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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi people..😛

happy mother's day..😊

i tried an os for the first tym spcly for mother's day.. 😳

hope u'l like it though it contain less kriyaansh...😃

n if u got any suitable title for it do tell me..😛

point to be noted davik is kriyaansh's son😉

enjoy😃


'do u know me' i asked..bt didn't get any response

'u belive me maa? where's is he n my son' i further continued..

the woman look at me with teary eyes...she had opened the door a chink..i came closer to hug

her..when she move a li'l backward...

'no i don't know u'

'maa i'm u'r kri..'

before i can complete the door was closed..i went towards the window but the same woman

closed it n put the curtains down...as if she was hiding sumone from me...

i turned to leave bt i was so tired n lazy to move so i sat on the bench nearby...with my head in my

hands...

'y always me' i feel like crying at that movement...i was missing my son n him...the past 5 years

only i know what i have gone through..i want to c them just once...just b'coz i was a star i can't

meet him neither to my child as per my mom's orders..i know it was mistake to have a child at

17+ bt i just happened...i luved him so much n the same goes for him..but the parents they never

understand..is only way to be away is rite? y?(just a fiction dn't take it serius plz😃) i can't meet

the most imp. persons of my lyf just b'coz of this star tag which my mom gave to me just to earn

money..not caring for me...n wht will rey's family think about me..dat tym i left n now suddenly

came back..to take away there son again when they need him most in there old age...

"such a b*tch i'm"n tears automaticaly flowed down my eyes..i felt like the thing they show in

movies is so true for me..at this tym

p.s: plz play this song..Luka Chupi Bahut Hui


luka chupi bahut hui samne aa jana
kaha kaha dhunda tujhe
thak gayi hai ab teri maa


she sang while luking at the door may be if her son came n console her,hug her once..

aaja sanjh hui mujhe teri fikar
dhundhla gayi dekh meri najar aa jana
aaja sanjh hui mujhe teri fikar
dhundhla gayi dekh meri najar aa jana


she was carving to have just one look of him..she cried...
when she heard a male singing..she luk here n there to see who it was n finally found him..her son

kya batau bat kaha hu mai
yaha udne ko mere khula aasma hai


he was running at the terris frm sumone...singing these lines..
she smiled seeing him n was about to call him when he saw her one n only his love...she saw him
"rey" she whispered

tere kisso jaisa bhola salona jaha hai

rey sang this...moving behind his son to feed him food..

yaha meri patang ho befikar ud rahi hai ma

the child took his kite n give it a flight n look at rey for him to feed him...

p.s: rey is his mom n dad for the child...u'l gt to know later all the things...

dor koi lute nahi bich se kate na

davik pouted seeing his kite tear n going away frm him..

aaja sanjh hui mujhe teri fikar
dhundhla gayi dekh meri najar aa jana


rey pulled his cheek n hug him n make him sat down nearby...

teri rah take ankhiya
jane kaisa kaisa howe jiya

rey sang remebering his love..tears formed in his eyes n heard sumone singing the same..both child n father luk here n there to saw the person singing...

teri rah take ankhiya
jane kaisa kaisa hoye jiya


kriya sang the same...finally rey n davik spoted her both luk at each other n a smile crept on the three faces..
davik ran down...shouting
'muma'

ho dhire dhire aangan utre andhera



she saw him running downstairs n sang there lines

mera deep kaha
dhalke suraj kare ishara
chanda tu hai kaha
mere chanda tu hai kaha


she sang these lines searching for her child as he didn't reach down till now..may be someone had stopped him from meeting her or he didn't want to meet her

luka chupi bahut hui samne aa jana
kaha kaha dhunda tujhe
thak gayi hai ab teri maa

she sang these lines finaly braking down n crying hard...as her child didn't came out yet...

