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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#281

Beautiful story

lovely ending..👏

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#282

oh wow! waiting to know the rest as it unfolds! its amazing!!

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garash

@garash

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#283

Fabulous. Loved the fact that the story unfolded in a unique way through ther perspectives.

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#284

To all the readers who liked/commented recently (and to who I haven't replied)...

🤗

THANK YOU!!

Sorry, but due to some (unavoidable) circumstances I may not be able to respond to each of your comments in person. But, each comment is appreciated with all my heart!!

Love,

Chibi

Edited by chibisuke - 11 years ago

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Mandy

@foreverromantic

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#285

That was a really well written story, I would read the rest of ur index but I will save that for after exams:)

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aisha13D

@aisha13D

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#286

you should never ever stop writing!!!!

JUST EPIC!👏

#respect

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Itu

@simi58

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#287

Read in one go.. Awesomeee👏

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#288

Thanks for such a wonderful story!!!! Really enjoyed reading it.

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#289

I should admit that I had my reservations while reading this one. It began at a point int he show which wasn't my favorite, more so because of the sheer ridiculousness and a poor attempt at infusing things into the show by the CVs. by the end of the second chapter I wondered if we would go ahead till the suicide track as well (another scene that did not go down well with me).

But you chose to divert at the right time. While the initial chapters running parallel to IPK gave a foundation to begin through their individual thoughts. It also gave an alternate scenario to how things could have proceeded.

I'm glad to see that Arnav came clean to Khushi in this one and only after that did they move ahead in life.

Good one!

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abcdefg1234567

@abcdefg1234567

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#290

Thanks for a wonderful story. I would like the way you have moulded this story from the serial plot. Even I found that suicide plot just childish. I always thought being ASR he should have sensed and analysed truth long before kidnapping track. You have written very sensibly. Please PM me whenever you start something new.