Mohini ff 'New Beginning' - Page 23

Originally posted by: rajshrip

forum lovely update,me loved the scene whereagantuk moves meera's hair from her face and aww meera gets shy.

looolagantuk sneezing was fun.

As usual liked, today's update.👍🏼

Rain sequence was the Charm part, here.🥳 So, his Bike got jammed in the Rain.🤣 I liked that, "bike, isn't too in a hurry to say her Good bye." What happed, happed for Good. Yes, It was.. Because, they get to spent some time with each other, during the walk.😎 Though, they kept 'Moun-Vrat' but, I really liked that, as sometimes Silence tells things better than discourse. That's what happend in the end, The eye lock, and It came across like they could Read each other eyes.. That was wonderful.

When, His 'I'll-always-protect-you' pose came into the scene during the 'almost-car-hits-her' moment, I could only think about the "Shiv-protects-Sati" scenes, specially the scene where he saves her from Vrita Asur.😎

and.. After that... "The Sneeze" Played, safe... It was hilarious and truly Commendable!👏

Now, after connecting your whole story... It was an Absolute smash!🥳 Totally, Outstanding.
And, while auditing your whole update , I felt like a Movie Reviewer.🤣 But, It does worth it, as It truly was like a Movie.. You can imagine, every scene in front of your Eyes!⭐️

Originally posted by: MrToolConfuser

As usual liked, today's update.👍🏼

Rain sequence was the Charm part, here.🥳 So, his Bike got jammed in the Rain.🤣 I liked that, "bike, isn't too in a hurry to say her Good bye." What happed, happed for Good. Yes, It was.. Because, they get to spent some time with each other, during the walk.😎 Though, they kept 'Moun-Vrat' but, I really liked that, as sometimes Silence tells things better than discourse. That's what happend in the end, The eye lock, and It came across like they could Read each other eyes.. That was wonderful.

When, His 'I'll-always-protect-you' pose came into the scene during the 'almost-car-hits-her' moment, I could only think about the "Shiv-protects-Sati" scenes, specially the scene where he saves her from Vrita Asur.😎

and.. After that... "The Sneeze" Played, safe... It was hilarious and truly Commendable!👏

Now, after connecting your whole story... It was an Absolute smash!🥳 Totally, Outstanding.
And, while auditing your whole update , I felt like a Movie Reviewer.🤣 But, It does worth it, as It truly was like a Movie.. You can imagine, every scene in front of your Eyes!⭐️

Thanks, again for a Wonderful update, by the way, I was waiting for it from Monday itself. 😆

Abhi.. Next update ke liye Waiting.. Waiting.😎

Originally posted by: maluni

WOW...Superb...👏

<font size="3">Meera comes closer to Agantuk...
and hold his hand...
when i read this,i could only think of shiv-sati hand holding scenes specially d scene they sitting near riverside,after marriage...wow...super foru...😊

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but Agantuk saved her by pulling her aside...
this scene remind me of shiv pulled sati to protect her from vritasur...😳


Meera was in his arm...and he held her tightly...
she looked in his eyes..
wow wow wow foru...this moment i could only think of shiv-sati rain sequence...
u r superb dear...😊😊😊

eagerly waiting 4 d next update..
.i just want agantuk & meera meet next morning in d hospital,and seeing each other they sneezed again,can i get this scene in next update???😃

Originally posted by: chand1234

res fr cmnt :P

Edit:

A long update...yayyy!!!😃

aww...so this isn't a dream...yayy!!!!😳Holds his hand? This is too good to be true!Ohhlalal!!! Bike!!! Awieee!!!!😳😳My gosh...am going nuts...damn!!! Itne mein hi mai itni paagal ho gayi hun...aage kya haal hoga mera??😳😳Her hand on his shoulder n he smiling...awww!!!!☺️

Thank u bike , for not working! 😆They going walking is more romantic! That too he'll drop her home!😉😉itni door kyun walk kar rahe ho ji? aha...thanks totht car for coming by! lol...agantuk saving meera...eeks!!!!☺️I can imagine the scene! Meera in that white salvar...n mohu..n he saving her...hayeee!!!!! how romantic!!!!😃i so luv u n this ff!!!!😃"Tham jaaye...yeh jahaan...aur pal bhi theher jaaye.." same thing is happenening with my 2 lovers😳😳😳their first eyelock!!!

OMg...he complemented her!!! u r beautiful!!! hayyeee 😳u sneeze😡but it mite have been such a cute moment😳

Awww...lovely ending!!!! 😃

Please upd soon!😉

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Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Foru 🤗...thank u for the awesome update and PM...so many omg moments ...she holds his hand and asks him to drop her ...he holds her hand and takes her to the bike...she sits behind him and holds his shoulder...hayeee he smiles ...what a romantic bike my dear...it did not start 😃...alll the better for a long walk...awww our hero again saved her from the drunk driver...he holds her tight in his arms 😳...loved the music u used❤️...but kept remembering this song when u said the moment stopped for them

Kuchh na kaho kuchh bhi na kaho
Kya kehna hai kya sunna hai
Mujhko pata hai tumko pata hai
Samay ka ye pal tham sa gaya hai
Aur is pal mein koi nahin hai
Bas ek main hoon
Bas ek tum ho

Then he moves her hair and says u are the most beautiful girl i have seen... Meera all 😳...me all ...then they sneeze 😲...ufff Foru did u have to write that 😡😆...Finally they reach home...he so sweetly waits till she goes inside and sends the maid to tell him to go home...he looks at her standing at the window and smiles...wow Foru i was 😃 and thru out the update...simply superb part my dear 👏👏