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Viji.Chandran

@Viji.Chandran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

lovd it...

awesome update...

both taarey n swaron scenes were amazing...

update soon

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shanaya

@shanya8

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Nyc concept nyc chap update soon just loved it n d kiss was truly mast ;)

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@-Elysian-

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

res!
unres!
Wow, Hommie and Renu ❤️
1st of all i love spy stories 😳
This chapter was so goood 👏
The way, Rey shut Taani 😳
Haww... it reminded me of someone 😆
I loved when TR ran out of the elevator without caring for eachother
& ofc, Taani's bak bak on dying, she is just like me :')
Than coming to SwaRon..
Haaye my SwaRon, they are so cute ❤️
Rofl, risking his own life 😆😳
And than the kiss, ☺️
Why do boys shut girls up by kissing them -_-
and than "scrapped."
i dint understand it 1st but than i got it 😆
I loved how Sharon started cursing at swayam... 😳
And than, Swayam callling her Siren 🤣
Update soon guys ❤️
[Hommie i unresed this, now ima unres the other one, be ready with my ice cream, achaar, and ALEX] 😳

Sanaya ~

Edited by sanayaluvzya - 12 years ago

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zk456789

@zk456789

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

both the couples kissed n swayam got shot do update soon

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User123

@UserM123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Aww!
Awesum Part...
I m a SwaRonian, So i was Mainly focussing On SwaRon,
ohhh SwaRon Kiss was sooo Awesum...
Nice patr...
Update soon!!! :D

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--Ta_Sha--

@--Ta_Sha--

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: --MiNi--
Aww!
Awesum Part...
I m a SwaRonian, So i was Mainly focussing On SwaRon,
ohhh SwaRon Kiss was sooo Awesum...
Nice patr...
Update soon!!! :D

It doesn't matter dear as long as u read it, enjoy it n comment on it dear :D
Thanks for giving it a try n commenting dear
Love
TaSha :D

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tharu01

@tharu01

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

lovely..😊..rly grt chapter..update soon 😉

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Hey Tasha and Renu.

Well Tasha the way you penend your part was really well. Like just too apt to for the entire slot. Great going girl.

I really was ROFLing while reading the entire Swaron part. Like is that the way a bodyguard guards their boss. All the time admiring and oglying at her body. But that jeep part was unexpected. But thats what keeps a story interesting, right? He kissed her. Just to save her. This didnt fit into my brain. Like he could have opted for something else or anything but endangering his own life. So.not acceptable. So thats the message about. 'Scrapped' and all.

This one is quite impressive would like to.read more about Sharon. As others are quite understood but She is she. Sharon Rai Prakash. The diva. she needs proper screen space or else the volcano errupts. 🤣

Great job guys. Good effort. Keep it up.