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--Ayesha-- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Wohooo my BODYGUARD😎 back wth a new ss
luvd d intro n prologue 😃
Seems quite interesting hunnn.
Continue sooon .
Will b eagerly waiting for chapter1
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
CHAPTER 1

it was a bright sunny day viren and abhi both were in a canteen and talking about their college assignments...!
viren- so abhi have u decided what u r going to do in ur assignment ? any topic ?
abhi- not yet viren and he starts smiling...!
viren- okk u havent decided yet...but there is no need to smile soo stop smiling
abhi- ya i know viren but can u please turn back...and look at those girls...
viren turned back and saw that there was a group of few girls who were sitting little far from viren-abhi's table and looking at viren not looking at viren but they were drooling over him and he could see the desire in their eyes for one elying kiss from viren...

viren already knew that every girl of the college is crazy for him sooo he waved hand to those girls and gave him flying kiss and the state of the girls was very much clear...they were dead...it was like their life has been complete...!

viren- ohhh soo this was the reason of ur smile
abhi- sometime dont u feel like a star as everyone loves u and crazy for u especially girls
after hearing this he lost in his thoughts
viren - never abhi everytime what we see is not true... i dont think soo that everyone loves me
abhi - what happened to u viren suddenly touching stuff ha
viren came out from his thoughts
viren- hunnn??
abhi- u said na ki everyone doesnt love u !!

viren changed the topic
viren - ohhh yaa actually i was saying ki what u think that those girls love me... hummm i dont think sooo... they just love me what i m from outside not what i m from inside... they r just crazy for my looks not for the person i really m
abhi- viren when u have started thinking about all this stuff... r u viren na or m i dreaming !!??

viren - abhi whats wrong in talking about this thing m saying the truth...
abhi - okkk dude i understand... soo these girls dont love the real viren thats fine but what about rima viren...is she also doesnt love u ??
viren - r u kidding right ? rima and i no way yaar she and i r just good friends... and she doesnt love me i know that..!
abhi - really but it looks totally different viren... may be u dont love her but m sure she loves u i can see the love in her eyes for you...!
viren- stop it abhi u r thinking soo much... hey look at that girl she is hot na (he said looking at some random girl coming towards the canteen)
abhi- u always change the topic viren
viren- tell me something new... now look at that girl yaar
abhi- tu kaabhi nahi shudharega na??
viren- never
abhi just smiled
viren- shit u missed that girl she is gone...!

now rima entered in the canteen and came towards viren and abhi and sat beside viren
rima- hey viren
viren- hey sweety u r looking beautiful and purple really suits u...
rima- hey abhi
abhi- hey rima.. okkk viren i should leave now u guys carry on
viren- abhi wait yaar where r you going ?
abhi- sorry viren i forgot to tell u that my childhood friend is coming in the college today for the first time...so i have to go to recieve her... she must be waiting for me at the entrance gate
viren- really why didnt u tell me before ?
abhi- its nothing important to tell u about
viren- reallyyy so ur friend is a girl or a boy?
abhi- girl
viren- ahhaaa chuparustam u r...thats why u didnt tell me ha... dont worry m not gonna flirt with your girlfriend
abhi- she is not my girlfriend she is just a friend
rima- abhi its great that ur friend is a girl now i will make a new friend okk soo abhi when she'll come in the college then i want to meet her and u'll do that for me now abhi u guys carry on as i gotta go its my lecture time bye viren(she kissed him on his cheek)... bye abhi...and abhi dont forget okkk
abhi- bye rima yaaa dont worry
viren- bye rima see u later... now tell me she is just ur friend or something else...
abhi- viren stop it its not like that
viren- sooo tell me the truth
abhi- the truth is that she is just my friend nothing else now m going to recieve her soo m leaving
viren- wait yaar...itni bhi kya jaldi hai... m also coming with u i want to meet ur friend too
abhi- u dont have to m going alone

just then one girl entered in the college... it was the moment when every guy of the college was just looking at that girl... it seems like some fairy is came down from the heaven in this earth... it was only viren and abhi who hadnt saw her yet... they were busy in their argument m coming with u...no u r not..m coming with u...no u r not...! they had no idea that while arguing this thing they came out from the canteen and then they were in college ground...!
jeevika was full confused where to go or where to not...she was scared tooo it was herfirst day of college and every student was looking at her like she is an alien...every guy was mesmerized with her beauty and every girlfriend of those guys were jealous as their respective partners were looking at her...!
finally jeevika saw abhi who was also coming with viren towards her and abhi also saw her...but viren was still arguing with abhi...!
viren- abhi m going to meet her and u cant stop me... he was saying this while going towards jeevika facing abhi
jeevika's phone fall down soo she bent down to pick it...just then viren reached very close to jeevika...jeevika picked her phone...!
abhi- viren turn back !!!!
he turned and they collided... jeevika was on the ground and viren was on top of her...!!







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thanx guys for ur previous comments...love u all

-Latika/Lats


Edited by latika_AshVik - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
UnRes😎

Awesome update bodyguard😃
viren n his naughtyness flirting around wth girls😆
luvd viren n abhi covo.
Hope viren find his love soon jeevika😉
finally virika meet n collided viren on top 😳

continue sooon bosyguard
Edited by Virika-luv - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
res
unres
ayu sis u resed bfre me

wow i luved it]
aww viren charm everyone fida on him☺️
hope dis rima will nt create prblms fr VirIka 😡
aww d collided ..
Jeevs z pari😉
viren on top 😳
i cant wait fr d next update👏
luvely dovely🤗
Edited by rocksravya11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
amazing yaar..!!
would love to see viren falling in love with jeevs.. 😊
update soon..
thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
I loved it
hahaah rima abhi and what not
jeevika's here
yayyy
first meeting mein hi a fall
Not bad sissy
Lol
Thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Awesome
First meeting aur romance shoro
Amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
UnRes
wooow great updates lats loved viren and abhi convo the way they understand each other hayyyee virika meeting was amazing hope viren fall for jeevi
Edited by Sabapari - 12 years ago
Anees. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
wow amazing yaar just love it n hayee they both fall awww

thanks fr the pm n update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
wow wowww n wowww!!!!! its soo awesomee.intro fab..loved the 1st chapter...looking forward for it... reallyy would love to see this relationship of virika!!!!

keep continuinggg..u r doing a great job... :D

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