The Fantastic Four (SS & TR FF) thread 2 posted - Page 9

haye d first kiss ws awsm 😳 gud job guys

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Hey Tasha and Renu.




Well Tasha the way you penend your part was really well. Like just too apt to for the entire slot. Great going girl.




I really was ROFLing while reading the entire Swaron part. Like is that the way a bodyguard guards their boss. All the time admiring and oglying at her body. But that jeep part was unexpected. But thats what keeps a story interesting, right? He kissed her. Just to save her. This didnt fit into my brain. Like he could have opted for something else or anything but endangering his own life. So.not acceptable. So thats the message about. 'Scrapped' and all.




This one is quite impressive would like to.read more about Sharon. As others are quite understood but She is she. Sharon Rai Prakash. The diva. she needs proper screen space or else the volcano errupts. 🤣




Great job guys. Good effort. Keep it up.

Thank you so much for liking the update n yes he could have done something else but how can he miss the chance to kiss her 😉 n yes if the boss is hot what else can a poor bodyguard do 😆
Well I m sure each n everyone will get its proper space as this ff is based on all four equally so u will also get to see more of the DIVA so stay tuned for that 😃
Also the 'scrapped' and stuff is their code language which I myself never got that's y I don't watch such movies as its not my cup of tea 😆
N thanks for liking my part as well 😳
Love
TaSha ❤️

Originally posted by: tharu01

lovely..😊..rlygrt chapter..update soon 😉

Thanks dear will update soon :)

Wonderful update, Aww Taarey and Swaron first kiss was so cute

Originally posted by: sanayaluvzya

res!
unres!
Wow, Hommie and Renu ❤️
1st of all i love spy stories 😳
This chapter was so goood 👏
The way, Rey shut Taani 😳
Haww... it reminded me of someone 😆
I loved when TR ran out of the elevator without caring for eachother
& ofc, Taani's bak bak on dying, she is just like me :')
Than coming to SwaRon..
Haaye my SwaRon, they are so cute ❤️
Rofl, risking his own life 😆😳
And than the kiss, ☺️
Why do boys shut girls up by kissing them -_-
and than "scrapped."
i dint understand it 1st but than i got it 😆
I loved how Sharon started cursing at swayam... 😳
And than, Swayam callling her Siren 🤣
Update soon guys ❤️
[Hommie i unresed this, now ima unres the other one, be ready with my ice cream, achaar, and ALEX] 😳

Sanaya ~

Firstly u r late women 😆
Coming to your comment
Thanks for liking the update
And ya I know who did we reminded u of 😳 😉
To ur question i have no idea myself y do boys do that 😕 but its cute anyways ☺️
Coming back to the comment 😆
Scrap thing was new for me too 😳 as I m not in this spy stuff 😔
But still I m glad u liked both the parts of the update
N yaa if swayam will not call Sharon SIREN than maza nahi aye ga u c 😃
In last yes my sweetie bear I have ur achar ready n ice cream ready n Alex is on its way 🤣
Love
TaSha [Hommie]

Originally posted by: TaareynSwaron

Firstly u r late women 😆
Coming to your comment
Thanks for liking the update
And ya I know who did we reminded u of 😳 😉
To ur question i have no idea myself y do boys do that 😕 but its cute anyways ☺️
Coming back to the comment 😆
Scrap thing was new for me too 😳 as I m not in this spy stuff 😔
But still I m glad u liked both the parts of the update
N yaa if swayam will not call Sharon SIREN than maza nahi aye ga u c 😃
In last yes my sweetie bear I have ur achar ready n ice cream ready n Alex is on its way 🤣
Love
TaSha [Hommie]

Well, its cute, but than after it, ur really shut,
u really dont have anything to say... except blush or think wtever happened
and trying to change the situation esp when it happens the 1st time, and ur not even together 😳
and sigh* ALEX ❤️

Hi amazing update loved it both couples screen was fan n intense plz jaldi se update karo loved it :)

Originally posted by: sanayaluvzya

Well, its cute, but than after it, ur really shut,
u really dont have anything to say... except blush or think wtever happened
and trying to change the situation esp when it happens the 1st time, and ur not even together 😳
and sigh* ALEX ❤️

:O not together meaning hawww?????
N ya ur Alex ughhh 😡 trying to find him

Originally posted by: TaareynSwaron

:O not together meaning hawww?????
N ya ur Alex ughhh 😡 trying to find him

meaning when ur not in a relationship..
and yh alex is too HAWT ❤️

Loved it , pls pm wen u update 😛