SS Swaron : will u be my valentine( pt4 updated) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Hey.. just read all 3 parts..
nd they were amazing..😃
and thanx for the pm..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Swaron bff treat to read..
Love all d parts..
Nyc ss
update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Part 4 ( last part )

Back to present : Sunday

With all confidence Swayam left his room to meet Sharon..he entered inside d building..she was standing there right outside d entrance of Hall ( were valentine party was suppose to held) he walked towards her..she was looking beautiful in her red gown..he could not take his eyes away from her..he took hold of her hand and took her to d side..so that they can get some privacy..and she quietly followed him..

Swayam: I really need to tell u something really important..

Sharon : but before that tell me..how m I looking??

Swayam: hmm gorgeous.. ( with smile..she blushed a bit ) now listen to me..

Sharon: (again interrupting him) it took me so much time for to get ready..and..

Swayam : Sharon ( irritated )

Sharon: ok ok..last question..then u can continue..

Swayam: shoot..

Sharon: your sure na he will say yes??

(This time Swayam kept quite..he had no answer to her question..he was numb...he accepted his defeat..may b they were not meant to b..he thot what he was about to do ws not right..he mentally cursed himself for being selfish.. "I wnt b able to see her sad..I can't spoil her happiness")

Sharon : Swayam ( almost shaking him) r u even listening to me?

Swayam : ya Sharon ( cuming back to his senses )

Sharon: I asked u something..do u think he will say yes to me??

Swayam : ya Sharon (moving bit backward )

Sharon: do u think he wil love me d way I love him?

Swayam : ya Sharon ( cont taking steps away from her )

Sharon: do u think he wil always b with me forever?

Swayam: ya Sharon (cont moving backward )

Sharon: you are sure about it right??

Swayam: ya Sharon (turned around to walk away )

Swaym : so do u love me??

Swayam : ya Sharon

He suddenly stopped..he could not believe what he just heard...was he dreaming about it'

Swayam: did u just say?? ( He turned around to look at her..he was surprised..she ws kneeling down on d floor' )

Sharon: will u b my valentine???

(Swayam was shocked to hear that.."it was me whom she was talking about all d time..that someone special itz me" he lost in his dreamland..)

Sharon : now for how long..u wnt me to sit in this position?? (trying to grab Swayam attention towards him)

Very next moment Swayam ran towards her..and gave her tight hug..

Swayam: idiot why u did not tell me before?? (looking into her eyes )

Sharon: because I was scared to lose u..i was not sure abt ur feelings'

Swayam : ( interrupting her) love u Sharon..love u a lot..

Sharon hugged him again "love u too Swayam"'they broke d hug..he kissed her forehead..he took few steps backward..knee-led down..

Swayam : Sharon..I love u a lot..ill b with u forever..and ya m very much sure about it (winked at her ) so will u b my valentine???

Sharon : yes ill.. (with big smile )

They hugged each other again..Ray and Simmi were standing at other end..were really happy to see them together..they both walked towards them..

Simmi: group hug guys..

They had group hug...and left towards hall to enjoy d party..

Swyam and Sharon holding hand in hand.. entered d hall as couple..

This is d end of my SS..I knw it was very short but hope u all like it'plz live ur comments below..plz ignore if there are any mistakes 😊

pm later... 😊

Edited by sweetdivya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
AWWW...such a cute part😳
loved the confession 😃
Beautiful SS...so cute ...do write more😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Such a cute ending of a cute ss
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Awesome update 😊
Sharon shocked Swayam by confessing
confession was sweet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
thank u all.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
lovely part
loved it
the confession was super cute
😳😳😳

loved it
thnk you for the pm
ho!!!! SS end ho gaya
how mean
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
wow such a cute update
iske bad 1 update or milega kya???😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Awesome update..😊
thnx for the pm...

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