|'TIME FOR OLD D3' WELCOME KRIA|SS part.3 updated! - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
wow..!!! amazing...!!!😊
old d3 rockzzz...❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Awosm chpters
update really soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
do send me a PM when you continue

this is an awesome story😊

makes me nostalgic and how much i wish this was the story right now😭

but whatever...love the story and update me on future parts😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
great chapter... im loving the storyline... please do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
The next day...

kria enter's the collage
she walks from the stairs to the coriidoors
she touches the walls ... ahhh

"what a relief it is to be in the collage!"

"This is life and i love it"

there was onone at sight.she wonders where are all?

she hurries up to the rehersal hall.Her place.she could remember everything! just everything.
From the day one. How she managed to get the team weaklings to the rehersal hall.How they
used to fight for the timeings of the hall. How they had their stupid fights with dazzlers. And
lastly how they DANCED
she got her best friends there.
she got the bestest teachers there.
she got love there.
and she got DANCE there.

A beautiful smile lit her face! Those beautiful days lit her eyes!

""SURRPPRRISSEEE""
came everyone. With a awsome chocklate cake.

"Welcome back kriya"

(bg: dd dil dosti dance)

kriya got totally surprised!

"come on cut the cake" said simi with exitment

kriya wiped her teardrop with her finger and came togeter to cut the cake.
"Your the friends everybody wanna have"she said "u look soo cool when dazzlers and weaklings are together"!!

"They are together now kriya!"stepped in sharon<sneha> "thats what u always wanted rite?no discriminaton!"

"ya"

"Sharon " "kria said hesitately"friends?" .She raised her hand.

everone surprised and tensed .

Swayam(smiling):come on sharon!

"no!" said sharon "not just a handshake! for being friends" she went up and hugged kriya!

"i noe ye kuch zyada strange tha !!" she said with a beautiful smile!

""wohhhaaa" whooo"came the noises

their were smiles on everyones face!everone sat relaxed in the rehersal hall.
"why did u leave?"swayam asked

kriya said to herself "hey universeji!" kya kahu?
she changed the topic immidiately!

"guys whats the procedure of joining the dance team back. i guess their is a new vp.so what are his rules??"said kriya

"Ill tell u the rules!" rey stepped in .
"you need professionals for that work rite?'

"ya, ur absolutely right!! totally!!"
"par shayad tum kuch bhul gaye ho!...ur not the g.s"

"umm...ii"rey tried to say something

"oh oh ya rite...shayad tumhe mere bina post handle nahi kar paaye"

"maaaii..."" rey again tried to say something

"ya phir ...reyyy meri itne yaad aae ki tumne meri post leli ags ban gae!" she exclaimed

"shut up baatcuuter"

"kyo shut up kyo"

"maine kaha isliye!!"

"ohhh kyo? abhi tak mujhe apna assistant samja hai kya??"
"
"

"""""phir suru ho gaye""""said sharon""""i knew ye log kuch aasa hi karege""""

"guyyys guyyys relax!" swayam stood up between rey and kriya."chill"
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"kriya ur such an awsome dancer v.p sir ek baar me maan jaege. we need u for the upcoming event where we hv to
present diff dance styles . Ill tell u later more about it.Pehle v.p sir se baat karte hai!"swayam explained

"Come kria"Swayam said "sharon i guess we need u here.Rey tu bhi."

Kriya gave a disgusting look to rey. rey gave an "as if look" to her

"guysss tum chalo i shall call tanni , i think she needs to be present" Swayam said

"NO." Sharon said
"wo kisi trainer ko dhundne gai hai . U remember na we promised her we'll take her in team
after a good performance" said sharon. she dint look too happy saying that.

They went to v.p sir and all looked sad when they returned to the rehersal hall

"kya hua ??"

"we cant take more that 12 danceres for the championship!"said swayam

"ha ok na we hv 10. rimi is ill. Vishaka and Kria can be accomodated. V.P sir ne vishaka ko toh pehle se hi
acoomodate kar rakha hai!"Neha said

"No acually guys . Tanni is in ,we promised her. kria ko lene ke liye tanni ko nikalna hoga!"sharon said

"ha toh nikal do na.kaha Kria kaha Tanni"vicky sid

"I am up with kria . she is deserving" sharon said . she looked at swayam and said in her heart " srry swayam u noe she deserves it"

"nooo guysss u cant do this . U just can't." Tanni came in.

everyone stood stuned. kria was totally disturbed with all this.Rey looked at kria he knew she was tensed after all
this was about dance . he knew the diff. in what dance ment for taani and what it ment for her.

"you can't do this u cant...how dare u guyss. How dare u . U promised me. Mai din raat mehnat kar rahi hu.
isss ek ladki ke liye tul log esa nahi kar sakte" Tanni shouted

"Mind it!" sharon said"Mind ur language"

"No im the G.S mai dance team band kardugi. u cant...u .cc"Before she could finish rey stepped in.

