Mohini ff 'New Beginning'

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@foram.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: Vabs
Foru

Fantastic update. But I want to know what happens next. I cannot wait for too long

thanks sahdna for your comment

will update soon

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Foram

@foram.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

thankyou all for reading and liking
and thanks for your precious comments guys

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@chand1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Please turn on your speakers...music playing!!😃

Edited by chand1234 - 12 years ago

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Foram

@foram.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

Street light goes off due to heavy rain and lightnening...

Meera comes closer to Agantuk...
and hold his hand...and ask him again to drop her home...

This time agantuk agrees...
he holds her hand and move towards his bike...

he sit on his bike and ask Meera to sit behind him...

She do so and hesistantly places her hand on his shoulder...
Agantuk smiles...

Meera : pls hurry up...
Agantuk: yeah
he tries to start bike... but it doesnt
(seem like bike too is not in a hurry to say her good bye😳😳😳)

Meera: what hapened???
Agantuk: sorry but dont know, bike is not starting,
i guess it is of no use now,
we have to go by walking...
Meera: what??? 😲😲😲😲😲
no...i want to reach home as early as possible
Agantuk: sorry i cant do anything...
we need to go by walking...i will be with you until you reach home..
Meera agrees...to this
they starts walking...
there was a 1feat distance between them..
(she was ahead and he accompained by walking behind her like a gentleman)
Meera was shivering due to the cold weather as she was wet in rain
even Agantuk was feeling cold...

suddenly a car passed by, the driver was drunk and lost control and
was about to hit Meera... but Agantuk saved her by pulling her aside...

Meera was in his arm...and he held her tightly...
she looked in his eyes...he was looking angrily towards that car...

suddenly he realised Meera was looking at him...
he too looked at her eyes which had something for him...
(may be a love... or just thanks for saving her)
and the moment stopped for them...

a beautiful bg music was playing in the bg in a house
were they were standing...

that made the atmosphere more romantic...
he moved the strip of hair which was coming on her face and put it behind her ears...

he held her cheek and said " you are the most beautiful girl i ever met"
Meera was all shy and forget eveything...

they came more closer...
and suddenly meera and agantuk sneezed at the same time...
and came out of trance...
they took back step...
Meera was unable to realise what happened
she started wlaking faster...
Agantuk too became staedy...and followed her...

he went with her unless she reached home properly...
he waited near gate unless she went inside...

he still waited there...
Meera saw her from her room's window...
asked maid to tell him that m fine and its too late ask him to go home

her maid came out and asked him to go home...as her mistress told her

he smiled and looked at her window
saw her standing

he waved his hand to say bye...and left😃😃😃😃😃

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Edited by foram. - 12 years ago

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Ria

@chand1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

res fr cmnt :P

Edit:

A long update...yayyy!!!😃

aww...so this isn't a dream...yayy!!!!😳 Holds his hand? This is too good to be true! Ohhlalal!!! Bike!!! Awieee!!!! 😳😳 My gosh...am going nuts...damn!!! Itne mein hi mai itni paagal ho gayi hun...aage kya haal hoga mera?? 😳😳 Her hand on his shoulder n he smiling...awww!!!! ☺️

Thank u bike , for not working! 😆 They going walking is more romantic! That too he'll drop her home! 😉😉 itni door kyun walk kar rahe ho ji? aha...thanks totht car for coming by! lol...agantuk saving meera...eeks!!!! ☺️ I can imagine the scene! Meera in that white salvar...n mohu..n he saving her... hayeee!!!!! how romantic!!!! 😃 i so luv u n this ff!!!! 😃 "Tham jaaye...yeh jahaan...aur pal bhi theher jaaye.." same thing is happenening with my 2 lovers 😳😳😳 their first eyelock!!!

OMg...he complemented her!!! u r beautiful!!! hayyeee 😳 u sneeze 😡 but it mite have been such a cute moment 😳

Awww...lovely ending!!!! 😃

Please upd soon!😉

Edited by chand1234 - 12 years ago

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sucheta

@kaatayani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

They sneezed! Aww! Imagined the scene!

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Foram

@foram.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: kaatayani
They sneezed! Aww! Imagined the scene!

m glad u likd and could relate and imagind the scene, it means i was able to convey what i wantd. Thank u suchi 🤗

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Silvy

@SilverBell

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Posted: 12 years ago

#218

Aww He Dropped Meera Home. That Was Sweet Of Him. There Arent Many Mohini FFs To Read. I want To Find Them And Read It.

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Foram

@foram.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: SilverFairy
Aww He Dropped Meera Home. That Was Sweet Of Him. There Arent Many Mohini FFs To Read. I want To Find Them And Read It.

thanks for liking and coment. And if u want i cn pm u the links to other ff's