aaa.. jaaa sanjh huiii muj mujhe he teri fikar

dhundhla gayi dekh meri na najar aa jana

she sang crying n sat on the ground still crying...n coughing badly


aaja sanjh hui mujhe teri fikar
dhundhla gayi dekh meri najar aa jana


rey came towards her with there child...n sang these lines luking at her almost aftr 5 yrs...n smiling through his tears...kriya saw theem n was about to hug davik
when he ran frm there..it hurt her n saw him cuming again with a water bottle...


kaise tujhko dikhau yaha hai kya
maine jharne se pani maa tod ke piya hai
gucha gucha kayi khwabo ka

davikdrank the water as he was panting hard.. frst n then offer her..she hugged him to the earniest n kissed his whole face then drank the water..frm davik's hand as he insisted


uchal ke chua hai
chaya bhali ye bhali dhup yaha hai
naya naya sab kuch hai maa

davik jumped happily finally seeing his maa for the first tym,,. as he had seen her pictures only...in his father's mobile...as she left them when he was just of 2 days


fir bhi lage bin tere mujhko akela
aaja sanjh hui mujhe teri fikar
dhundhla gayi dekh meri najar aa jana


rey bent down to reach his family level tears formed in his eyes...

aaja sanjh hui mujhe teri fikar
dhundhla gayi dekh meri najar aa jana


kriya sang these lines wiping rey's tears n rey to did the same..n trio shared a fmily hug...davik broke the hug while kriyaansh were still hugging each other n crying bitterly...

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they sat at the sam bench where kriya was sitting...kriyaansh were luking at each other n davik

was sitting b/w them tryink to seek there attention...finaly getting no attention davik spoke..

'maa mei bhi yha hu..".he said shaking both of them..

kriyaansh luked at him n smiled..

'maa aap kaisi ho? n itni der mujse milne kyu nhi aayi? papa apko itna miss krte hai..n mei bhi'

davik said inocently..

'me too beta..aab muma aapko n papa ko kbhi chod ke nhi jayegi"she kissed his forehead n

luked at rey who was already smiling n enjoying seeing the mom son relationship

"tum" they heard a manly voice which was familiar to them

the trio got up frm there places while davik hugged kriya by her waist...fear was visible on kriya's

face..rey squeezed her hand to assure her he's there for her...

"tum yhan kya kar rhi ho..aur rey golu ko leke aandar jao.."the man said angrily..

(i know golu amar ka nickname but i love it so used here)

"papa"kriya called (cut by)

mei tumhara papa nhi hu samji tum"man replied

"but papa" rey was about to say when kriya squeezed his hand stopping him..

"tumne suna nhi aandar jao aur tum is ghar se bahar' said rey's dad angrily..

"nhi mei akele nhi jaunga..maa ko leke jaunga vrna nhi"davik said

"golu ye teri maa nhi hai,tere papa ki abhi tak shadi nhi hui.."rey's dad replied while kriyaansh

looked at him in disbelif controling there laugh..

hayee bichare bache ko kya sikha rhe hai🤣

"chup..reyaansh aaj hum tumhari liye ladki dkhne ja rhe hai..toh tum aandar jake teyaar ho jao

thodi der mei nikalna hai.."his dad said n made his way to his home..

kriya was realy hurt to know that ...she was luking down..while rey hugged her caressed her hair

"dn't worry everything will be fy9 ..come inside" he said holding her hand..

bt she didn't move..he tried again bt failed ..he luked at her n smiled mischieviously n cuddled her

in his arms like holding a baby n start moving inside ..kriya alot to get out of his grip but failed

while davik followed them all the way jumping n claping smiley smiley..

they went inside shocking rey's parents...n rey directly took her in the temple which they had in

there a home a li'l onehe left her down n hold her hand while kriya was luking at him

confused..finaly he took the sindoor n filled her maang..rey's parent arrived there at the same

tym..his mom was happy n his dad was just shocked while davik was dancing chanting "aaj

mere muma papa ki shadi hai" kriya was too shocked while rey was smiling seeing there son..

