SS Swaron : will u be my valentine( pt4 updated)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Will you be my valentine.

Character Sketch:

Characters: Swayam Shekhawat'

Sharon Rai Prakash

Reyansh Singhaniya (Ray)( Swayam roommate/ good friend)
Simmran Kapoor (Simmi) ( Sharon roommate/ good friend)


Swayam and Sharon were childhood frndz..dey wer best frndz..Studied in same school and now in same collg..Swayam and Sharon never took each other seriously but Rey and Simmi knew that dey r meant for each other'

Part 1
Swayam : dude are you really sure about it??
Ray : yea dude just go for it..
Swayam : but u knw very well that I don't want to hurt her..
Ray : no if's and buts''just go for it..if you don't tell her today you will regret it throughout your life'
Swayam: I don't knw why but I am really scared..
Ray : Swayam ( in anger )
Swayam : ya ok m going.. (Looks above) god please support me today..

One week before:
Monday
Swayam and Sharon were sitting in class'Sharon threw paper ball at Swayam..Swayam who was sitting ryt in front...he opened it "meet me after d class behind cafe " ( behind d cafe was d place where they usually meet ) Swayam turned behind looked at her and smiled..this meant yes..

later same day behind the cafe
Sharon was waiting for Swayam to come..minute he reached..she looked at him gave big smile'
Sharon : I love you..
Swayam : what?? (shocked )
Sharon : I am finally gone say this to him' (with big smile on her face )
Swayam: Sharon? ( Swayam looked at her with confused expression on his face )
Sharon : you remember we had decided d day we find someone special..first thing will do is inform each other about it..
Swayam : ya we had..
Sharon : so here it is..i have found someone special ( with smile on her face ) (Swayam kept quiet and did not say anything ) what happened??are you not happy for me??
Swayam : no I mean yes..thats grt'
Sharon : I knew it..nywaz have to go now..Simmi must be waiting for me..we were suppose to go out..so see you later.. ( she hugged me..and turned around to live )
Swayam was still standing there..he looked at her walking away'dis was d first tym he was not sure about his feelings.. (he receives a call it was Ray )
Ray : dude where are you ?
Swayam : ya m cuming.. (starts walking towards his room )


Part 2

Part 3

Part4


guys dis is new SS I have come with with...itz short story..and it want have much parts...actually i wont call it new as I had written it for Arhi ( Arnav and Khushi) but left it incomplete after d show gt over...so was thinking of completing it now...only if u people lyk it... 😊 so plz let me know with your views if u all want me to continue and complete d story... 😊


my other work :

os swaron : perfect new year night

Swaron OS:Cool Breeze and coffee.

Vrushan OS : is this love..


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Posted: 12 years ago
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gr8.. will be waiting.. plz do continue soon... and pm me... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u all... 😊
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Such a sweet story...
Loved the 1st part..plz continue soon😊
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Such a great start ya we want it please continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nce start
loved it
would like to read this SS
please do pm me
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Sounds interesting...continue soon and pm me..eager to read more
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Tuesday
Next day in Canteen
Swayam was sitting alone and was thinking about Sharon..Ray enters the canteen..
Ray : dude watzzup? ( Swayam did not respond ) Swayam.. (he called out to him again )
Ar : yaa.. ( finally realized dat Ray was calling him )
Ray: wat wer u thinking about??
Swayam: Sharon
Ray : Sharon??
Ar : ya..Sharon..she likes someone..
Ray: (Ray noticed change in his expression) ohh dats grt..so wat his name??
Swayam : she did not tell me..she just told me dat his someone special..
Ray : hmmm r u ok??
Swayam : ya m fyn..i don't have problem that she found someone els..
Ray : dude I just asked u casually..i did not mention about Sharon..( Swayam kept quite) r u jealous??
Swayam: jealous??Why ill b jealous??
Ray : I mean now she likes someone else..So (before he could complete )
Swayam : ohh shut up.. (Bell rings) lets go to d class.. (He lifts up d bag and move out of canteen)

In class :
They entered the class..Sharon was standing near door..She was looking different today..for change she was wearing salwar ( I knw itz bit difficult to imagine )..Sharon always preferred wearing jeans and top's or may b dresses for collg..but today for change she was swearing salwar..Swayam was shocked to see her like that..he kept starring at her..Sharon noticed him starring...finally Sharon called out to him..
Sharon : Swayam..
Swayam : yaa.. (back to his senses )
Sharon: wat happened??
Swayam : you look beautiful.. ( with smile )
Sharon : what??
Swayam : ( Swayam just realized what he said..he never referred her with word beautiful..he decided to change the topic ) what's all this??
Sharon : how m I looking??
Swayam : hmm weird..but why suddenly all this??
Sharon: (she comes close him and whispers in his ears) to impress someone special.. (Winks at him)
Swayam: okay (with straight face)
Sharon : you think he will like this ??
Swayam : how m I suppose to know?? (bit irritated )
Sharon: why u getting irritated..itz no use asking you such questions..Forget it..

(Lecturer enters d class...so does Sharon and Swayam...

Swayam kept starring at her every now den...Ray sitting next to him..Noticed this but did not say anything...)

After 3 days

Friday night
Swayam was lying on his bed...trying to sleep but somehow..he was not getting sleep..he was lost in his thots..he wanted to talk about it to somebody..
Swayam: Ray ( Ray was deep in sleep ) he again called out to him.. "Ray"
Ray : dude let me sleep..
Swayam : I want to talk to you..
Ray : not now plzz..let me sleep..
Swayam : Ray.. ( he does not get up..Swayam gets up frm d bed..takes glass of water..and pour it into his face )
Ray : Crap..
Swayam : I need to talk to u right now..
Ray : itz 3oclock at night..
( Swayam silent )
Ray : ( looking at his face ) ok tell me..wat happened..
Swayam : I don't knw wats wrong with me this days..only thing that comes to my mind is Sharon..i don't knw why but I just can't stop thinking about her..and you want imagine I was actually keep staring at her.. ( Ray smiling "ya I hav noticed u ") see evn u noticed it..and her changed behavior..her dressing sense..i don't know why but itz really bothering me..do yo think I have gone mad?? (With serious look on his face )
Ray: (burst out laughing)
Swayam: dude itz not funny...
Ray : you are in love my boy.. (with big smile )
Swayam : are you crazy??
Ray : no..you are crazy..you hav gne crazy in her love..
Swayam : what rubbish??
Ray : that's fact..i knew it will happened one day..but had not accepted it so soon..really happy for you buddy..
Swayam : I am actually in love ( with smile on his face ) I am actually in love with Sharon..(Suddenly his smile disappears )
Ray : what happened now?
Swayam : but she loves someone else..her someone special..
Ray : just forget about it..till now she has not confessed her love to that special someone..so just go talk to her about it..u never know she might say yes to you..
Swayam : I think I just have to go and speak to her about it..
Ray : thats lyk my boy.. (they hug each other ) and don't worry will together tk cr of that special someone..but ryt now let's go to sleep.. ( he jumps on his bad )
Swayam ; yaa..let's go to slp..just waiting tomorrow now..
Ray : gud night brother..
Swayam : gud night..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update. Loved it. :)
Waiting to read the next part and Swayam's confession. 😊
Edited by tanha29 - 12 years ago
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swayam's confession 😳
ater eading the update that's the only thing i can remenbet...
love dthe update
it was amazing
thnk you for the pm
please do update soon
i would like to read more..
waiting

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