|'TIME FOR OLD D3' WELCOME KRIA|SS part.3 updated!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Note: This ss is wriiten as keeping sneha as sharon in mind ...hope that helps u all to read further! Thanks ... u noe all others!





Their they were "party party" all the night!!!
there were the d3 gang!! that was their life after winning dance championship!!!
there lit the beautiful campfire!
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swayam looking at sharon ... She was the real eternal beauty sometimes he wondered to himself tht how could someone luk soo beautiful?!...sharon was trying the best she could to not look into his buning eyes... of course she couldnt after what she had done to him! she was soo guilty and the fact that he still loved her soo much just teared her soul apart!

Just then a car stopped by the place!
there came a bubbly girl jumping!!
"u did u guyys .. congrats!" said vishakha

then a beautiful smile lit on everyone's face the in no time they all surrounded her! neha to be the first!...after all weakinglinggg girls!

" i have a surprise " she said " come on kriyya!"

ya, now that was the surprise their came kriya!

NEHA: kriya!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( hug )
SWAYAM:...kr ... kriya!!! ( the cute tight hug of bffs)

kriya looked beautiful... she looked as if she had transfered herself into someone elese ... yup she looked hot ... she looked happening!

but her eyes searched for someone!!! Someone she dint see since ages... someone she was dying to look at!

On the other side tanni stood stunned to see everyones love for kriya!! Of course she had to be stunned !! She Knew that rey's friends had never really exceped her... she would be oblized if she could get even half of tht love!

One more soul was stunned !!!!!
their stood the stuned rey!!!!!!!

his eyes couldn't believe it ... he saw her ... he saw kriya!...something pirced inside!...his eyes turned red...n tear drop coming out...kriy..kriyya said his shivvering lips!! kriyaaa...he was mesmerised!...

he took a step forward .. just then...

(please pm me if u like n do comment...srry for any inconvinence caused!)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing intro..
Louisans win d championship?? Umm.. NDC??
Swaron havin thr moment.. Awww 😳
Vishakha's thr.. Woaaahhh.. Tht too wid Kriya.. Now thts a news..

Kriya's eyes r searching fr someone.. Tani stunned to c d Love for kriya.. Reyaansh all stunned.. His shiverin lips calling kriya.. Loved it !
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

Amazing intro..
Louisans win d championship?? Umm.. NDC??
Swaron havin thr moment.. Awww 😳
Vishakha's thr.. Woaaahhh.. Tht too wid Kriya.. Now thts a news..

Kriya's eyes r searching fr someone.. Tani stunned to c d Love for kriya.. Reyaansh all stunned.. His shiverin lips calling kriya.. Loved it !
Update soon 😊


thank u soo muchh...n ya forgot to mention...its ntc that they won!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good and interest... continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazinggg... cntn soon n pm me:-P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome
wow
looks interesting
looking forward to the update
plzz -pm me when u upadte
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc intro..
Do continue soon n pls pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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then...😕 pls update soon 😊 PM me😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pg.2 ( hope u like)

rey took a step forward towards kriyaa...

he dint think for a while who was there??
what will everybody think ??
how will taani recat??

tanni constantly looking at rey!
so was sharon!

he just knew that was their moment and no one can take it away!!
but just as he was about to touch to kriya...
kriya took a step back!! silently...turned her head away!!!!
rey paused at that sight!!!!
(their was pure silence!)
taani couldn't resist!
she went near kriya
TAANI:hey!!! im taani ...im rey's...g
SHARON:swayam's sister!
(sharon stepped in to rey's rescue! she knew rey's condition!)
rey stood quiet keeping his head down!
kriya looked at rey and said:she is rey's girlfriend!
rey looked up at her...straight into her eyes ... he could feel her pain as he had the same
(bg piya o re piya
piya re piya re piya)
KRIYA:guyss i guess it's late!! i should be going!mama ko unpack karne me help karni hai
don't worry well meet tomorrow in st. louis! ive joined!
everyone looks happy and releaved
except taani
kriya got into the car...n rey was constantly looking at her he knew nothing was going to remain the same!

(kriya's home)
kriya was in her room
she was sitting near window
she thaught: pata nahi kal kya hoga
par itna pata hai ki ab meri life koi nahi controll kar sakta
im here to follow my passion my dance!!!
kise aur ke bare me mai nahi sochugi
tommorow is a big day...
rey ab aap meri life me nahi honge!
kabhi nahi!
jab app mujhe 2 month me bhula sakte hai toh mai bhi aapko bhula sakti hu!

any ways im here st. louis!!!!!!!!
kriya is back!

(sharon's house)

sharon(sneha plz)
was sitting on the stairs
she was thinking about rey!
thaught: i noe rey loves her! but maybe he dosen't know!
par swayam ???? what about him taani is his sister.whom will he support!
anyways kriya is back
liFe is back to becoming intersting!

(rey's house)
rey thinking while punching his bag!
thinking about the beautiful days with kriya
but then he remembered the day when kriya dumped him!

kyo aae ho tum kriya kyo?
life was perfect!
mai tuhme bhul raha tha!
then y?
but not this time
pichle baar ki tarah i wont let u play with my emotions!
not like last time !
not like the last time!


he sat down ... his eyes all red

everyone was waiting for tomorrow!


(hope u like plz comment...if u do thanku!..srry for any innconvinence caused!)
Edited by llyrics - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing chapter
loved how sharon rescued rey
but us ***** taa----- ko hamesha apni taang beech main ghusani hoti hain...
whatever i dont wanna talk bout that gril!!!!
loved the update
thank you for the pm

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