Finding Love #6: COMPLETED

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Congrats on the new thread!! May this story have many more threads and continue on the journey of Finding Love in a variety of different ways! 😉

Wow lovely dedication .. The chapter was great!! I loved the build up that you gave us.

Can't believe Khushi was the one that was prepared. But it goes well with the Khushi in your story, you did full justice for her. A modern girl who isn't afraid to pursue her dreams and desires. I mentioned that last update that I loved that she planned the date and now moved their relationship to the next level.

The passion you described was beautiful and loved how Arnav kept reassuring her of his love. I have to say that when she wrapped her legs around, I thought you would have done them do it up against the wall.

But really you did a great job!! Loved that he found the mehndi and that he remembered the meaning. I'm waiting for the spoiler pic to appear so guess it will show up in round 2 :)

I'm so glad you wrote in Khushi's tae Kwon do pose! You know how much I like that and it was nice to have that .

I loved how Arnav kissed her tear away and your last line was another amazing one! "Just loving you baby!" Brilliant!

Cannot wait for Tiffany's and round two!
Edited by ssyahoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congratulations...👏

More than 2...
Plus morning!

Brilliant ...a very apt dedication!
Thank you for no RAMANCHI...
The mehendi on the waist !
TIFFANY's
The way he calls her baby...❤️

More tomorrow ! This is a teaser...😉



Oh no just wrote and lost what I did...anyway...sorry for the delay once again...


The word baby never sounded more romantic and sexy as you made it...it gave me goosebumps !
I loved that even with the desire, passion, intensity and craving for each other that they felt they most important emotion that came out through the chapter was love, it felt like they were bursting with the amount of love they felt for each other and everything else was secondary !

The setting perfect, from the time they come back, the anticipation and the hunger for each other ...his concern that he needs to take it slow as he knew this was her first time...I like that this was all unplanned and spontaneous for them ( the planning was left to you and us!) it was not like he had expected to take things so far while they were here, but she was ready and went prepared to take this to a higher step...I am so happy with your Khushi ...someone who knows what she wants and is not ashamed of her desire for the man she loves, right from planning this date to the night. Loved how she took control and loved that she is under no pressure from him ..their lovemaking was just a natural way to express their immense feeling of love for each other...
But once they knew what lay ahead they lost all control...willingly and so mutually!
I loved this even though he knew she was beautiful he was still mesmerised by her ...at what he sees !
Both riding the same wave of emotions, both physical and emotionally !

I loved that throughout the chapter he keeps reassuring her of his love and she responds alike!

I loved how you actually wrote the love scene...sensual and sweet at the same time which must not have been way but it flowed so brilliantly...the urgency they felt...the slight nervousness and anxiety and you handled it so well...her realising that he was taking it slow to accommodate her ...and him being rewarded for his thoughtfulness...
I loved that both were equal participants ...it made it just so more meaningful for me...loved the element of romance with the roses on the bed...he wanted it to be special for them! His kissing away her tears...his concern for her happiness...
Loved how you put in the Taekwondo pose I love it when she sleeps like that...wish we had got to see more of that on the show...
Ooh and coming to the mehendi...sexy! I loved his feelings of pride and possessiveness when he sees for the first time...she always did intend for him to see it...so maybe she was the one who was was more sure of what would happen in this trip to Boston! I love how she teases him at his surprise on seeing it ...his name on her body for just him to see...!
I loved Arnav remembering the significance of it and loving her more just for the happiness and contentment he got from the realisation of her actions...she is his and he, hers...now just to make it official...cannot wait for Tiffany's !
But seriously you did full justice to this update and I really loved how their relationship is moving...I would not change a thing...except ...I wanted another round at 4 am...you have so many positions and places to choose from : refer to pictures and suggestions ...

Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago
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Congrats!!!! Cant wait for Monday!!!!!!!!!
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Congrats!! Monday can't come soon especially after the awesome teaser 😉

Back with my edit :)

Poor paisa vasool update Nidhi, and thanks a bunch for the dedication. 🤗

Awww loved the way, Arnav understood Khushi's nervousness & tried to calm her down. Loved the way he asked her again to be sure... Loved the way he went & decorated their bed with the rose petals, just like a real suhaag raat. Loved the way Arnav confessed that he wasn't "prepared" for this but Khushi being Khushi, assured him otherwise... So she didn't just buy clothes for herself, she made sure that guy would not back out no matter what. 😉 Loved it, nice to see a confident Khushi.

The lovemaking scene was written beautifully, very aesthetically par dil maange more. 😉 Wanna see another round at 4 am. 😉

Loved the surprise about the mehendi... Was wondering on mehendi day, where Khushi ran off to apply mehendi on, now we know. 😃 Her lower back is a much better than her palms. 😉 So much more sexier with his name written among rose leaves to boot. How much sexier can it get??

Now waiting for Tiffany's...

Awesome update Nidhi, loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks Vandana
Mine

What an update!
Thanks a lot for the dedication.

They did it!
The mehandi was at the right place with his name too.

Beautifully written chapter.
The whole love making sequence was very aesthetically written.

She was fully prepared😉 for it even if he wasn't.

Now for the Tiffany's visit.
Edited by 1chilly - 12 years ago
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congrats on the new thread!!!!!

Edited by mastermagician - 12 years ago
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Congratulations
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Khushi well planned.
Aww that mehendi that's so romantic..
Tiffany what kind of ornament waiting there...a ring?
Thanks for mail.
Superb update.
Edited by riafna - 12 years ago
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Yay for the new chapter :)

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