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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Hayeee! ❤️Meri behna Itna Acha Update! Waah! Manna parega Ur Superrbb Writer!👏
See I told You You Should Write & belive me It's Mindblwoing! ❤️

Ghosh! Virika Meeting & Dey fall Aww! I can Imagine That Scene🤪
While You were Discibing Jeevika I Too felt Like Watching Jeevika 😃
Aww! behna Just perfect Update! 👏❤️
Now I really can't Wait So remmber I Want jaldi Update Werna I'll Keep Buging You!😛



-MeHaK-
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Awesome update yaar!
Virika meet is no less than a fairy tale 😳
Fantastic
Thanks for the pm!
Loved it
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
omg i love this one <3
abhi rima viren and jeevika <3
love them
lats im soo happy ur back :D :D
update sooon coz viren is on jeevika :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
BODYGUARD whn will u update jaldi karo😒
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
When will you update????

Missing the story

Please I want a update

Please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
CHAPTER 2

jeevika was on the ground and her eyes were closed, viren was on top of her and looking at jeevika very clearly first he looked at her lips then her beautiful hair and then his eyes were stuck to her eyes which were closed but he was really curious to see her eyes

jeevika(in her mind) - what the hell is going on, first the guys of these college were staring at me and now m in ground and the most weird thing is that a guy is on my top.Should i open my eyes ? god please i dont want to get embarrass in front of everyone. after some time she opened her eyes(viren was waiting for this moment only😳)
she was looking at her right and left side and everyone who was presented at the college ground was only looking at her and it made her nervous.She was blinking her eyes continuously in a hope that whats happening around her isnt true but sadly or u can say luckily its all true

viren was just staring at her beauty especially her eyes

jeevika(in her mind) now i should see his face,
then finally jeevika saw that guy who was looking at her continuously and smiling.
Viren(in his mind) she is gorgeous jeevika(in her mind) why he is smiling 😕 anyways his smile is really cutee

they lost in each other for some time and first viren came back to his senses
he waved his hand in front of her eyes
viren- hello miss come back from ur dreamland and if ur staring session is over, can we get up now as i cant stay like this for whole day

jeevika- excuse me! what did u say?😕
viren- r u deaf? 😆
jeevika- nope i guess u r! now just get off from me

v- now i think i dont mind to be in this position for lifetime 😉 i guess u also dont mind (he said while coming close to her left ear)

j- u cheap ! and she pushed viren

v-can i help u miss?
he offered his hand towards her
j-no thanx
she got up by herself
v- attitude haan !
j- yeah but less than u
v- ohh really ?? anyways i dont want any argument with a beautiful girl. I guess u r new here as i havent seen u in the college before

j- beautiful ?? u said this to me
v- no i said this to that girl (he pointed at a random girl)
ofcourse its u

abhi who was standing there since 10-15 min and observing VirIka
abhi- shall i say something ? 😛
viren and jeevika together - yeah ofcourse abhi

viren- u know his name ?
j- yeah he is my childhood friend !
a- yeah viren she is right.She is my childhood friend about whom i was telling u 😊

j- hey viren nice name m jeevika
v-hey jeevika thanx
and they shake hands 😃


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Edited by latika_AshVik - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
ressy
Unres
Yippie me d firstone
Party...😃
Luvd d update dear...
Osmm...
Viren on top of jeevika😳
Luvd deir cute nok jhoks...
Update asap
Eager to readmore
Edited by mehakLUVSvirika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Resy!😎
Cafe Latte! L.G.! Latii! Latz! Lats! Latika! 🤗
I'm back so I'll be commenting on all your updates from now on! 😃
So, sorry I couldn't do it previously, due to my exams! 🤢
Finally they are over so yayy!
The story sound pretty amazing!
I love the plot, pretty interesting.
Great update.😳
Edited by Kashy15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Finallly the update has come yayy [:D/]
it was just mindblowing
100/100 latika ji 😃
virika on top of each other
jeevs thinking whether to open her eyes or not 😆
loved their cute fight ❤️
thanks for the PM 😃
and yes update sooon 😉
Edited by 9999P - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
res

woww dis was amazing sis
aww dey stared at each other
lol dey r nok jok was lovely😆😆
n d shake hand at last 😳
simple superb
but plzz give long update

Edited by rocksravya11 - 12 years ago

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