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I'm really sorry for commenting late...
Coming to update..The BEST update till now...👍🏼👍🏼
I'm very happy that u didn't included that suicide track...I too don't like that track...🤗
Shyam's truth out & in jail...he deserves this...& Arnav cried...I can't see him crying...U remember the scene after terrace scene where arnav was standing beside his car & crying badly...that night i cried a lot hiding my face under my blanket thinking that arnav was crying...this was my secret till now..I think i was stupid that time...
U included Aman's POV i loved it..U know what whenever Arnav in the show say 'Aman' while talking on phone...my younger sis. & bro. started fuming with anger 😡 'coz Arnav was taking my name (Aman)...😃
ur exams result is coming out..well mine too!! on 18 May..All the best..!! 👍🏼👍🏼

Originally posted by: hmtxyz

@kajulove:

I am really glad you liked the update!

Shyam shall pay..don't worry. Karma exists in my world at least! 😆

Next update shall be up in a couple of hours, so you'll find out soon!!!

😳

That was beautiful, Helee! Best of luck for the results!!!

man awsm
And anyway, Aman will handle the rest when it comes to it.

sometime I pity aman😆

poor soul khushi...anjali is devastated and so is arnav...But I know there will a dawn

Loved both the updates
Thanx for pm 😊

Wow. A LOT of things happened :O
When I read the first few lines, I though it was arnav. As I read on, I thought, well...something isn't right. And then BAM! It was Shyam :O :O
Telepathic conversation yaha abhi? :D loved how Arnav sensed that Khushi was in trouble and how he rushed home. Shows the kind of loving protective husband he actually is :-)
I liked Aman's POV. What a loyal employe :-)

Aww... The flashback! Arnav had returned a changed man after all. Always wanted to see how the stay at Gupta house had changed him. But alas... In the show, the track changed for accommodating something else...so thank you for mentioning it :) Much needed.

The scenes are kind of jumbled. Dont mind, but i do agree. But you write very well and make it clear enough for the reader, so it doesn't matter...at least not me. So don't worry about it.

so far this is best update of this ss. 👍🏼..that shyam need to pay for his deed. can't wait to see when Arnav will snow all those raw emotions...love...desire...and passion for Khushi.

thanks for an amazing update and PM

😊nice update finally truth came out in front of him hope khushi forgive him. And best of luck for your result, hope u do well in exams

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