to the next level, she is a modern girl and thus, it was totally justified! She is a today's girl, who wants to achieve her dreams and desires and at the same time is connected to her roots. She is the perfect woman. She was so prepared for this, it made me very happy.
"I've never been so sure about anything in my life Arnav Singh Raizada" said Khushi with total confidence
This line totally conveys that she was ready and also portrays her confidence in Arnav, that he would always be by her side and never do anything that would hurt her. I also liked how she left no stone unturned to seduce Arnav, it must have taken every ounce of self control in Arnav's body to resist the girl of his dreams who was in a naughty mood and had surrendered herself to him completely. But he did all that to be absolutely sure of what they were going to do. And then there was no looking back.

That kiss was so intense and passionate, I had goosebumps while reading about it. They were at the prime of their passions and they just wanted to fulfill their desires. The point where Arnav removed his sweater, that was so hot, I immediately had the picture of the shirtless Arnav in my mind. Wow! Their kisses against the wall, woaahh, that made me dizzy!

I loved how Arnav had decorated the bed with flowers. And then came the hottest part. Their love making was so sensuous, subtle and simply beautiful. Arnav sure was breathless after looking at the beauty in front of his eyes! Everything was so perfect.
Arnav moved Khushi to the bed, laying her amongst the roses his body covering hers. They stayed like that, not moving, just feeling.
This line truly indicates their love for each other, they were enjoying being so close to one another and just lying together in each others arms. Woww!!
My most favourite part was when Arnav kissed the tear that slid out of Khushi's eyes and ensured her that he loves her the most in this whole world and his world is incomplete without her, he is incomplete without her. It was a very touching and beautiful moment! It really touched my heart to the core. ❤️

I also loved the way you brought the taekwondo pose in your story. It was wonderful! I so loved how Arnav was completely mesmerised by looking at his own name written on Khushi's back with the mehendi. It was so amazing, Khushi sure couldn't leave the chance of getting Arnav's name written on her.
adding his name to that had given Arnav a very possessive feeling over Khushi, his Khushi.
Beautiful line. He surely felt that she belonged to him and only him. Well I'm extremely excited about Tiffany's, is he going to propose her? Well I don't care about that right now because II'm just too happy to think about anything else. And the last line, "Just loving you Baby, just loving you".
I really hope that they love each other more because this really wasn't enough. I know I'm being greedy. But I can't help it. 😆

I can't tell you how wonderful this was Nidhi. I love, love,love loved it. It was heavenly. You have done a beautiful job! Thank you so much for such an amazing chapter. Thank you for the mail! Please update soon. You are wonderful! Stay blessed! 😊 😊

Edited by srishti_jain - 12 years ago

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Sisbamboo1

@Sisbamboo1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Congrats on the new thread!👏

The highlights of the chapter for me are (beside the obvious😳):

- Khushi said she came prepared 🤣 I can just imagine Arnav's expression at that. Maybe something like Khushi's classic 'O' with her mouth open.

- Khushi sleeping in her taekwondo position because it gave your Khushi a little bit of Khushi from IPK. I loved that quirk about her too so that's another reason 😃

- The last dialogue. Haye That was so cute!

Writing intimate scenes is very difficult and it can either come out feeling really choppy or crude and sometimes even destroys the chemistry the characters have because it was so boring to read. BUT, nothing like that happened here! And the chemistry most definitely was not destroyed. I was even blushing a little and praying to god that I would not be interrupted and have to explain why my ears were so red (I blush with my ears lol)

Loved the update! Please continue soon!

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Anukriti

@psychofool

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

the last two updates were too good...hope that lavanya does not do anything to anger khushi...

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swtsam

@swtsam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

beautiful...amazing update...☺️

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

That was beautifully written. Lovely.

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

WOW!!! Thanks Nidhi that was totally a paisa wasool performance from you.😉

I loved the way Arnav understand Khushi's nervousness and he asked her if she is sure about it.😉

Their lovemaking scene was written brilliantly…waiting for Tiffany visit….

Very beautiful update…thanks for no ramanchi.😉

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amita

@star_fan1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Awesome and beautiful update 👏

loved it too much

evrey moments are written beautifully👍🏼

their love making secen was amazing ☺️

Just loving you Baby, just loving you".

the way Arnav tell her that just loved it❤️

waiting for Tiffany visit

want to know what is Arnav's surprize for Khushi

waiting for next update

plz make it soon

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Hey, first of all congratzzz on the new thread🥳 I want it to be extended for many more threads👍🏼

Coming to the update, it was... I don't have words to say what I felt. Because words are not enough to explain what I felt while reading it. It was a really romantic update. Finally after reading it I had tears in my eyes. Don't worry, those were tears of joy😳

The intimate scenes were all really sensual. I loved the Arnav tried to make sure that Khushi really wanted to take the next step before marriage. He really is one of a kind.

And the small gesture he made by spreading rose petals on the bed, was really cute. And when Khushi asked whether it was for her, the way he said it was for them shows that although they are two separate people, their souls are already bound. And finally they became in every way.

So Khushi did apply mehendi, and that too on her lower back. That was one romantic and sexy move. I can imagine how Arnav must have felt seeing that Khushi had written his name using mehendi, at that particular place. Khushi is such a sweetheart. It was a really awesome idea Nidhi.

Okay, now what is left is to make their relationship official. Wonder what Arnav had planned at Tiffany's. No matter what it is, I'm sure it's something that will make his girl elate with joy.

Seriously Nidhi, you are making the single girls want to fall in love. I'm totally dreaming of having a guy like this in my life. You have made me fall head over heels in love with this Arnav. Thanks for giving life to two wonderful characters like Arnav and Khushi, in a very innovative way🤗

I love "Finding Love" a lot❤️

I hope there are more scenes that would make us blush in the future☺️

Eagerly waiting for the next chappie😉