Congratulations...👏
More than 2...
Plus morning!
Brilliant ...a very apt dedication!
Thank you for no RAMANCHI...
The mehendi on the waist !
TIFFANY's
The way he calls her baby...❤️
More tomorrow ! This is a teaser...😉
Oh no just wrote and lost what I did...anyway...sorry for the delay once again...
The word baby never sounded more romantic and sexy as you made it...it gave me goosebumps !
I loved that even with the desire, passion, intensity and craving for each other that they felt they most important emotion that came out through the chapter was love, it felt like they were bursting with the amount of love they felt for each other and everything else was secondary !
The setting perfect, from the time they come back, the anticipation and the hunger for each other ...his concern that he needs to take it slow as he knew this was her first time...I like that this was all unplanned and spontaneous for them ( the planning was left to you and us!) it was not like he had expected to take things so far while they were here, but she was ready and went prepared to take this to a higher step...I am so happy with your Khushi ...someone who knows what she wants and is not ashamed of her desire for the man she loves, right from planning this date to the night. Loved how she took control and loved that she is under no pressure from him ..their lovemaking was just a natural way to express their immense feeling of love for each other...
But once they knew what lay ahead they lost all control...willingly and so mutually!
I loved this even though he knew she was beautiful he was still mesmerised by her ...at what he sees !
Both riding the same wave of emotions, both physical and emotionally !
I loved that throughout the chapter he keeps reassuring her of his love and she responds alike!
I loved how you actually wrote the love scene...sensual and sweet at the same time which must not have been way but it flowed so brilliantly...the urgency they felt...the slight nervousness and anxiety and you handled it so well...her realising that he was taking it slow to accommodate her ...and him being rewarded for his thoughtfulness...
I loved that both were equal participants ...it made it just so more meaningful for me...loved the element of romance with the roses on the bed...he wanted it to be special for them! His kissing away her tears...his concern for her happiness...
Loved how you put in the Taekwondo pose I love it when she sleeps like that...wish we had got to see more of that on the show...
Ooh and coming to the mehendi...sexy! I loved his feelings of pride and possessiveness when he sees for the first time...she always did intend for him to see it...so maybe she was the one who was was more sure of what would happen in this trip to Boston! I love how she teases him at his surprise on seeing it ...his name on her body for just him to see...!
I loved Arnav remembering the significance of it and loving her more just for the happiness and contentment he got from the realisation of her actions...she is his and he, hers...now just to make it official...cannot wait for Tiffany's !
But seriously you did full justice to this update and I really loved how their relationship is moving...I would not change a thing...except ...I wanted another round at 4 am...you have so many positions and places to choose from : refer to pictures and suggestions ...
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