Finding Love #6: COMPLETED - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Absolutely BEAUTIFUL...so much love n understanding portrayed in this chapter...just perfectly written...LOVED IT!!! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
interesting place of mehndi.. Arnav is a goner..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
wow wata update:) :)
jus loved it:)
tat was a beautiful start of their new phase of life:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
beautiful & a hot update...:)
seriousy amazing &
write it so well...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Wonderful update! Passionate and full of love .
Amazing- Khushi met Arnav with equal desire, love and passion.


Tiffany :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Awesome update loved it Hot and well written 😳
continue soon please and thank u for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Congratz on the new thread!
Loved the update, you worded everything beautifully!
Good job and thank you for your dedication :)
Can't wait for tiffany's!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Nidhi, Thanks a lot for no ramanchi!! And omg!! They did it!!
Teaser was definitely pointing towards it but I had my doubts. Frankly I had not expected to do it in Boston. But I guess the whole evening and date was leading towards this.

I loved the Mehendi part! It was such a pleasant seductive surprise!! Wow kya idea hai !! 👏 The whole Heena tattoo and its location made a full on impact.

Btw who did that tattoo on Khushi's back?? 😉


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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Nidhi,

You have described beautifully and it is difficult to to make out that you are actually describing it for the first time! The flow of thoughts and words is extremely good.
Loved the way you have written and your description doesn't violate the senses but gives a pleasant glow. The way Arnav reassures Khushi and the way she herself recovers from her own thoughts is what makes your story so poignant.
Loved it dear loved it.

Looking forward to their Tiffany's visit!
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was awesome!!! You wrote this update wonderfully! Finally revealed where she had the mehendi done!!!

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