SS Swaron : will u be my valentine( pt4 updated) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 3

Saturday

Swayam all exited goes to meet Sharon…he was searching for her everywhere..finally found her standing near corridor..Swayam with big smile walked towards her…

Swayam ; Sharon I need to speak to you..

Sharon : even I want to tell you something really important…

Swayam : ok..tell me..

Sharon : not here.. ( holds his hand..and take him to the corner ) you know what is tomorrow??

Swayam : Sharon its Sunday..

Sharon: Stupid..itz valentines day..

Swayam : okey…so??

Sharon: you don't think itz best opportunity??

Swayam : opportunity for what??

Sharon: to tell that someone special that I really like him.. (All exited)
(Suddenly Swayam smile disappeared)

Swayam : hmm yaa..itz gud idea.. (With sad face)

Sharon: I am just waiting for tomorrow… (With big smile) you think he will say yes??

Swayam: yes off course..Nobody can ever say no to you Sharon…

Sharon : you feel so?? (she asked him..Swayam replied back just with a smile..Sharon hugs him..while Swayam had tears in his eyes..she broke d hug looked directly into his eyes ) r u crying??

Swayam : noo..just something went into my eyes..don't wry m fyn..

Sharon : you sure??

Swayam : ya I am.. ( with fake smile )

Sharon : ok den wil c u ltr..hav to do lots of shopping for

tomorrow..byee…

Swayam : ya byeee..

later same day in d evening..

Swayam was sitting all alone behind d caf…Ray who was searching for him finally found him sitting alone on d bench..Ray with all exited ran towards him…he was eager to see that smile on his face but to his is surprise Swayam was looking sad..and he also noticed tears…

Ray : dude u ok???did she say no??

Swyam: noo..

Ray : so that means she said yes ( all exited) I am so happy for both of you… (again looked at Swayam blank face ) wait a min if she did say yes to u..why your sad???

Swayam : I did not tell her about it..

Ray : but why??

Swayam: ( he explained him d entire story ) see dude…I know I love her…but how can I forget d fact she is my best friend too…and if at all she finds happiness in being with someone else…then m completely ok with it…

Ray : I hope u r in ur sense…

Swayam : ya dude..i m…guess itz too late…I lost her already..

Ray: no u did not..see till now she has not proposed that guy..

Swayam: ya so..

Ray: so just go and confess her…I am dam sure she will understand…

Swayam : why don't u understand?? She loves him…for me her happiness is more important..

Ray : ok fine…but dude just go tell her once about it..then itz up to her to decide whom she wants to be with…at least u want regret later on..plzz for our friendship sake…and don't forget d fact she just likes him..that's it…

Swayam: (thinking over it for while) ok..ill go and speak to her tomorrow..fingers crossed..

Ray : that like my boy.. ( with smile ) ( they both hug each other ) so can we live now??and plz stop crying like girl..

Swayam : ohh shut up..i was not crying…

Ray : yes u wer ( teasing him)

( they cont d argument..left towards there room.. )


Guys sorry could not edit much..hope u all will like it..will soon update d last part… 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
nice update waiting for swaron confession
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zk456789

nice update waiting for swaron confession



thank u 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
amazing updata..
loved it
desperately waiting for swaron confession
thank you for the pm
update soon
and dont forget to pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Hope the guy whom sharon like will be swayam
Waiting for last part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
i just read your whole SS and LUVED IT!!!
continue soon I wanna know whats gonna happen next!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
a very nice update
hope dat the guy Sharon is going to propose is swayam only hope for swaron confession
n rey teasing swayam for crying like a girl was cute😆
plz update soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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such a sweet SS...

LOVED the update...

AMAZING😳

waiting for next part😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Awesome update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
divya,

dont break my heart with such a chotu updt...

and not swayam's as well...plzz?

nicely penned.

love--medha

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