"reyaansh" rey's dad shouted making everbody mum n luking at him...he moved towards him n

was about to slap him wen kriya came in fron n hen davik ..he luked at the 3 n left..whereas rey's

mom was very happy..she wished them hugged them n wiped kriya's tears..the married couple

took her blessing while davik to do the same.. n they chuckled seeing him..soon rey's mom left

with davik saying "sab kuch theek ho jayega"..taking the chance rey closed the door n pulled

kriya towards him n kissed her to the earniest holding her waist...kriya to responded back equally

n they broke it due to the knock at the door..it was davik who want to spend some quality tym with

his mom..aftr that they were together though his dad didn't talk to them but seeing his grand

son happy..he accepted them n they lived happily..exept reyaansh as this mother son relation always disturbed him..spending tym with kriya😆



finally ho gya...

hope u like it..

plz like n coment..

new readers for pm's buddy me

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RiyaArShaKapoor thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res for di,aanchi,mannu di,shelly,mads,kusha,bhai n babhi😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

unres


awww hoe sweeet


loved it yaar


but kriya kahan thi ab tak vo samjg nahi aaya


mast tha

Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

unres
Awww it ws too cutee
The song was good and the way u decribed it
loved it!
liked the way rey filled her maang with sindoor infront of his dad
loved the fmily bonding
nicee nicee 😉
Edited by shelly_Arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww so sweet😊 ...just loved it 😛...HAPPY MOTHERS DAY😃 ... Splly to my all momzzz the pointed one RIYA KAPOOR meri chotisiii naughty mommm😉... and mummy vr s romanceee 😡 ...mujey romance story chahiyee mummaaa i am 18 ths augst i vil be 19 or aap ye beytii keyliye ek romance story nhi lik sakthey...😭 romance romance or romance... kuch b tho meri mumma s so suprbbb ⭐️ vo jo liktha hey vo mujey koob pasandh hey I LOVE U MUMAAA ❤️👍🏼 ... I wish next year also i would like to wish u the same ... everythng s in godzz handdd...OR aanchi sorry aaj mothersday hey na isliye ithna beda comment i vil u too also a big cmmnt on sibllng day oky😊...tccc
Edited by vaishukarthika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chota packet bada dhmaka...😆

amazing work sis...
u wrote it very well...👏

happy mother's day...😃
Edited by .....pujan..... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
Unres
Really well written.
Cute n simple... 😊
Loved d way rey put sindoor on kria in frnt of her dad.
D bond was really nice.
Gud work Riya!!!😊
Edited by ayu_kriyaansh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vaishukarthika

awww so sweet😊 ...just loved it 😛...HAPPY MOTHERS DAY😃 ... Splly to my all momzzz the pointed one RIYA KAPOOR meri chotisiii naughty mommm😉... and mummy vr s romanceee 😡 ...mujey romance story chahiyee mummaaa i am 18 ths augst i vil be 19 or aap ye beytii keyliye ek romance story nhi lik sakthey...😭 romance romance or romance... kuch b tho meri mumma s so suprbbb ⭐️ vo jo liktha hey vo mujey koob pasandh hey I LOVE U MUMAAA ❤️👍🏼 ... I wish next year also i would like to wish u the same ... everythng s in godzz handdd...OR aanchi sorry aaj mothersday hey na isliye ithna beda comment i vil u too also a big cmmnt on sibllng day oky😊...tccc

its ok di but aap jis 😡se romance kki aas lagaye baithe ho agar usne full on romantic update de di toh hi kehna and mujhe mommy nahi banana main sibling hi theek hun ye title jaan ke liye best hain kyun riyu😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww... kriyaansh ka baby son..😛

miss his mumma alot 😊

wat a coincidence...

wen she was searching for them .. begging her mom 😳

she found them... 🤗

he marries her right there 👏

nycee... 😃


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aanchal_Kreya

its ok di but aap jis 😡se romance kki aas lagaye baithe ho agar usne full on romantic update de di toh hi kehna and mujhe mommy nahi banana main sibling hi theek hun ye title jaan ke liye best hain kyun riyu😆

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