He holded her tightly"hey relax, y r u shouting . tumhare saath kuch galat nahi hoga...this is not about u ...dis is about...DD"

"No nO"tanni wouldn't listen

Tears ran over kria's eyes. That was Dance .She could never imgaine that this would happen on the 1st day. she would hv to get
into trouble to be in the dance team she made and what more Rey ...Rey consoling someone elese.

"excuse me guys" she ran out

"kria .. " rey went behind her.

Tanni was about to go behind them ''reyyy..."
But sharon stopped her" Rey need space tanni. Let them talk please. Trust me it is good for all including u!"

Tanni ran...Swayam stood their silent. He couldn't understand anything. Kria his best friend was upset.His sister's Bf went behind her.
His sister was heat broken and His love was supporting rey.But more painful was that he knew what was rite.

Swayam went tensed..."swayam" sharon shouted...but then she stopped herself she knew he needed space.

Kria sat on the stairs of the firescape.Rey entered.

"Please rey...ch"Before kriya could say
"chale jaie, i wanna stay alone, mai tekk hu rite?"Said rey.He came and sat beside her.

"Kria dont get sad nothing has happend!just nothing...tumne jis dance team ko banaya,us dance team me aane ke liye u
don't need to think"Rey said consoling.It was out of his mind that he decided to stay away.But he was at the rite place ,doing the right thing
"Listen kria tension mat lo! We just need to make thinks work"Rey continued
"Kria sabko pata hai what dance is to u and tanni, tanni ko dance sirf isliye sikhna hai so that she can get into group"

"Kria are u lising??"rey said tensed"ok i shall leave".Rey got up .he looked at her waiting for her reply .the he slowely opened the door.

"Rey ...one question" Finally kria said softly."Kya maine wapis aake thek kiya?''

Rey stood still . He came back sat near her. Kria looked at him slowely.Rey firmly held her face with both his hands! With his right
Hand he pushed her hair back and wiped her teardrop.They both could see themselves in each other's eyes!

"hey . hey ofcouse yes babes. ofcouse yes . i guess thats the bestest thing uve done in a long time.I noe its for Dance ! and onone can
steal dance from Kria"

"Thanks" She said . Then studdenly a discomfort arised . She held her face back. Rey slowely took his hands back

"You noe what , tumhare achanak jaane se sab ka kya haal hua " he said" Aur koi to jina hi bhul gaya tha"

"kon" She said looking into his eyes
A pure silent . Both knew who was KON ! But rey sammerd back and said"Sab"

"Weanking ki cap. unka sab kuch chala gaya" The silence became a loud.
"Swayam ki bestfriend chaligae, uski zindgi ruk gai"

"aut umhe pata hai sabse zyada asar kisepe hua" He said Seriously

"kispe?" asked kria

"SHARON " He repiled "uska toh jine ka maksad hi chin gaya...uski life me spice hi nahi raha ..bechari kise lade?"

Pure silence. and a studden laughter .both laughed.They both raised their hands to give a high figh,but then suddenly stopped.

Again a silence arouse . then rey's phone rang. he looked at it.

"sharon ka message tha v.p sir ne bulaya hai . lets go"said rey

They both headed towards v.p sir's cabin where they camt to know that after seeing kria's latest dance performances . v.p sir had decided to put her into the team for sure! and if they wanted taani they had to remove someone elese. But rey cleared that he will talk to taani but they have their final 12 for the contest . Kriya gave him a wonderful smile :)

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guys please comment and like if u like:)

and please tell should i complete this os in another 4-5 chap. or make it a big one?

and for updates buddy me :)

hope u liked it
thanks for reading!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Loved ur update...
and espically the role that sharon is playing!!

please cont soon and pm me :} ill buddy u!

n about ur continuation n think u can extend it more that 4-5 chap.

we love to read about kriyanssh!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
nice one...!!

i guess u can take taani's track in a better way.., no offence its just purely my suggestion😊
Edited by rashmi24sya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

nyce..😊

this part is even gud in length 😃

kahan kriya .. kahan taani 🤢

i'm glad to see sharon supporting kriya 😛

awww... rey is manaofying her 🤗

jis team ko usne banaya.. usme aane se usse koi nhi rok sakta... proud of u rey 👏

yes... kriya in 🥳

& taani out 😈

hahaha... vo kya replace karegi kisiko 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
awesum part..👏👏
Loved it...👍🏼

Kriya seriously doesnt need
any one's permission to join
d team created by her...😃

Arrgghh Taani kyun
hamesha beech mein aati hai...😡

Do cont soon...
n thnks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Hey ...
Great part ...
Loved it ...
Kriyansh scene was very nice ...
Waiting for more ...
Continue soon ...

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